Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby quitted; » Fri Jul 01, 2016 8:42 am

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❂ avariel, the tainted angel ❂

Postby lex » Sat Jul 02, 2016 9:20 am

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not everyone agrees with my ways. i cannot say i don't see why. i live a different life than
most. i live in the shadows though my fur blazes of sunshine, i am covered in darkness although
light glints off of my armor. i look like a hero, i act like a villain, but i am neither. truthfully, i am
not sure where i stand. an angel would not murder; a demon would not assist. i don't want to be
either of them.

some say you must walk in the path of light to find salvation. others walk in the path of darkness,
thinking they could never change their ways. i walk somewhere in the middle, occasionally
wavering to one side more than the other, and i do fear that one day i may go too far. despite this,
i cannot let this fear rule me. if it does, i may fall even faster. however, i am not alone, and for that
i could never be more grateful. i have those helping me, keeping me where i need to be.

i couldn't be better off.










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☼ name: avariel gaious; goes by gaious to strangers ☼
☼ gender: cis male ( he / him ) ☼
☼ sexuality: bisexual ☼
☼ companion: sunfire the fancy rat ☼
☼ weapons: prefers a rapier, highly trained ☼
☼ alignment: lawful evil ☼


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☀ quiet ☀ solitary ☀ lawful evil ☀ stoic ☀

in his youth, avariel was as bright as the sunshine
that seems to be caught in his fur. he was bright-
eyed and even rather innocent, quite playful and
even talkative, and could be described as fairly
confident -- to the point of being cocky -- then.
however, this stage did not last long. following his
first act of murder against a corrupted leader
shortly after his adulthood, he ran away, fearing
that his actions might have been overdone and the
group would kick him out anyways. he took to a
life of one who lived in solitary, traveling sort of
as a nomad, as he had been raised, and never
staying in one spot for more than a week or so.
he had a goal in mind; to make sure that none
would suffer as he and his group once had. so,
taking to the life of a vigilante, he began to get
more and more aggressive when it came to
dealing out his revenge on those who had done
wrong upon others.

avariel is a viscet of few words and dislikes to
say more than need be. he prefers to "speak" in
gestures, movements and body language. despite
this preference to not speaking, he does not
show emotion; at least, most of the time, with
some exceptions. he can seem very blase about
pretty much anything, and can be difficult to
read if he doesn't want to be. this stoic nature
is not forced; after taking to the solitary life,
he became much less apt to speak to others.
there was no need; silence could say far more
than words ever could. this nature can make him
seem blunt and standoffish to others, and it isn't
far from the truth. he can be incredibly impatient;
however, luckily, he can deal with this feeling of
impatience for a pretty good while. if one to were
continue bothering him, they would reach a point
where he is sufficiently angry. keep pushing that,
and you get a cold rage -- and by that time, you
should watch your back. or else.

avariel considers what he does just as bad as those
he is punishing; he has killed, after all. he knows
that, sometime in the future, he may get what's
coming to him, and believes just as firmly that
he deserves it.


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through the arts

in this competition i've decided that i will develop avariel through the means of art. explations between series of pieces will be posted, as to further how in depth his character is. all art marked by a ✎ isn't mine, and the ✎ will link to the artist's page.


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his relationships [ 12 ] [ ✎1 ]
genoveva was his first girlfriend, but this was soon let down and they became friends. they are still in a good relationship.
pantarei is his mate, as well as a partner in crime.
rupert, a young, motherless viscet, is almost like an adoptive son to him.
jean is a friend who serves as an informant.
tyramet is somewhat of a friend, and also serves as an informant and a valuable resource. though avariel is aware and dislikes many things tyramet does, he often overlooks them.
valentine is a sworn enemy.

a/g; ocean breeze | tired | smile
a/p; opposites | sneaking about | surprise!
drowning | death in the snow
a+j; don't touch me | ordering information
a+r; birthday card
a+v; ; not my valentine (human)
family; 2 tired

his companion [ 4 ] [ ✎3 ]
avariel has a fancy rat as his companion, sunfire. sunfire is a little odd; though avariel himself doesn't have any sort of abilities, sunfire is very long-living, and can slightly control fire. he has been with avariel for years and often helps him as a scout. though they cannot speak to each other where they understand, they have a series of body signals and noises they use to communicate with each other. sunfire is actually quite excitable and more happy-go-lucky, unlike avariel, and he is very curious and loves to play. avariel doesn't mind playing with him, though, and actually does quite often, but only in private.
sf; sunfire | sneeze
sf+a; staring contest | sleepy time | ; headshot
; close companion | w/o armor

his dreams [ 3 ] [ ✎0 ]
ever since avariel left his group, he has had some very vivid dreams, both good and bad alike. they are often some of his most innermost feelings and they frighten him a bit with how accurate they are.
nm; just one yesterday | unedited
nm; septaphobia, the fear of the number seven

his occupation [ 2 ] [ ✎0 ]
avariel has the life of a vigilante, punishing those who prey upon the weak and defenseless, sometimes with even death. his mate, pantarei, assists him, and is somewhat a partner in crime with him.
alone; act of vigilantism | [anim - wip 5/9] attack cam

his past [ 6 ] [ ✎0 ]
this art is to explain his past, and what led up to him choosing the path he has chosen. this art is in chronological order.
video - memories | dawn
video - armor | over the edge | into the trees
so, why...

his personality [ 2 ] [ ✎2 ]
this art is specifically showing parts of his personality.
; lil grump | what do i do with you
caption this- 50 | ; temper

his quirks [ 2 ] [ ✎0 ]
simply some ways of showing the more odd, unusual things about the way avariel acts, whether it be in public or in private.
sleep talk | twitch

human alternate universe [ 1 ] [ ✎2 ]
art of avariel and his companions if they were humans instead of viscets.
together | ; fly high | ; avatar

miscellaneous art [ 15 ] [ ✎13 ]
the art here is simply miscellaneous, non-personality-specific art.
; icon | ; icon | ; headshot | ; under my wing
form banner | dA avatar | large pixel | ; fullbody
yawn | reference sheet | ; fullbody | headshot
all nighter | ; headshot (mild gore) | ; fullbody
; long tail | ; fullbody | minimalist
undertale | paper doll | tainted angel | ; embarrassed
; happy | zootopia | ; smol headshot
phone sketch 1 | phone sketch 2 | flip-phone

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decoration art [ 4 ] [ ✎0 ]
this is the art, not of avariel, that is used in various points throughout the form.
l wing r wing helm gems


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word count note: words counted here.
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby widow. » Sat Jul 02, 2016 3:15 pm

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The Sun Child


The Basics
Name ;; Solaris
Meaning ;; Of the Sun
Pronunciation ;; Sol-a-rees
Gender ;; Male (he/him pronouns)
Sexuality ;; Straight/ Bisexual leaning towards females
Age ;; 20
Birthday/Zodiac Sign ;; June 12th/Gemini


On the Inside
+ Personality ;; Loyal, Courageous, Intelligent
- Personality ;; Stubborn, Acts before thinking, Gets angry easily
Written Personality ;; Wip


The Past
Backstory ;; Wip
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby Vixen Luo » Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:58 am

mark! rooting for someone~
    please stop asking me to give you my viscets. thank you!
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby HellyBoo » Sat Jul 09, 2016 9:20 pm

Just marking to see the winner. Defiantly cheering for someone!
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Guys I'm away for a while. I've turned off messages for a few days just to gather my thoughts and re assess my life inside CS and the Kalon community. I'm sorry if I've let anyone down. Im sorry.
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby Barnes&Rogers » Tue Jul 12, 2016 1:22 pm

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Full name; William T. Solace
Nicknames;; Sol, Will
Name he goes by;; Solace
Name pronounciation;; sol-i-ss
Gender;; male
Age;; 17 years of age
Sexuality;; homosexual



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Positive traits

-Caring
-Positive
Negative traits

-Mischievous
-Aggressive
Neutral traits

-Protective
- Introverted



Solace has a very contradicting personality. He's introverted and shy, not liking lots of Viscet interaction, yet, he's an extremely talkative lad. He'll talk to you about whatever topic springs to his mind; from tennis to hunting. He's a sweet and caring lad, often doing small, kind acts throughout the week. Such as helping an old lady cross the street, or giving little Viscets back their toys when bullies come along and steal 'em. However, he can also be mischievous and a bit of a joker, messing with people and playing pranks on strangers. His mother often says he's like an angel that was kicked out of heaven; good sometimes, bad others. There have only been two times where his two different sides took it to the extreme. But you'll hear about them later.

Going on from that, you've got his more protective side. He is a great friend to have because of it. He's not too clingy with his protectiveness, but he's very good at observing situations and acting appropriately; from kindly asking to talk to you to fighting tooth and claw to protect you. Don't insult his friends if there is even a little chance of him hearing about it, because he's not one to just let that kind of thing slide. Don't be fooled by his positive attitude, he can stand up for himself too. He can be caring and compassionate when he wants to be, and if the situation calls for it, his serious side will show. He can go from being the friend you'd want as backup in a dark alley, to the friend you'd call to cheer you up when you're sad in the blink of an eye.

Moving on from protectiveness, Solace can also be a good at debating. He will fight for what he believes in, debating topics back and forth, and sometimes you can't tell which side he's actually on because of how much emotion he puts into his speeches. His teacher suggested debating club to him after one English class debate, and he agreed he'd give it a shot, although he was quite reluctant to start off. When he got into it however, he made new friends and got to enter into competitions, furthering his skill and ability. His grades even improved because of it. he learned many different life skills from it, and he is extremely grateful for it.


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Story
Past | Present

It was early when Solace left the house. It had been two days since the accident. His tears were thick as they splattered onto the pavement like raindrops. He glanced up at the sky, shielding his face from the harsh sun rays with a paw. How could the world be so bright when he felt so dead inside. He left his garden and headed down the street towards the small café. His tail dragged along the pavement after him as he walked. The one he wanted to be here, the one he needed, was gone. He sped up as he saw the shop. He had thought about the accident too much since it happened. Entering the shop, he stood in line; waiting. As he stood, images flooded into his mind, and before he could try and focus on something else, he was back in the moment....

Solace couldn't stand still as they stopped at the pavement's edge, waiting for traffic to pass. They were going to the new Aztec exhibition at their local museum. Solace adored mythology of every kind, from the Aztec gods, to the Romans and the Greeks. The museum was just across the road, and he felt slightly embarrassed at his excitement. A teenage Viscet and he was almost bouncing with excitement for a museum event. They crossed the road and entered through the large, golden, front gates. With lights and signs, they followed the path through to the reception and were let in. Each room had a different theme. While Aztec was the general theme, some rooms were based around a certain god, or a certain way of Aztec life. They took almost 2 hours to go the full way around, but the last room was the best. He was fitted or a set of Aztec armor, made specifically for the event. Once he got the right size, they left. Solace wasn't paying attention; he was too busy looking at the armor. he stepped off the pavement. He didn't see the truck coming. He didn't see his father running. Something crashed into him, and was sent flying across the road. When he sat up, he was on the edge of the road, and blood was running down the road towards the drain. His eyes widened as he saw the familiar golden fur of his father, un-moving on the ground. Sirens blared. His father was dead.

He walked up to order, his face expression-less. That's when he heard the scream. He looked out the window. A car was hurtling down the road, a mother was running towards the pavement. But what shocked Solace most was the young Viscling in the middle of the road, staring at something in his hands. 'Lux!' The mother was screaming, but she seemed to be too far away from him. That's when Solace knew exactly what he was going to do. He sprinted towards the road, coffee forgotten. His feet barely touched the ground. He leapt suddenly; a leap of faith. The car was almost upon them as he crashed into the panda-patterened Vsicling, pushing both of them out of the way; just in time. The mother arrived at the pavement, just as Solace pulled himself off the ground. Lux sat up, eyes wide. When he saw his mother, he burst into tears, and ran into her open arms. It seemed so unreal to Solace, his heart beating fast and his head pounding. Lux had been looking at Aztec armor....

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Likes & Dislikes;;


Likes;;

- pork, apples, cherries, salmon, cashew nuts
- cold water, fanta, milk, hot chocolate
- mornings, and afternoons
- Summer and Autumn
- April May and June
- horses, cats, turtles, moths
- yellow, purple, blue and gold
Dislikes;;

- chicken, beef, limes, kiwis, peanuts
- fruit juice, warm water, coffee
- nighttime
- Winter
- October
- Inscets, spiders
- green, brown, orange











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Pets;;

Solace loves animals, but was only allowed have one pet. He was told that he could have whatever pet he wanted, but he had to take care of it. he decided to go for one of his favorite animals. A cat. Now Solace didn't just want any old cat, he wanted a specific breed of cat. He wanted a Maine Coon. he had originally wanted a ginger kitten, because who doesn't love those small balls of fur, but when they arrived to pick a cat, he knew instantly which one he wanted. On there way inside, a small black maine coon kittencame over and rubbed shyly off Solace's leg. He knew instantly that the little shy ball of fluff was the one he wanted to take home with him. He named the kitten Soro (pronounced;; sorrow) due to the fact people that black cats brought bad luck and sorrow. He has had Sorrow for just around a year and a half now, and the two have a very close bond.















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Postby VAALRAVN » Mon Jul 18, 2016 1:34 pm

    @ Minty, could there pretty please be an exstention? I haven't had time and I lost everything I typed. It would be really helpful!
    Thanks so much.
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby lex » Mon Jul 18, 2016 2:39 pm

aa, i hope i'm not being rude, but i have been told i can say this by a judge, so i'd like to go ahead and say it.

i would personally prefer that an extension weren't given. while i can understand, obviously, one hasn't had enough time, there are still a couple of days left (plenty for writing only 800 words) and we've been given almost three weeks i believe, and you did post on the competition on the first day. to others who have put a lot of effort into their forms in the time allotted, and i am including myself, this is pretty unfair.
i would also like to mention i will be at a disadvantage as well. i'm only getting about an hour or two a day this entire week of free time, most of which can't be devoted to art, so i can't defend my own form well against others (which, heh, i'm trying very hard to do).

again, i apologize if this came off as rude or anything negative. i would just like to point out the facts that are there, i am not trying to target you or be aggressive in any way! thanks for reading this.
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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby Stårry » Tue Jul 19, 2016 6:40 am

I may just have to be in favor of the extension, only because I myself need a bit more time. Something came up while I've been on my trip, so I'd be gone a couple more days meaning I cant get any work done on my form at all as much as I'd love to. I really only have time to type this out. ;w; I hope it isn't too much to ask- for maybe a 5 day extension at the most.

I wish I did have time to work on my form and all till the current closing date, but, compared to what others have been able to get done, I haven't had the time to do much at all, and while what I've currently accomplished may seem like a lot for 'not having any time' but its not to me. It just feels like so little, and not nearly enough to make me feel as though I actually made my form to the best of my ability. I haven't been able to even put in the mandatory personality yet because of lack of access to my home pc.

Aside from that, I myself being someone who has put forth as much effort as possible for me during the current time, I believe an extension to not be extremely unfair only because it gives everyone more time to work on things, not just those who would like one. This means everyone's granted the advantage, and thus, the amount of time everyone's had to work hasn't come to down to whos putting in more effort to their form, but to who had more free time. Some of us have jobs, some of us have summer school, family troubles, and the few like me have had planned trips for months before hand that they cant cancel just to work on a form.

In my humble opinion, yes, impress me competitions usually do just come down to who has more free time. But, I think it shouldn't be judged on that. Its sort of like giving a classroom a crap ton of work and telling them to get done what they can in a week, and then giving the kid who gets the most done an award. These contests shouldn't be rewarding free time, they should be rewarding connection and attempt. I think everyone should be able to complete their forms with the required criteria using an extension, and its just icing on the cake to make it as good as they possibly can afterwards. I hope this makes sense and not like I'm just rambling on and repeating myself. I really cant sit down and reread this, but consider me voting for an extension ;w;













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Re: Viscet #777 - Angelic Warrior

Postby G1 Sunstreaker » Tue Jul 19, 2016 6:44 am

I personally agree with Marki. I've always felt that impress mes were based on who has more free time, and it's really hard to compete with people who have tons of free time to write, draw, and other. Some people also draw/write faster than others and it can be really hard to compete with that. Same as commandant, I'm not trying to point anybody out or anything :0 this is just my personal opinion vuv

edit; i know my form looks empty I'm doing all the writing and art still aah that's why x3
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