[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

General Info

Chrysaora Basilisk are the prevalent equine creatures that inhabit the world Lucent. They roam by the hundreds, using their unique hooves to score the uneven rock and track down their most vital source of nourishment; evil. The relationship between Chrysaora and humans is a complex one. Chrysaora vocalize like horses, but are also thought to have a syrinx much like birds do and have been recorded displaying a variety of sharp, avian sounds. Their eyes layer over with a dark, murky black until their normal eye color pierces through in a great ball of electric light, radiating toward their victim's open eyes and paralyzing them. The Glare is able to stop both human and creature, and after a few days, unique to other forms of basilisk, the paralyzed being transforms into a sea nettle.

Owner: Hell Hound
Name: Dakota
Gender: Stallion
Link to form: here
Coat Color: Mahogany Bay Tobiano

For this contest I'd like you to tell me about this chrysaora's first sunrise/sunset and what made it special, along with an extra of your choice.

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Ends 8 December 2014

[Hell Hound]

Owner: Hell Hound
Name: Dakota [Dale, Kota, "Boar"]
Gender: Stallion
Story: He had never seen the beautiful transition to darkness ever before in his life. The thing we take for granted every day, this stallion had no idea it existed. In fact, he didn't even know about sunny days.
When Dakota came into this world and he opened his eyes for the first time, there was no bright light of the day he would eventually have to get used to. The stars were out but couldn't manage to shine through the thick clouds that blackened the sky so greatly and throughout the morning with only glowing blotch were the sun was hidden. Where Dakota and his herd lived was in a valley at the edge of the lands, touching the ocean. The gray waves were as miserable as the clouds as they crashed violently at the sand, dragging in anything it could into the vast ocean.
Dakota grew every day in the dark. It wasn't pitch black, at least not during the day, but it wasn't bright and never encouraged a cheery mood. He had never questioned the weather for this was all he ever knew.
Whenever he did ask, the elder would just sweep it aside and cringe like he had poked a still-tender wound. They knew what he did not.
There were lands not much farther than where they were, past the horizon but definitely worth the long day-walks. It had sun and sky to expose. The old leader yearned to return to the land the herd once called home but alas, he could not because a wild pack of savage beasts roamed the land. Despite the powerful paralyzing glare of the herd, over half dropped dead like flies. These insane nightmares had them out numbered, five to one. Every time a Chrysaora Basilisks pierced it's glare at it's victim, another would attack from the side and sink it's teeth into their soft flesh. However, the strong Chrysaora Basilisks would not go down without a fight. Mostly it took at least four creatures to overpower them, and only once it had tired out would it fall. They weren't the only ones who lost part of their group, too. Only a third of these critters remained after the battle with the much larger Chrysaora Basilisks.
The leader, who had managed to overcome his scars, was too weary to return to the valley. He did not know how quickly they repopulated or how early they mature. For all he knew the pack could have doubled in size. It was not worth the risk to let so many animals of his heard moan. He could not bear to hear their screams when they were forced to the ground and brutally wounded. He still had nightmares.
Besides, it had already been many, many springs ago, and the herd was used to this dark place. No one squeaked a single word of the painful battle. The new members of the herd did not have to know, for the leader did not want to give them false hope.

So for many years Kota lived in darkness. It wasn't so bad for him, for he was not haunted by any horrible memories.
He had over 1000 chances to see what everyone missed. When the sun woke up from it's deep slumber and said hello to the world with a magnificent entrance of colours. Most missed were the stars, as they shined despite the giant fireball going to rest, as it always must every night and when it's companion, the moon, comforted all the night creatures and provided all the light it could.
And one day, something happened. It was just like any normal day.
Dakota was not quite an adult yet but was mature enough to know everything about this world the herd lived in, but not the outside lands for he did not know they even existed. All the information he could ever gather up added to something about a beast of pain guarding the borderline, and that only savage creatures lived beyond their territory.
Still curious like a foal, he always enjoyed scouting the beach and splashing his hooves in the icy water. He had don't this so often that no one thought to ever watch him when, even a full grown adult was required to go with another, since the minute the cold water touches flesh the body becomes shocked, and the herd had lost some Chrysaora Basilisks that way. And one day he had wandered just a little too far.
First he went up to his ankles, and then his knees. He sloshed around in the water a bit, exiting to dry off when he got cold and then returning again, nosing the seashells snuggled in the sand. When a breeze whispered through his coat, he shivered and left the water. He decided to clamber on a small cliff edge that kissed the waves, hiding the current below. He decided to dry off on the rocks and enjoy the beautiful scenery and stare hypnotically at the dull blotch of light in the clouds. Dripping wet as he was, he placed his hoof on the slippery rock surface and, despite the animal's adaptation to cling on, he tumbled down the steep cliff and splashed into the water. One false move forced him to pay a drastic price.
At first he was stunned, and didn't surface. Luckily his light body pushed him up and he gasped for breath, instinctively kicking and pawing at the water to just barely keep his snout out of the water. This was working and he was being fueled by panic, which would end up draining more energy. With each wave he snorted water up his nose accidentally and squeezed his eyes tightly shut. He was being dragged under the surface on second and then thrown against the side of the cliff the next. He desperately tried to cling to the wall but the waves made it impossible.
Once the panic began to settled he realized how exhausted he was. He pawed the water as much as he could to avoid drowning but soon it just became too much to bare. Every inch of his body ached. He couldn't feel his numb legs, but kept them moving. He felt the cold sting his skin. Then, he felt nothing.

When Kota awoke he was tumbling through strong currents that pulled into a narrow river. He had passed out only for a few minutes but considering it was chilling water and his body had shut down for those moments, he clearly wasn't in good health. Luckily he struggled to haul his body weight onto a rotting log that glided nearby. Then, mustering up all the strength he possibly could, paddled to the shore.
When he felt the sand beneath his hooves and the air on his skin his knees almost gave out. His entire body was numb and he just wanted to lay down and close his eyes, even if it meant it was the last thing he'd ever do. But he channeled the little glimmer of hope within him that there was something he needed to find, almost as if fate had dragged him to this bank. When his tired eyes looked up, he forgot to breath. He a shudder shot through his spin. He stared at the strangest thing he had ever seen before. It hurt his eyes.

Over the horizon was a thin line of something white. He didn't know what it was. It was a bright sunny day in the valley, a day-walk away. The thing was a bright whiteish yellow that he had never seen before. He could tell it was not just a colour. And through his bones ached and his muscles screamed with every sore step, something pulled him to the lush grass and he walked through the forests, crossing many lakes and mountains. He couldn't tell why but some force seemed to tell him that was where he needed to go, but he stopped for a moment and looked around. Where was he? His numb brain has not thought to check before he began his journey, but as he recalled his thoughts he realized he had never seen the river that brought him here before. He couldn't go back, it was probably across the large body of water and he knew death would be upon him if he had entered the water again and let the cold succumb him. He continued to walk, slowly, one hoof after the other, pulling himself forward and taking every bit of reasoning to keep moving and not lay down to die.
Time was no longer a factor for his mind but his body had a ticking clock that failed to tell him that he had limited time to properly warm himself up before it would collapse whether he wanted it or not. Dakota knew of the threats of the cold water and worried that one of his vital organs may be close to shutting down. This made him walk faster.
Eventually, after many hours he reached the valley. Under the canopy of trees he did not see the sky or the birds soaring happily through it.
But when he did step out into the open area, his breath was taken away.
A magnificent swirl of colours burst in the sky. The faint blotch of light he gazed at every day was a great ball of fire. He had to squint to adjust his eyes.
Eventually he could open them all the way and he stared in awe at the amazing show. He whinnied with happiness, never felt so free. The setting sun felt warm on his coat like a hug like no other. He finally knew where he belonged, and here he was in peace.

Epilogue
No one knows what became of the savage creatures of the valley. Only skeletal parts remain to show the scars of whatever happened to the pack. Dakota found a new herd and his old one, upon mourning the loss of what they thought a dead Kota, word leaked out that he lived in the valley and finally the leader cracked. They traveled back to their ancient home, witnessing all the sunsets that kissed the land.
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Again I am so sorry about being such a nuisance.

[eleutheromaniac.]

Owner: Pete rip <3
Name: Iliovasílema
Gender: Mare
Story: A brilliant golden burst of daylight explodes over the valley in which I sleep. As soon as the sun comes up all of the withered wilted plants explode upwards. How is this happening?!?! When I was born, the world was dark. All life was dead. Mother told me it had always been that way. Only our kind could survive, blah, blah, blah not really listening... She explained to me that there where stories about this marvelous thing called "the sun". Is this it? Life is growing everywhere, healthy and alive. It is magnificent. My tail shines brighter then the sun itself. "What is this?" I say. I can't believe my eyes. This can't be happening. This is... AWESOME! Warmth spreads through my veins and I feel a confortable wave of heat spreading on my back, fighting off the cold that consumed me for so many years. I feel the warmth slowly spreading into my mane and tail. When I look back at my tail it shines brilliantly, changed into the glittering colors of the new rising sun. My eyes gleamed with curiosity. I notice that the ends of my tail and the bottom of my hooves still remain a dull ill color, as if the sun couldn't warm out all of the cold in my past. "Mother... I wish you where here to see this..." Green and pink, purple, blue, orange, red! Colors appear everywhere! The dull grey leaves are now in beautiful shades of green with happy little flowers sprouting all around. I run around, sniffing everything. My heart thumps loudly in my chest as fear and excitement boil up. This is the absolute craziest, coolest, and best thing that has ever happened to me.

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Personality: She is tough and strong. She is also cunning and sweet. Lema (nickname) can be very childish and loves to play. This silly girl is the craziest mare out there, and has a load of curiousity. Don't we all?

[Cavy's Girl]

Owner: Cavy's Girl
Name: Jaralath
Gender: Stallion
Story: WIP
Extra: WIP

[amavi.]

Owner: Pegasuswolf
Name: Sunrise Juniper
Gender: female
Story:
That morning when I woke with a start,
I saw the sky as a piece of art,
The clouds pink, birds singing,
The bright sun springing,
Out from behind the mountains.

Oh the joy that I felt,
I feared that I would melt,
The twinkling stars disappeared,
I was quite cheered,
Happily, I chased the butterflies.

I noticed a change in my mane,
When the sunrise had gone,
Yes, the little hairs on my brain,
Had dyed the color of the sunrise.
Extra: none!

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

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[Hell Hound]

Ahh, I'm sorry to bother you but is it possible to extend the end date? Just a day so I can get to work on my form?

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

Ahh, I'm sorry to bother you but is it possible to extend the end date? Just a day so I can get to work on my form?

that's fine, is 3 days good?

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

Ahh, I'm sorry to bother you but is it possible to extend the end date? Just a day so I can get to work on my form?

that's fine

[Hell Hound]

Thank you!! Working on it now