CWHR: Twin Foals by sapphirespirit

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CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby sapphirespirit » Thu Oct 17, 2013 11:01 am

Hey folks! Here's my newest adopt- Twin orphaned foals. To win them , fill out the form below. They may be separated, but there is a chance to win both foals! And, to do so, will require a large effort. You MUST fill out the form for both foals- however, it is possible that you only win one. To win them , you must give me an extra. Now. It can be art -if so I want it to be YOURS, not some colored in editable, please. ^^ You may do GIFS,- but please make it relevant. Let's say-relevant to their name, or to foals. Can be funny,sad,scary, etc. up to you. It could be a story-please no more than 1000 words, and no less than 400. This story could be how they got orphaned-or about being welcomed into your little herd. Again, up to you guys. There is one extra that is required, and it can count for the both of them- however- you can do separate ones for each foal. As I said, the more effort you put into these, the better a chance you've got. Please no theme songs , or any other unrelated items . WIPS are allowed. Edits are allowed. This will end sometime in Early November. Enjoy!
Oh, and to help you out just a little bit- The filly is blind, and was born that way. So , Her possible future foals have the chance to be blind as well.
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 Why do you want them?
History:

FOAL ONE:
Name:
Gender:Filly
Coloration: Bay Tovero
Personality:
Breed: (MUST be the SAME as the other Foal)


FOAL TWO:
Name:
Gender:Colt
Coloration: Grulla Overo
Personality:
Breed: (MUST be the SAME as the other Foal)


Extra:


Feel free to make your own forms too! This is just a guideline. Oh- Keep the prettifying to a minimum. No bright colors- no large , glittering texts, etc. keep this simple- put your effort into the foals, not so much the form.
goodluck!


The filly now belongs to Becoming Beautiful X, and the Colt belongs to Zenstar.

The foals are Mustangs, to keep it simple. Congrats- sorry for the wait- enjoy.
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby dogish » Thu Oct 17, 2013 11:05 am

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Why do you want them?
History:

FOAL ONE:
Name:
Gender:Filly
Coloration: Bay Tovero
Personality:
Breed: (MUST be the SAME as the other Foal)


FOAL TWO:
Name:
Gender:Colt
Coloration: Grulla Overo
Personality:
Breed: (MUST be the SAME as the other Foal)


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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby corrosive_limes » Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:36 pm

~Username~

Zenstar

~Why do you want them?~

Theyre adorable and Im doing a breeding experiment, and they would be perfect for the gene pool! Ive also only ever won one adopt here and these two have captured my heart <3 they will NOT be easy to get thought. Im certainly going to do whatever it takes to win them!

~History~


Spirit's Road's PoV:

I reared up and lashed out with my forehooves at the man. He had abused us heavily after our mother died birthing us. His abuse had blinded me and completely changed my brother. I couldnt tell if my hooves came anywhere near him, but I could tell that it didnt hit him. I hooves landed on the floor again with a heavy thunk. I tried to pull away but the two lead ropes had me crosstied in the section between stalls. I heard the heavy CRACK of the whip as it hit the stall next to me. I remembered with fury, pain, and anger that night where he had blinded me. It had been a beautiful night, the last thing I would ever see. The night was imprinted permanantly in my mind. I also remembered the searing bolt of pain when the whip accidently landed aross my eyes. The memory was deeply imprinted in my mind, giving me reason to fight back. Tonight was the night. I just knew it.

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Sunset's Death's PoV:

I flinched as I heard the crack of the whip. I was outside, but that didnt change the fact that it had hit me one too many times. I cowered into the darkness from the sound. I tripped over a bramble and I landed on my back with the breath knocked out of me. I lay there a second, regaining my breath. I rolled over onto my belly and lay with my hooves under me for a second. I noticed a gleam in the dark, near where I had fallen. I got to my hooves and walked toward the shimmer. There was a metal fence, and there was a small hole. Me and my sister wanted to get out, so i started pawing at the hole, making it larger. Tonight...We were leaving TONIGHT.

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Spirit's Road's PoV:

When I finally was let out into the field, I neighed to my brother, trying to locate him. I hated being blind! It wasn't right! He neighed back and I finally heard him near the back fence. Judging by the way his voice was muffled, it sounded like he was in some trees facing away from me. I slowly picked my way over there. He knew I was coming and moved out of the so I could figure out what he was doing. I slowly moved my muzzle around the general area of his scent. I nosed some spots, and it felt empty where there should be solid. I had known this area well, and there was a fence. I had noticed a hole, but it was WAY smaller than what I could feel here. Judging by the way his scent was laid out, he spooked when he heard the whip, tripped, saw the hole, and tried to enlargen it. I moved my muzzle up to the top of the fence, but it wasn't there! Now THIS was impressive. He'd torn the hole HUUUUUUGE. We could easily fit through this!


Sunset's Daeth's PoV:

I heard Spirit whinny, I whinnied back, knowing she wouldn't know where I was. It took her a minute to get here, but she got here. I backed up and sat down so she had some room to figure it out. I panted happily. It had been hard, but it was worth it. I had scraped at that hole for the better part of, what, 5, 6 hours? It was well into the night by the time I had been done. The hole was all the way to the top of the fence to the ground. It was wide enough for us to easily fit in this. We could leave whenever we wanted! Spirit seemed to get excited, I could feel it. She neighed once and leaped forward. I was caught off gaurd and jerked forward to follow her after a second. She was FAST! HO wcould she move so fast even though she was blind?

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Narrarator:

The foals escaped and lived in the wild for a bit before being found by the local animal shelter. They were sent to a stable where they were nursed back to help. The other horses at the stable had a hugely positive impact on both the foals. The filly had bad whipmarks. One cut was badly infected, and had to be treated immediately. The filly also had bad whip marks across her eyes, leading us to believe that the abuser hda purposely blinded her. The colt was okay, he only had a few scratches that were quickly treated. He also had a very bad case of headshyness. Both foals are now well on their way to recover, and are doing fine :)


~FOAL ONE~


~Name~

Spirit's Road

~Gender~

Filly

~Coloration~

Bay Tovero

~Personality~

Shy|Protective|Sweet|Daring|Tomboy

~Shy~
When confronted with another horse, she is very shy and thats all you really see of her until you get to know her. Until then, she'd much rather wander around and nibble at the grass.

~Protective~
If anything happened to her brother, she would instantly leap to his side to defend him. Hes a bit younger than her and doesnt really nkow whats going on most the times. Hes often encountering snakes and bees and such. Hes gotten into trouble so many times now that its an unconsious decision to defend him.

~Sweet~
She would never harm anything, unless it was attacking her brother -_-, and shes super sweet. Shes innocent like a lamb and her large eyes make you feel like she could never do anything wrong. Shes super nice and if you gain her trust, she might even sleep on your lap!

~Daring~
Shes always looking for adventure too though! She loves to go romping through the woods and racing the other foals across the fields. Shes often finding herself in trouble buts shes very tough and can normally get out of it pretty easily

~Tomboy~
She doesnt like girly things and prefers to romp with the colts rather than stand around after her foster mother like the other fillies. She dislikes overly sweet things, but doesnt openly resent them like some of the other foals.

~Breed~

Mustang




~FOAL TWO~


~Name~

Sunset's Death

~Gender~

Colt

~Coloration~

Grulla Overo

~Personality~

Shy|Nervous|Self Concious|Easily Distracted|Unaware

~Shy~
He doesnt like being the center of attention and does whatever it takes to get out of the spotlight. When you first meet him its almost impossible to gain his trust. Its almost impossible to approach him because he normally stays on the other side of the pasture.

~Nervous~
He jumps at the smallest thing and its very difficult to approach him. At all. He spooks easily and makes very slow progress. Hes nervous about everything and always thinks hes worse than he really is.

~Self Concious~
He hates it when anyone looks at him, and whenever he plays he stops the second he thinks anyone is watching. Hes very headshy and its difficult to get a halter on him. He dislikes open spaces because it means theres a higher chance of anyone looking at him.

~Easily Distracted~
One minute hell be cowering behind his foster mother due to shyness, then the next he'll see a butterfly and wander after it, transfixed. He has the attention span of a bird and easily looses track of things. He often gets in trouble because hes so distracted.

~Unaware~
He doesnt notice very much of anything. This leads him into bramble patches and trees. He gets stuck in all sorts of things and has been stung more than once. He isnt very strong and is the "Runt" of the two.

~Breed~

Mustang



~Extra~

Songs (Most are from Spirit Satallion of the Cimmaron) :

Get Off of My Back! (While being abused)
Im free (While escaping)
Here I am; End credits (After being taken in)
Sound the Bugle (For Sunset's Death after being heavily abused)
I will always Return; ending (After being rescued and feeling trust and love toward the owner)



Special!

Ask Sunset's Death and Spirit's Road! (DO NOT STEAL!)

~A Side Note~
It may seem like im picking on the colt and gave him a bad personality. This is because the story and History include them getting abused whitch is why they were orphanned. The colt got the worst of it and may never recover. There is a glimmer of hope for him though. Hes still young enough that if he has enough GOOD experiences with humans, his personality will start to change and he will become bolder.
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby sapphirespirit » Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:41 pm

keep in mind, folks, the filly is blind.
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby clip ♡ » Fri Oct 18, 2013 1:52 pm

Art is the only thing left to do now~ and I had the perfect theme song for the filly, but I won't ad it. I'll just tell you^^ It's Can't Breathe by Fefe Dobson :) }}

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Why do you want them?:
They are adorable, and I would love them to become part of my little herd. I just hope the other horses would be welcoming enough to let them in. Anyway, I think the Filly is a wonderful girl, and I can say the same for the handsome colt. I think they both deserve to go to a nice home where they will be welcomed and loved. I know if I even got one of these splendid foals, they would be spoiled and showered in love <3

History:
Two gorgeous foals were born at a welcoming barn in the fall. It was October 14th; Thanksgiving Day. For the first few days of their lives they were showered with love, and they were never frowned upon. The news got across that these twin foals were born, and over the course of the week many people came to see them. Whether they were sleeping alongside their mother or toppling over each other in the field, they were always loved and smiled upon.

It was a nice sunny afternoon, and the foals were sleeping in the field, sprawled out over each other. The foals didn't know it, but today, all the people around would come to see them. They had grown famous across the small town, and today was the day that the townspeople would come to see them at a week old. At about 2 O'clock pm, the people started crowding in. The gravel road was packed with cars and trucks, of all shapes and sizes. The people were walking around the barn, meeting the other horses, and of course, looking for the foals. The two were in the back field, cocking their heads at the amount of people coming in and crowding the barn. Some time later their owner -A tall girl, about 16 years old- came and took them out of the field, and walked them along to the front of the barn. The people gasped and smiled, holding their hands up in joy as the two foals were put in the front field, for all to see.

The twins were tired after the day before. The people came and petted them, and gave them carrots and apples. Yet the colt didn't like all the attention and would shy away from any people that came near him. Yet the filly loved it. Oh, what a glorious day that was! But the good times were not meant to last. As the weeks went by, the little foals got less and less popular, as they were growing up. Apparently the townspeople only liked foals. By now the foals had abandoned their unnecessary fun and reckless games, though they still played with each other. They had grown up, and often the filly would pick on her brother.

The colt was getting rather jealous of his sister, as she was the 'perfect' little filly. All the people loved her, not him. He was the odd one out. He tried to play with his sister, but all she would do was tease him and bite him. As the foals grew older, their personalities and attitude never changed. They had gone to the vet a couple times, and the vet had confirmed the little filly was blind. They had no explanation, though the vet thinks she was probably born that way, we just couldn't tell.

The foals were there for another couple months, before the owner had to sell them. They went to their new homes, but got out and ran away, ready for a new taste of adventure. The two were found by the SPCA, and taken there to be treated. They were there for a few weeks until it was confirmed they could be put up for adoption. Within a few weeks, there were already people asking about adopting them, until they were adopted on a rainy spring afternoon. There was the clip and the clop of their small hooves and the swish of their fluffy tails as they were loaded into the trailer. They whinnied a final goodbye as the door closed, blocking off the outside world.

This is where their story ends, and begins.


FOAL ONE:
Name:
My Little Angel {Angel}

Gender:
Filly

Coloration:
Bay Tovero

Personality:
Angel is a sweet filly. She had a very big heart, and could never hurt a soul. She also loves her brother, more than you would think siblings love each other. She loves running around the field, usually being chased by her brother. She's a pretty filly; She's been told by many of the people that have gotten the chance to look at her. Her brother, though, doesn't get much attention. She was always the favourite of the two. She could jump higher, run faster, and outsmart her brother. Her brother was definitely getting jealous, but she never payed any attention to him. She still doesn't, though she's getting better.

Breed:
Thoroughbred x Mustang x Paint horse


FOAL TWO:
Name:
Golden Glass {Mirror}

Gender:
Colt

Coloration:
Grulla Overo

Personality:
Mirror is a quiet little Colt. He prefers to keep to himself, and will usually shy away from any people. He likes to have fun, and you will often see him rolling around in the dirt. Though he's getting better with his shyness, he still needs time to get the confidence to stand out in the world.

Breed:
Thoroughbred x Mustang x Paint horse


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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby corrosive_limes » Sat Oct 19, 2013 5:37 am

Updated my form :)
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby corrosive_limes » Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:45 pm

Added more to the "History" and "Extras" sections ^^
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby sapphirespirit » Thu Oct 24, 2013 5:08 pm

Zenstar wrote:Added more to the "History" and "Extras" sections ^^

if you feel the need to tell me things like this, let's please keep it on PM :)
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Re: CWHR: Twin Foals

Postby sapphirespirit » Sat Oct 26, 2013 7:49 pm

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