[Wlyrout]

Good luck to all! I realize now that I messed up some of aethillie's lovely coding, so I apologize for that. Hopefully it won't be any more painful to read. x'D

[waterstar.]

oh man I just realized I didn't add in the image XD I hope my form is still valid ;v; good luck to everyone!!

[peppermintleo]

After getting LOTS of feedback from all different kinds of people on the finished
forms, we finally figured out the top three and went from there.

Arendelle, dandyLIONscare, and Temperance were our top three forms in the end.
I wish all of you could've won, I really really do, but because she's only an NB,
Clara and I couldn't.



dandyLIONscare,
I know how much you wanted this girly and how absolutely hard you tried. It was
very very very obvious in your form. We loved your wings and all the little details
you included. In every list, you were included in the very top three. I adored the
songs you used as well as who she would be when she grew up. The art was GORGEOUS
and I hope you never, ever give up trying your absolute hardest for anything.

Arendelle and Temperance,
GREAT GLOBS YOU TOO. Out of the six finalist guest judges, it was a 3-3 tie
between you too. I've never been so absolutely torn between two forms in my
entire life.

Arendelle,
how you portrayed Eloa was absolute perfect. I personally loved your form, it was
at the top of my list. How you connected her to her entire family and developed
her through-out your form made me so absolutely happy. But it's always the simple
stupid things that hold people back. You did an AMAZING job capturing Eloa's relation-
ship with her entire family, without needing a whole lot of extra help! Her wings were
absolutely gorgeous, and my personal favourites just because they seemed to make her
super delicate. I was personally hoping for someone to do butterfly wings, and you did!
The only reason you weren't completely eligible for winning... was the lack of family
art. Since it was a requirement(after an argument of course) it was decided that the
missing requirement held you back from claiming the first place. However, if you're
interested, Clara and I have a surprise for you that we hope you'll love. Just PM her or I


Now for the winner, Temperance!!
Kat, really. In the small time limit you had with university, you managed to absolutely
blow our minds. How you connected her beliefs, and her mothers, into your form, and
make her family her anchor to the world, we loved it so so much. The fact that Hayyel
suffered from dissociation and that she interacted with it in her journal gave an insight
into her eyes and who she was. I loved her relationship with Demi, especially because
you didn't make him out to be some absolutely jerk(which he is far from by now), and
that made me really happy xD All around her relationships and how you formatted your
form was pleasing. I'm usually apprehensive about story formatted forms, just because
they can take forever to get through, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop! Clara's
favourite part, besides the personality, were the poems. And I loved them too very much,
especially the one about Sofiel. It was just... it's hard to explain the amazing way you
portrayed her, and we really really hope you love her forever <3


Our honorable mentions go to Dewdrops and Rainbow Roses. We adored your forms,
and if you have ANY questions at all about how we judged, please do PM me.

Thank you all for joining!!!

[Temperance.]

-hyperventilates excessively and screams-
I CAN'T EVEN BELIEVE IT ;A;

Literally I was so stressed out about this contest and had wanted to do SO MUCH MORE with Hayyel but my time constraints absolutely killed me and I nearly wasn't even able to finish my form oTL

So I NEVER IN MY WILDEST DREAMS thought I would win, especially given how many other amazing forms there were ;A;

Hhhhhhhhhh I'm freaking out oh my gosh, everything about this Moonbow family absolutely enchanted me and I am SOSOSOSO grateful to be able to be a part of it ;A; -snuggles Hayyel tightly-
Now that I have time there is going to be SO much writing and art ordering done with her
-wheezes-

I'm especially happy that you like how I portrayed the relationship between Hayyel and her siblings <3
I really wanted to try something less expected and I'm glad that my ideas came across well enough for you to like them.

BUT ANYWAYS
I am so thankful and grateful for this opportunity and I can promise to love and cherish her eternally <3
Hopefully there will be plenty of roleplaying to be done with the family and Hayyel will develop into something even more special and precious than she already is <3

Thank you again aaaaaah
-runs off to scream some more and freak out-

[ancientwings]

Congrats!
Your form was absolutely amazing!

[6Dewdrops]

Congrats. ^_^

[dandyLION]

Well congratulations Temperance.
Take care of her, if you want you can have the art though most of them have the wings I designed for her.. Sorry. Good job

.

[Wlyrout]

I am so honored to have been given such tremendously positive feedback. I'm kicking myself for not including family art. Congratulations to Temperance. You deserve this girl so greatly. <3 Take great care of her.