[Soph6297]

I think I went a little bit over it with that random marking x3

Anyways... to get him you have to write a short story (max. 15 sentences) how he escaped off a fishing net.

Username: Charchar2
Name: Ghost
Gender: Male
Age: 4
Story: Ghost swooped through the deep, his long charcoal tail propelling him and sending bubbles across his face. He was smiling when he glanced up and noticed a dark shape above him, giving off strange humming noises. Ever curious, he swam up to the boat and began nosing around, pressing his muzzle against its dingy white sides. It didn't seem terribly interesting, though, and he was about to swim back down when he noticed a rope coming off the side of the boat and leading down, down, down. He followed the worn old rope carefully, wondering where it would lead. It seemed to stretch on endlessly to the eager young Guardian of the Sea as the ocean grew colder and darker around him. Finally, he saw a flash of silver in the navy blue darkness. "What could that be?" he asked aloud to the silent ocean around him. It was eerily silent, unnaturally silent, and he continued with a grim sense of foreboding. Suddenly, a thousand flashes of silver shimmered in the darkness. They were fish, he realized -- and then he noticed what the rope was attached to; a net. Determined to help the creatures, he rushed towards the net -- only to become tangled in it himself. He cried out, panicking, as the ropes tightened around him and the fishermen pulled it up towards the surface. He struck out with his powerful hooves and a sense of relief rushed through him as the ropes snapped and he, along with hundreds of silvery shiner fish, shook them off and swam away. Ever since, Ghost has been deeply mistrustful of humans.

15 sentences exactly, I believe. Cx
Gosh, he's gorgeous ouo <33

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[midnight133]

Username:midnight133
Name:Max
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Story:
Wip, trying to think if a good beginning
Withdrawing

[Southern sweetie]

Man, I really love this guy!
Why isn't there any replies yet!


Username:Eli <3
Name: Jamie
Gender: Male
Age: 6
Story: After being caught in a fishing net, Jamie started to freak out! Not knowing what to do he sent out a calling to the whole sea. One ear pricked up to hear that siren. Turning his one only good eye towards where Jamie was trapped, Seriphien set off to him. Jamie was weak by the time the stranger showed up. Using his sharp, swift tail he quickly wrapped the net around his fun an swishe as fat as he could out of it. The net flub off Jamie and dissapeard down the dark waters. Jamie came up to his savior. " Thank you," he said bowing. After that try have been friends forever!

Seriphien- he is blind in one eye (:-

[Lady Tuesday]

Username: Panic! At The Disco
Name: WIP
Gender: Male
Age: WIP
Story: WIP

bookmarking he's so gorgeous, and I think the marking looks cool!

[Melonbread]

Do I see a smiley face in there?

Username:
qwertypi303
Name:
Taloon
Gender: Male
Age:
around... ummm... say, 20?
Story:

Taloon slipped through the cold currents. His muscular tail flicked, allowing easy movement. The necklace of sorts around his neck sparkled in the light from the sun. All seemed well, but alas, it was not. Taloon dipped his head, and when he looked up again, he saw a dark shape in the distance. It was made by humans, that much was obvious. The stench of smoke, and humans clogged Taloon's nose. A large thing came sweeping towards him. It was a net, made of tightly woven metal strands, and had aldready caught lots of fish. At this, conflicting emotions battled inside Taloon. But before he could react, the net caught him too, the hard metal biting into his skin. Taloon swam as hard as he could, trying to go faster, and get out of there ; but it was no use. However, the sea must have been with him that day, because a large rock, old, and hard, was ahead. The net hit the rock with a harsh grating sound, and the force of the boat moving forwards, and the rock holding it down, eventually ripped the net. Taloon escaped, and returned to a more peaceful part of the ocean to tend to his various wounds.

[Soph6297]

You totally not see a ":-P" smiley in there xP
You could try to conect 2 sentences to one by adding a ",". C:

[Lady Tuesday]

lol i see it too! haha were you bored or was it an accident, oh well, it's still cute XD

[Charchar2]

Username: Charchar2
Name: Ghost
Gender: Male
Age: 4
Story: Ghost swooped through the deep, his long charcoal tail propelling him and sending bubbles across his face. He was smiling when he glanced up and noticed a dark shape above him, giving off strange humming noises. Ever curious, he swam up to the boat and began nosing around, pressing his muzzle against its dingy white sides. It didn't seem terribly interesting, though, and he was about to swim back down when he noticed a rope coming off the side of the boat and leading down, down, down. He followed the worn old rope carefully, wondering where it would lead. It seemed to stretch on endlessly to the eager young Guardian of the Sea as the ocean grew colder and darker around him. Finally, he saw a flash of silver in the navy blue darkness. "What could that be?" he asked aloud to the silent ocean around him. It was eerily silent, unnaturally silent, and he continued with a grim sense of foreboding. Suddenly, a thousand flashes of silver shimmered in the darkness. They were fish, he realized -- and then he noticed what the rope was attached to; a net. Determined to help the creatures, he rushed towards the net -- only to become tangled in it himself. He cried out, panicking, as the ropes tightened around him and the fishermen pulled it up towards the surface. He struck out with his powerful hooves and a sense of relief rushed through him as the ropes snapped and he, along with hundreds of silvery shiner fish, shook them off and swam away. Ever since, Ghost has been deeply mistrustful of humans.

15 sentences exactly, I believe. Cx
Gosh, he's gorgeous ouo <33

[extraterrestrial]

Username:
ice c a p p~

Name:
Kurona
[Kur-Own-Ah]

Kuro
[Kur-oh]

Gender:
Male

Age:
6 Years

Story:
Kuro swims alone in the quiet waters, not suspecting that minutes later he would be fighting for his life from fishermen. A moment later he is trapped in a mess of net, it surrounds him, entangling him in it's grasp. He squirms and whinnies, trying to free himself but just tangling himself up more. He slowly starts to give up as another GOS spots him. She swims over and nudges him, his eyes flash open and he stares directly at her "Help me please" He says softly and watches her begin nibbling on the net. "Are you going to help me or stay trapped?" Demila says harshly and nips him through the net. Kuro makes a face and snorts, his ears flicking back but he starts to bite the rope anyways. Soon enough the net is starting to be pulled up and Kuro starts freaking out. "Calm down!" Demila exclaims as the hole is now wide enough for him to slip through. "I"M ALIVE!" Kuro yells and swims out, he turns to Demila "Thank you" he says but would never admit that a girl saved his life. "Don't mention it" She says calmly and nudges him to leave. She swims away, never to be seen by Kuro again. He would forever remember the day he almost died, and he would never forget the beautiful mare that saved him.

[13 Sentences and I'm not happy with it...Are we allowed to edit later?]

[Soph6297]

I was bored and then it happend xD
Yep you can edit later. Until I said closed.