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Viscet #2328

Postby Guest » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:56 am

    owner: WolfWinter (xx) (post)
    Name: Norman
    Gender: Male
    Gender for Breeding: Male
    Owned as of: 3/18/2018



    !! i'm so happy to post this babe for you guys! c:
    golly, three whole years. man, what a ride it has been! so excited to see us grow more <3

    aa, for this competition, I'd like to see a few things!
    I'd really like to see a story, can be anything CS appropriate! You have a maximum of 1000 words and minimum of 500.
    You also have up to four extras; one extra being 400 words or one piece of art of any kind. A comic with four panels counts as ONE extra.

    Do whatever you would like for the extras as well! Want to add onto your story? Go ahead! c:
    Also! You may go over the limit on ONLY the story (no extras) by no more than 100 words.

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    [b]username:[/b]
    [b]name:[/b]
    [b]gender:[/b]
    [b]gender for breeding:[/b]
    [b]story:[/b] [max. 1000 words, min. 500]
    [list]4 extras[/list]


    End date:
      March 12th, 2018 @ 11:59 pm Eastern
        - total of one extension allowed! c:


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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby G1 Sunstreaker » Wed Feb 21, 2018 9:37 am

mark? either to watch or try out, unsure yet :0
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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby dzo » Wed Feb 21, 2018 9:58 am

    username: ~prophecy~
    name: gemma lark
    gender: female
    gender for breeding: female
    story:
    What I am burying myself in is deeper than a coma,
    Harder to crawl out from than a dead man’s grave.
    These lies are only getting more intricate.
    They have to be.
    They keep piling on top of each other.
    It started out as a smile and a little wave hello.
    That was the first lie.
    I was not happy to be there nor did I want to greet the stranger.
    I saw him once and a while, he was always a mess.
    "You look well put together today sir, where are you headed off to?" I said
    That was the second lie.
    He was of course straightened out and stuff.
    Looked as if he actually put effort in his his appearance this day.
    But it was obviously a failed attempt.
    Mind you that I also had no interest in where he was going.
    He told me he had a business meeting.
    I told him thats cool.
    Another lie.
    It was not cool, just fascinating that someone like him had a business meeting.
    "What will you be getting today?” I asked.
    He told me a blueberry muffin.
    “Good choice. My favorite.”
    Once more a lie.
    I disliked blueberry muffins.
    He paid, and with the money I found a piece of paper.
    The paper had a phone number.
    I looked at it and falsely smiled to not be hurtful,
    Then gave him his muffin.
    I messaged him- a big mistake.
    We started talking.
    Lies after lies poured out.
    I was now an aspiring musician who loved the beach,
    I loved terrible puns and bad jokes.
    I was a horrible baker and hated my job at the cash register.
    This bakery was a nightmare to me.
    I hated sports.
    I was self conscious about my laugh and tusks.
    I told him all of this to appeal to him.
    I don’t know why. I guess I just wanted to seem interesting.
    Whatever he seemed to think about me I told him he was right.
    Whatever he showed interest in I said the same.
    Maybe it was because I felt bad for the guy?
    But whatever. None of this was me.
    I began to take notes on who I was pretending to be.
    I kept up the facade and built on the lies.
    He kept pushing me to actually meet him in person outside of work.
    I finally said yes.
    The lies just got worse.
    He bought us blueberry muffins.
    He tried to be funny the whole time.
    Turns out I’m good at faking a laugh.
    Or maybe I was laughing at how pathetic he was.
    Or maybe how pathetic I was.
    Whatever.
    I can’t tell the truth now.
    I am in too far deep.
    Plus… I have to admit.
    When you really get to know him,
    He is actually not that bad.
    He invites me over a lot.
    I have nothing to do a lot
    We never watch sports.
    If we ate food I occasionally mess something up on purpose.
    Just to hide my actual self.
    I ate so many blueberry muffins because of him.
    So much so that I ended up thinking they weren’t so bad.
    But as time went on, and muffins were consumed, I began to question.
    What are his intentions? Does he just want a friend?
    What does he think of me? Does he know I lied about everything?
    Maybe he thinks of me as more than a friend.
    Maybe I think of him as more than a friend.
    I always was good being on my own before.
    He is my only friend.
    Am I his only friend?
    He never talks about anyone else.
    I want to tell him the truth.
    I want to confess how I feel.
    But do I slowly change into my own self or do I admit small things?
    Have I begun cooking more and slowly learned how to cook better?
    Do I tell him that I have always been good at cooking?
    Do I drop my music and find a new passion?
    Do I admit I have no musical talent at all?
    I could either say I am learning things about sports and play dumb for a while or say I just wanted him to like me when I said I also dislike sports?
    What do I say?
    What do I do?
    I don’t know anymore.
    All I know is that I never thought we would talk for more than a week.
    All I know is that I never want to stop talking to him.
    All I know is that I never want him to hate me for how much I lied.

    How much I lied…
    I’m a bad person.
    He doesn’t deserve someone as bad as me.
    I can’t believe I have fooled him all this time.
    What would he think?
    Oh what a horrible thing I have done.
    How do I redeem myself?
    Oh how do I?!
    I must find a way…
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Postby lunala. » Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:46 am

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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby Guest » Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:06 am

    bump! c:
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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby Macyduke » Wed Feb 28, 2018 7:24 am

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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby Guest » Mon Mar 05, 2018 2:13 pm

juice box. wrote:
    bump! c:
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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby cyberdragon725 » Thu Mar 08, 2018 8:42 am

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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby WolfWinter » Thu Mar 08, 2018 9:00 pm

username: WolfWinter
name: Norman
gender: Male
gender for breeding: Male
story:
Everything was bright. This was all he knew. The harshness of the bright lights. The whirring of machines, the hum of voices just out of his sight. Then everything changed. A strange smell filled the air, it burned his nose and his lungs. He found that staying low to the ground and crawling over it was easier to breathe. One of the shadowy figures became corporeal. He recognized their scent, this one had always been nice to him. He somehow managed to get him onto his back enough to where he could drag the man with him. Coughing and groaning let him know that he was still with him.

Fresh air. It was just as much of a shock as the burning choking air had been. He only had enough time to see all the color. Then the man slid down his his side as the world went dark. He woke up in another white room, but it was different somehow. It was just as sterile, but not hostile, or empty. There was another bed, he recognized the scent. Strangers cloaked in white came in with clipboards. He tried to get away, but found he was strapped to the bed. Soothing hands brushed his fur and he was soon asleep again.

Voices woke him, something about a viscling. What was that? What did it look like? The familiar scent and voice soothed him, and he saw the man he had dragged to the fresh air. He was covered in stuff; some of it white, and others were brown. The white bits looked like they made it so he couldn't move. The man smiled down at him, and spoke to the doctor again. A soothing hand brushed his fur, and he slept again.

When he awoke, he was in a different room. It was an explosion of color. It was almost overwhelming. He also found that he wasn't tied down anymore. He gingerly got off the bed, and walked around. He breathed too quickly and it made him cough, that scared him. A friendly woman and man came in one of them set a tray of food on top of a thing. It looked like a table, but none he had seen before. The man was messing with something behind a curtain. He could smell something behind it, but he was too scared to go look. The food was enticing, and when he tasted it he couldn't believe it.

He had thought his food before had tasted good, but it tasted like nothing compared to this. He wolfed it down and waddled back to his bed to go sleep. The nurse smiled, and said something about children and their appetites. He didn't know what this meant. He was almost asleep when a loud clanging woke him. He looked towards the offending sound and saw something, or rather, someone. They looked like a little man. He slowly approached this strange man. Then the small man offered him the noisy thing.

"Haven't you ever seen a toy before?" the small man asked.

Toy? "What's a toy?" he asked.

"You can speak! I heard the nurses saying how the weren't sure if you could understand them, and said you might not be able to talk. Oh, and a toy is something you play with! Like this, see?" and the small man showed him what a toy was and how to play with it. It was a lot of fun.

Seeing that questions were okay, he decided to ask another, " why are you a small man?"

The small man started making loud noises, and he wasn't sure if he had upset the small man.

"No, silly! I'm a kid! A boy specifically. I'm a kid like you! Well, you'd be called a viscling," the boy said.

He also realized that the "viscling" the nurses mentioned earlier was him, he was was a viscling. Suddenly tired from all this new information, and still having a full belly, he crawled into his bed and promptly fell asleep.

The wonderful smell of scrambled eggs woke him up. He was learning rapidly. Every day he pestered the nurses and the doctors, asking about anything and everything he could think of. The boy, Kyle, was also happy to answer his questions. Kyle could read, and that's how he found out what his own name was. Norman. He like that name, because it was his. Actually, he liked names a lot. They made it so much easier to identify certain people. Like his doctor, Doctor Ruth. Or, Jacob, the man he had saved form the fire. That was another thing he had learned about; fire.

Jacob said he would take care of him now. Norman wasn't so sure, he didn't want to go back to the empty place. When he told Jacob this he just hugged him, and said he'd never have to go back there again. Norman liked Jacob. His right foot was a little funny, it was missing a few toes. Said that they had to be amputated due to a piece of metal falling on it before Norman could pull him out. That was something no one knew; just how he had managed to pull Jacob out. When they tested how much he could pull, as part of seeing how recovered he was, he couldn't even pull half of Jacob's weight on a good day.

When they went to their house, Norman was really excited. Jacob had let him pick the color of his room. He really liked the color called "magenta". It was like the colors on his body. His room had a big bed in it. And lots of toys, and books. Jacob had promised that he would teach Norman to read. Kyle came to visit sometimes. They played in his room, a lot.


Thinking back on it, despite his unusual beginnings, Norman's childhood wasn't all that bad.
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Re: Viscet #2328

Postby Guest » Sun Mar 11, 2018 1:52 am

    two days remaining in this competition! ^^;
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