WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano by Penultima

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WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby Penultima » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:22 pm

To win, entrants had to write a short story about him.


Username: SerenWish
WTE Name: Tamerlane
WTE Age: 6 Years
Gender: Stallion
Height: 12.2hh
Personality: As a foal, Tamerlane struggled with connecting or forming bonds, and often sat by and watched other foals play- in the few insistence that he tries to move in and play as well, his way of suggesting things "to be more enjoyable" only weirded out the other colts and fillies. Because of this, he tries to plot his words so to convince others to go his way- in the few times out of the year that he really interacts. His heart is in the right place, but he often goes about the wrong way doing it.
Tamerlane is a stallion who takes his name to heart- he’s both clever and brave- usually. He enjoys situations that makes his mind work, and spends much of his time wondering- his curiosity can get him into trouble, when he sometimes lets his wonder dominant his wisdom. He also can be foolhardy when trying to be brave- but he’s not fearless. He fears fire more than anything, and dislikes lightning storms due to that fact.
He’s rather quiet and withdrawn usually, and doesn't live near other Whip-tails except when breeding season rolls around. During season he’s rather calculating and withdrawn, but is devoted to protecting the mare that chooses him for that season. (Though he has not bred yet.)
Tamerlane enjoys puzzling things out, putting pieces together, and he has an eye for detail- though he does still tend to get a bit hyperfocused on things.
Genes: Bay base: Dominant: Pangare
Story: The pale sunlight filtered through the treetops above as a creature of earthy shadows and pale snow-white slept, his nostrils flaring with every deep breath of sleep. His tail twitched at the occasional ant that tried to crawl over his hocks, but he continued to slumber on, wrapped in the peace and quiet of the jungle’s morning. Any birds or primates were far off from this spot, so, for the jungle, it was relatively silent.

Until the crashing began.

His head whipped up with a fierce snort, looking a bit caught-off guard at being jarred from the land of dreams. Glancing around with white-rimmed violet-blue eyes, he drank in the rich varied scents of the land, before rocking up onto his hooves. The crashing was growing dimmer, but it the abruptness of its beginning perturbed him, as he tilted his head to either side, blowing quietly.

“Strange.” His soft mellow voice quivered in the eerie quiet that now lay, ever-still, around him. He stepped with steady hooves after the now-faint sound, pushing through ferns to discover a trail of beaten-down foliage, mud churned up like under a herd of Whip-Tail’s hooves. But there were none of his kind nearby- he would have scented them earlier. Instead, only the scents of crushed stems and flowers, as well as the rich smell of decay and earth, meet his senses. A musky overtone soon overpowered those as he stepped into the trail, and he sneezed promptly before shaking his head. “Even stranger.”
Something had to be fairly large to make this trail- there were no predators in this isolated jungle, and the largest creatures were the Whip-tails themselves.

He followed along the track of crushed plants, sniffing curiously at the heavy stench- whatever left the smell must have left the path as well. He was headed away from the river- north, then. He sniffed thoughtfully, before nosing a small branch out of his way. His mind worked hard, gears turning as he thought. “Whatever did this must have been shorter than me….but just as wide.” That rules out pretty much any Whip-Tail. He picked up the pace, a little jog, before quickly halting, staring through the trees at some noises that sounded like muted versions of the crashing from earlier.

A dark creature moved about in the broad-leaved bushes ahead, making slobbering and strange squealing noises. The smell hit him again, a musky wave of stink, that reminded him of something he’d smelt before.
A boar? Here? This was an odd place to find them- boars usually stuck to the outcroppings of the jungle. Still, boars weren’t typically one to attack unprovoked- not as dangerous as the predators he heard from stories.
He stepped back anyway, his questions answered- most of them, anyway- when a twig broke underhoof. The brute’s head snapped up, a loud squealing growl coming from its throat, as it locked wild eyes on Tamerlane through the branches. Tamerlane halted briefly, skin quivering, before an explosion of bristle and muscle came rocketing right at him. The stallion spun about and took off, streaking down the path of carnage that the boar had left before, hearing its frenzied squeals behind him.
His hooves tore up the already churned earth, as he headed south, towards the river- what was wrong with this? Had he provoked him? He stole a look back, seeing the errant running of the boar- it definitely looked crazy. He poured all his strength into getting away, feeling the earth below his hooves change from earth to mossy rocks, as he scrambled down into the slow-moving river, hoping that a swim across would save his hide.
Before he finished his swim, the squealing grew to screaming, as the boar paced back and forth along the bank, saliva foaming from his beaten snout. Tamerlane halted in the water, muscles quivering- the boar was frightened of water? It wasn't a deep river, and there was little current to speak of- it was more like a giant stream.
“Strangest.” He breathed out, his heart beat still fast and erratic. He was scared, he’d admit that, but the creature looked crazy and murderous- what if the boar found his way to other Whip-tails, or got ahold of a foal? He shuddered at the image of tusks tearing into flesh, and strengthened his resolve. He knew something- the boar was fast and powerful, but he had issues with balance and staying in a line. And, perhaps most importantly, he was afraid of water.
The stallion walked forward, the soft swish of water running past his long legs pleasant on the ears, in rivalry with the savage screeches and snarling. Tamerlane’s muzzle crinkled up, his tail whipping to and fro quietly in thought. A puzzle- this is what this boar was. Tamerlane just had to figure out how to connect it. He snorted and turned his haunches suddenly, kicking out with his legs and whipping his tail up through the water, sending a spray of water at the boar, causing him to fall over in shock, squealing and ripping up the ground as he thrashed in terror.
The stallion took the chance and charged from the water, rearing up to come down with striking hooves on the boar’s hindquarters, bruising up the wild animal, before he leapt away, quivering at the close proximity to such an insane brute.
The boar tried to surge back up, and Tamerlane felt a little quiver again, now inside him. This wasn't like challenging another stallion for the right to breed- this animal seemed to be in pain, and he was no predator. He backed up again, unsure of what to do now, when the boar manage to scramble to its hooves, half-charging, half-limping at Tamerlane, who leaped to the side, tucking in his tail as the boar kept running, before the creature tumbled into the river, landing in a slightly deeper part of the water.
The boar never got back out, as Tamerlane stood at the bank, silently watching the waters, feeling just a bit proud, and quite…empty as well, witnessing death to a crazy animal.
He turned back, headed to his clearing, letting out a single sigh as he padded- sleep called.

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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby SerenWish » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:27 pm

Username: SerenWish
WTE Name: Tamerlane
WTE Age: 6 Years
Gender: Stallion
Height: 12.2hh
Personality: As a foal, Tamerlane struggled with connecting or forming bonds, and often sat by and watched other foals play- in the few insistence that he tries to move in and play as well, his way of suggesting things "to be more enjoyable" only weirded out the other colts and fillies. Because of this, he tries to plot his words so to convince others to go his way- in the few times out of the year that he really interacts. His heart is in the right place, but he often goes about the wrong way doing it.
Tamerlane is a stallion who takes his name to heart- he’s both clever and brave- usually. He enjoys situations that makes his mind work, and spends much of his time wondering- his curiosity can get him into trouble, when he sometimes lets his wonder dominant his wisdom. He also can be foolhardy when trying to be brave- but he’s not fearless. He fears fire more than anything, and dislikes lightning storms due to that fact.
He’s rather quiet and withdrawn usually, and doesn't live near other Whip-tails except when breeding season rolls around. During season he’s rather calculating and withdrawn, but is devoted to protecting the mare that chooses him for that season. (Though he has not bred yet.)
Tamerlane enjoys puzzling things out, putting pieces together, and he has an eye for detail- though he does still tend to get a bit hyperfocused on things.
Genes: Bay base: Dominant: Pangare
Story: The pale sunlight filtered through the treetops above as a creature of earthy shadows and pale snow-white slept, his nostrils flaring with every deep breath of sleep. His tail twitched at the occasional ant that tried to crawl over his hocks, but he continued to slumber on, wrapped in the peace and quiet of the jungle’s morning. Any birds or primates were far off from this spot, so, for the jungle, it was relatively silent.

Until the crashing began.

His head whipped up with a fierce snort, looking a bit caught-off guard at being jarred from the land of dreams. Glancing around with white-rimmed violet-blue eyes, he drank in the rich varied scents of the land, before rocking up onto his hooves. The crashing was growing dimmer, but it the abruptness of its beginning perturbed him, as he tilted his head to either side, blowing quietly.

“Strange.” His soft mellow voice quivered in the eerie quiet that now lay, ever-still, around him. He stepped with steady hooves after the now-faint sound, pushing through ferns to discover a trail of beaten-down foliage, mud churned up like under a herd of Whip-Tail’s hooves. But there were none of his kind nearby- he would have scented them earlier. Instead, only the scents of crushed stems and flowers, as well as the rich smell of decay and earth, meet his senses. A musky overtone soon overpowered those as he stepped into the trail, and he sneezed promptly before shaking his head. “Even stranger.”
Something had to be fairly large to make this trail- there were no predators in this isolated jungle, and the largest creatures were the Whip-tails themselves.

He followed along the track of crushed plants, sniffing curiously at the heavy stench- whatever left the smell must have left the path as well. He was headed away from the river- north, then. He sniffed thoughtfully, before nosing a small branch out of his way. His mind worked hard, gears turning as he thought. “Whatever did this must have been shorter than me….but just as wide.” That rules out pretty much any Whip-Tail. He picked up the pace, a little jog, before quickly halting, staring through the trees at some noises that sounded like muted versions of the crashing from earlier.

A dark creature moved about in the broad-leaved bushes ahead, making slobbering and strange squealing noises. The smell hit him again, a musky wave of stink, that reminded him of something he’d smelt before.
A boar? Here? This was an odd place to find them- boars usually stuck to the outcroppings of the jungle. Still, boars weren’t typically one to attack unprovoked- not as dangerous as the predators he heard from stories.
He stepped back anyway, his questions answered- most of them, anyway- when a twig broke underhoof. The brute’s head snapped up, a loud squealing growl coming from its throat, as it locked wild eyes on Tamerlane through the branches. Tamerlane halted briefly, skin quivering, before an explosion of bristle and muscle came rocketing right at him. The stallion spun about and took off, streaking down the path of carnage that the boar had left before, hearing its frenzied squeals behind him.
His hooves tore up the already churned earth, as he headed south, towards the river- what was wrong with this? Had he provoked him? He stole a look back, seeing the errant running of the boar- it definitely looked crazy. He poured all his strength into getting away, feeling the earth below his hooves change from earth to mossy rocks, as he scrambled down into the slow-moving river, hoping that a swim across would save his hide.
Before he finished his swim, the squealing grew to screaming, as the boar paced back and forth along the bank, saliva foaming from his beaten snout. Tamerlane halted in the water, muscles quivering- the boar was frightened of water? It wasn't a deep river, and there was little current to speak of- it was more like a giant stream.
“Strangest.” He breathed out, his heart beat still fast and erratic. He was scared, he’d admit that, but the creature looked crazy and murderous- what if the boar found his way to other Whip-tails, or got ahold of a foal? He shuddered at the image of tusks tearing into flesh, and strengthened his resolve. He knew something- the boar was fast and powerful, but he had issues with balance and staying in a line. And, perhaps most importantly, he was afraid of water.
The stallion walked forward, the soft swish of water running past his long legs pleasant on the ears, in rivalry with the savage screeches and snarling. Tamerlane’s muzzle crinkled up, his tail whipping to and fro quietly in thought. A puzzle- this is what this boar was. Tamerlane just had to figure out how to connect it. He snorted and turned his haunches suddenly, kicking out with his legs and whipping his tail up through the water, sending a spray of water at the boar, causing him to fall over in shock, squealing and ripping up the ground as he thrashed in terror.
The stallion took the chance and charged from the water, rearing up to come down with striking hooves on the boar’s hindquarters, bruising up the wild animal, before he leapt away, quivering at the close proximity to such an insane brute.
The boar tried to surge back up, and Tamerlane felt a little quiver again, now inside him. This wasn't like challenging another stallion for the right to breed- this animal seemed to be in pain, and he was no predator. He backed up again, unsure of what to do now, when the boar manage to scramble to its hooves, half-charging, half-limping at Tamerlane, who leaped to the side, tucking in his tail as the boar kept running, before the creature tumbled into the river, landing in a slightly deeper part of the water.
The boar never got back out, as Tamerlane stood at the bank, silently watching the waters, feeling just a bit proud, and quite…empty as well, witnessing death to a crazy animal.
He turned back, headed to his clearing, letting out a single sigh as he padded- sleep called.

Notes: Ach! It's....1,034 words.... I hope that's alright!
I tried to show Tamerlane' strength and smarts, and mortality, in the story.
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby rebelappy » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:33 pm

Dropping out..I need a mare ><
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby bears » Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:59 pm

Never much of a lit, but I Reaaaaaallly want him... If I don't get him, i'm asking the owner if I can steal him for a stud. <3
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby baaer » Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:34 pm


Kinda hope my story counts as "Short"

Username: Phoenix
WTE Name: Master
WTE Age: 9 years
Gender: Stallion
Height: 12.2hh
Personality: This dominant stallion loves the mares an loves to be in charge. You could call him a control freak. He loves to choose his battles and loves to challenge anybody.
Genes: Bay base: Dominant: Pangare
Story:

"Well... He's different." The Colonel said. On this day a new colt was born. He was nothing like the horses have seen. He was a bit smaller than the others, and a bit flashier too. "Dear me. What should we call him?" His mother said. "I never thought he would turn out like this."
"Milady, we shall have to get rid of him before anybody sees him. Expecially not the General." His father the Colonel said, with a bit of disappointment in his voice. "I suppose, but what shall we call him?" His mother said, choking on her words. "How about..." He paused looking at the scenery around him, going for inspiration. "How about Oak. There are lots of oak trees around us." His father said."Oak is nice. Now lets hurry." His mother said.

Poor little fragile Oak, he heard everything. He pretended to be asleep. His parents did not know that he was awake. He was sad to leave his parents so soon. He walked with his parents to the border of New and Old. He hugs them and said goodbye. "Good bye sweetie. We will see you In a few years, honey." His mother said, not holding back the tears. "Bye my boy. Make me proud, son." His father said struggling to hold on. Bye mom. By dad. I will make you proud. You will see!" He said proudly. He put two hooves where the stones were to cross the line. The auora appeared. He waited til it separated and he stepped through.

The Old was different than the New he was used to for a short period of time. There was little sunlight and barely any trees. He found some rocks that sort if made a cave like shelter. The clouds started to let their rain go. It seemed to have lasted for hours. Oak fell asleep somewhere in the middle of it.WIP

5 years Later.
Oak awoke to a salamander telling on his ear. He was living on top his head. "Cham! Stop yelling in my ear!" Oak was maturing fast, and he was thinking about visiting the new. "Master! You need to see this!" Cham had a squeaky tiny to his voice when he spoke. Oak technically owned him, so he called him Master. Oak checked outside, and everything was on fire. "Help! I need help!" A Mare's voice sounded. "Hello? Where are you!" Oak said. He waited a minute after no reply, he jumped in. The mare he sought after, he unicellular found was unconscious. He was strong, and he carried her on his back. They went back to his house, and he laid her on the floor. She was pretty. He nudge her a couple times and she awoke. The smell of burning mane was strong and Oak had to hold his nose a couple times. "W- Who are you?" She said. "Why he is Master!" Cham said. "M-Master? Unusual N-name." She said. "Heh, really my name is Oak, but you can call me whatever." Oak said. "I really like the name, do I will call you Master. My name is Nostalgia." The mare said. "Hello." WIP
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby eleutheromania » Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:40 pm

Username: N i g h t s t a r
WTE Name: Delano "meaning night time, of the night"
WTE Age: 4
Gender: Stallion
Height: 12.2hh
Personality: Delano is a curious fellow. He loves to discover new things and try to figure out the oddest things. He is very social and doesn't exactly like solitude. This whip tail can be shy at times but overall he isn't one to keep away from the groups despite this.
Genes: Bay base: Dominant: Pangare
Story:

A mare lay on the group, beside her lay a colt, hidden in the darkness of night. The two were seprared from a herd of five not including herself along with the new arrival. His father was off in the distance watching over the rest of the herd. The night was dark, not a star in the sky as the colt got up to wobbly legs. A first attempt failed as his mother rose to her hooves. His second and third attempt also to no success. Finally, with both the help and encouragement of his mother, the newborn was able to stand unsteadily. His first few steps were towards his mother as he took his first meal.

Crunch. Crunch. The leaves under his hooves made this sound as he followed the large body of his mother towards the others. His horns weren't visible, he would not have then until he was older. His tail seemed to drag against the ground as he tried to control every limb of his body. It was cold, a chilly breeze caused him to shiver and move closer to his mother in response. Soon enough he spotted a tall figure in the dim light of the night as it came towards them. He stumbled as he tried to keep up.

The figure looked over him as his mother nuzzled the large equine and spoke words that he fought to understand. He caught one word though, Delano. Finally, the large new whip tail clgreeted his son before bumping his muzzle against the colt's whithers before smiling and speaking in a deep voice.
"Hello Delano." The large stallion said to the newborn and in response Delano guessed that was he name. His mind raced for words he didn't have until he decided to repeat just one.
"Hello." The word was said uncertain as he wondered if he has said it right. Delano recieved a chuckle from the stallion before he spoke again.
"My name is Rift and I'm your father Delano. Your mother is Sapphira." The two names stuck out against the sentences as the colt remembered the two names. "Now, you must be tired, get some sleep so you'll be fully rested by morning." A soft nudge caused the unsteady whiptail to land on his hindquarters before a yawned escaped him. Delano complied and was asleep in a few minutes beside his mother.

The soft light of the sun caused Delano to open his eyes. He blinked away the drowsiness that seemed to make him want to go back to sleep. He looked around from where he lay and noticed two other foals already up and about. He was instantly up but a bit hesitant to go over and consider about joining the game. As he rose, he found he was steady on his hooves and noticed his mother grazing not far off. His father was speaking with one of the other mares while the two foals continued to play. Delano watched almost longingly until he got the courage to go over.

The walk was not long as the colt reached the bigger foals. He seemed small compared to them but this did not phase him. Delano spoke up, using what he had already learned from the night before. "Hello." He said to them in his seemingly high pitched voice, it would also deepen over time. The two foals stopped their antics and turned to look at the new arrival. They look at each other before smiling and both speaking in turn. "Hey."
Delano seemed lost for words but one of the two foals tapped him on the shoulder, "Now you have to find us." He told the younger colt before bolting off into the trees. Delano followed at a quick pace, looking for the one hiding from his was. He explored the shadows carelessly not knowing of the dangers that could lurk there. The older colt had already left and went back, thinking that this could be a funny joke to leave him there alone.

Delano was going deeper and deeper into the jungle as he searched for what as no longer there. Soon, he felt like he was being watched, his heart was beginning to race and he realized he was lost. The colt was afriad to be alone in this big and dark place when a growl pierced the eerie silence before there was a flash of fur. Delano ran, apparently not caring in what direction, he was going off of instinct, which was now telling him to run to safety.

Meanwhile, Rift was scolding the two young yearlings for a moment before he went in search of his son. Delano was running, heart pounding and already breathing heavily when he stumbled. The colt flipped forward and landed on his chest. He scrambled forward but he could hear what ever it was growing closer, faster. Delano was afriad, he didn't know what to do, he knew he was not fast enough to outrun this thing. Delano managed to stand and turned to face the animal, it lunged and he squinted his eyes closed as the tan furred creature seemed about to hurt him. His entire body shook though nothing happened. He could only hear his heart in his own ears as he kept his eyes shut and seemed to wait, though nothing happened.

Finally the colt dared to open his eyes, there he saw his father fighting the predator off. Everything seemed to flood back to him, the sounds being the first thing. It was so loud. Delano was one of the lucky few who were able to be saved in time before becoming prey to a hungry carnivore.
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby SerenWish » Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:21 am

Um, what is is the min/max amount of words our story can be? Like how short is short? XD
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby Penultima » Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:25 am

SerenWish wrote:Um, what is is the min/max amount of words our story can be? Like how short is short? XD


Just put the effort you want into it.

So don't take up the whole page obviously, so how about 1000 words max
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby SerenWish » Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:10 am

Updated! I might add a bit more personality, but I'm happy with him...though I wanted to flesh out the story more! XD
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Re: WTE:27 Seal Bay Brindle Tobiano

Postby Psixi » Sun Jan 06, 2013 7:25 pm

I'll add my torturing form and story.
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