[Beatnik]

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✖× Ｈｕｍｐｈ. Ｔｈｅｙ ｃａｌｌ ｍｅ Ａｒｄｉｔｈ.

Hello, the name's Ardith. I have no nicknames, and would be adbsolutely delighted for you to not give me one. Now that I said it like that, don't give me a nickname. I will ignore you unless you call me 'they' 'it' or just plain Ardith. My mother used to call me Arry, and I hated every second of it. Not that I don't hate most things. I try to be polite but I usually go out of control. Starting as a calm wave, ending as a raging tsunami. Well, now to me full name. I am Ardith Kenneth Armand. My first name meaning pink, which I dislike. My middle and last are better. Kenneth and Armand both mean zombie and undead. But I don't like being called either. It doesn't feel right. I much prefer, just plain Ardith. Call me Ardith.

♥♥♥ Ｏｈ, ａｎｄ ｔｈｅｙ ｃａｌｌ ｍｅ Ｖａｐｏｕｒ.

Hello, I'm Vapour, the hopefully future owner of the most gorgeous plumerian that I have ever seen! And I must say that I am ecstatic that you are introducing the 'no forms left behind' concept to plummie adopts! These are my favorite species, and just knowing that I will get some recognition for my hard work makes me a bit more eager to join this competition. I am entering mainly because I absolutely adore the colour palette of olive greens and coral pinks! I'm not kidding when I say I love the comical look to their hair. The bangs are lovely, and so are the nice clean lines that define them. The stripes hidden throughout his design are very elegant looking aswell, and drew me towards him. Ahhhhh, he's just so fabulous.

➳ Ｉ'ｍ ｉｔ ａｎｄ ｔｈｅｙ. Ｎｏｔ ｈｅ ｏｒ ｓｈｅ.

WIP, Ardith is a male, but he tells nobody, just says, "Call me it, or them."
Because he finds genders pointless. Who cares if I'm feminine or masculine.

Ｗｈｙ ｗｏｕｌｄ Ｉ ｗａｎｔ ｔｏ ｂｅ ｕｎｄｅａｄ?

WIP, I have a specific idea for a special undead Halloween event, eeeh!
It will be similar to: Collect a piece of rotting flesh, feel it to your plummie
and then an artist will create an undead version! Then once the event ends
you have one last and final chance to turn them back, before the event ends.

➤ Ｗｅｌｌ, ｔｈｉｓ ｉｓ ｍｙ ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ.

WIP, Ardith is a rude and shy plummie, who will bite other plummies when
he is unsure. If he feels intimidated he will go at you, and stop at nothing.

MAJOR WIP!

Looking over it, yea, it's mostly WIP. I usually skip over "meet the adopter" unless it comes down to two people I really like and I need to read that piece. But it seems you really only had to pieces completely finished. I would have liked more information. The coding is very nice and I like that you don't have blinding colors, but the picture bubbles just seems to take up a large amount of space that is unneeded.

kazuki felt his lips fighting to draw back in a snarl. he hissed under his breath. other plumies were giving him looks from over their shoulders; and kazuki couldn't walk through a street without getting glances and whispers of fear and hatred. he let out a sigh. what was wrong with him? yeah, he got into fights every now and then, and he didn't exactly have the kindest personality.. but nobody is perfect, right? kazuki looked around him. he noticed a small plumie clinging to their mother, and they looked at kazuki, "mommy, why does he have lots of ouchies?" obviously, 'ouchies' was the word they used for scars or cuts. their mother looked down at her child and pulled him close. "shh. he's dangerous, don't go near him." kazuki sighed. wip

Ooo, I really liked where this was going, but I'm also really curious as to what you made this plumerian look like if they are covered in scars. I'm not sure if you were just not connecting and didn't finish, or if this is your full form. Either way, I really like your writing style and I would have loved to read more. nwn

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✿ name;; vivian

✿ name meaning;; "lively" or "alive"

✿ nicknames;; vi, vivi. caius likes to call her ian, and it really sets her off.

✿ gender;; female

✿ birthday;; december 2nd, 1998 - vi is currently 15.


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✿ personality;;

xxxxxxxxxxxxxpositive traits;;


✿ vivi is, well, to put it shortly, very shy. in fact, it's almost charming. the way that she gets flustered, and how much innocence is in her voice, it's what someone would call "sweet". on the topic of sweetness, if you talk to vivian, she's quite the kind one. vi will do a lot for her friends, and cares a lot about them. she enjoys pleasing others, and wants for other plumies to like her. she's not very talkative, but does enjoy company, and despises being alone. she's generally friendly, and won't hesitate to exclude anyone that wants to talk with her. also, vi is rather clumsy. this can be seen as kind of cute in a way, to some. another good trait about vivian is the fact that she's very imaginative. although sometimes her vivid ideas can end up freaking her out, you can usually find her zoning out and daydreaming.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxnegative traits;;


✿ despite being sweet and shy in an endearing way, vi can be very cold to plumies that she isn't, well, very fond of. she refers to them as her "special friends". around them, it's like a whole new side of her that isn't seen anywhere else. when you see both her sides, you might wonder- is this the same plumie? moving on, as mentioned before, vivian is very clumsy. once you get past it's "charms", it's not really charming when she drops your phone or breaks the ceiling fan again. she also has 0.02% confidence, and it takes forever to get her to do things. with the constant "but i'll screw up..." and "i really can't.", her total lack of self esteem can be agitating to other plumies. speaking of this, vivi can be very, very whiny. she likes things to be what she considers perfect, and will get upset if something doesn't go as planned. she likes to plan ahead, and carries around a little notebook to write things in- and it gets pretty excessive at points. vi also gets just generally fussy over things. Another one of vivian's flaws is the fact that she's a major coward. she's terrified of the thoughts of blood, gore, murder- and as you can guess, vi's extremely freaked out by zombies. vivi also tends to run from her problems- she can't deal with things very well. she actually acknowledges this, and is trying to fix the issue.

✿ vivian brandt was always a quiet child. she never spoke until age three, and even after that, she's always been one to keep to herself. through her childhood, she's never really had too many permanent friends- her anxiety tortured her as a small child, and while schoolwork wasn't too much of a struggle, talking to other plumies in her age group was. all except for the older girl down the street named luna.
✿ at first, vi was terrified of luna. such an outgoing spirit that seemed kind had to be hiding something. she just had to. so when luna approached vivian, who was sitting in the cherry tree on her front lawn, she was shaking with nervousness. with a "mind if i sit with you?", vi just had no idea what to do in that sort of scenario. as a 5 year old that didn't have any confidence at all at the time, all she could do was nod and hope for the best. the two girls instantly became friends, and despite their differences, they're still extremely close today. vi couldn't really ask for a better friend than luna.
✿ but enough about friendships- what was vivian's family life like? well, her parents were, and are, pretty rich. not to the extent that they were just burning money, but vivian usually got what she wanted and more as a small child. in that way, she is kind of bratty- she'll go "tell daddy" whenever something is bothering her. she's extremely close to her parents, and enjoys spending time with the two of them. vi is an only child too, so that just adds to her closeness. breaking it down, though, she's far more friendlier with her father than her mother. vi's dad, alike her, has a strange sense of humor and a wide imagination. her mother, however, is more on the intelligent side than them, and is sometimes disapproving of her daughter's decisions. whether her "bangs are too long" or she's "not sitting with good posture", vivian feels like she's disappointing her mother. they spend a lot of time together, but they have kind of a separation between them.
✿ skipping to current time, vivian is in 10th grade, and has gotten better with her social anxieties. she and luna are still close as ever, and vi is slowly making friends with all of luna's. vivian is living contently at this moment, and she's happy with the way her life seems to be going.

✿ quirks;;

xxxxxxxxxxxxxexcessive nosebleeds

of course, everyone's nose bleeds every once in a while, but vivian has nosebleeds about once a week or more. her doctor can't find anything wrong with her- vi's nose just bleeds excessively. ((and it's actually kind of gross. her nosebleeds really freak herself out.))

xxxxxxxxxxxxxfidgety

vi has a very hard time with sitting still. she's always doing something with her hands, whether she's biting her nails, tossing a pencil around, she can't stay still in the slightest. she tends to shake her legs and tap her feet a lot. a lot of her friends call vi's consistent moving around "tapping", due to the fact that she usually makes a lot of noise when she does this. it can get on other plumie's nerves, and she tries to remember not to, but she'll do it subconsciously.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxspeaks very softly

vivian speaks very, very quietly. it's extremely hard to hear her at times, and while she sometimes had good things to talk about, nobody gets what she's saying and the entire conversation turns into "what did you say?" and "can you repeat?" vi doesn't stutter or anything, but she usually speaks just barely above a whisper.

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✿ likes;;

- flowers
- junk food
- warm weather
- memes
- shiny things
- drawing
- reading
- video games
- daytime
- flower crowns
- long-lasting friendships
- pink & green
- loud music

✿ dislikes;;

- winter
- caramel
- sticky things
- bugs
- physical activity
- bossiness
- blood & guts
- darkness
- bananas
- milk
- surprises
- overly bright colors
- loneliness
- the beach

✿ hobbies;;

xxxxxxxxxxxxxmaking flower crowns

although she's not amazing at it, one of vi's favorite things to do is make flower crowns with her acquaintance meredith. it's one of the only things that the two of them can do in an entirely friendly fashion. vivian has a ton that she's made stuffed in random places of her room, and she's usually wearing one.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxplaying video games

due to her overall 'girly-ness', you wouldn't really expect vivian to like video games. however, vi loves them. from gta to pokemon, she'll play almost anything that isn't "on sonic '06's level". her favorite game is pokemon, and she isn't the best at the competitive parts of it, but enjoys it regardless.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxreading & writing

vivian loves using her wild imagination, and she loves reading and writing. to her, it opens her mind up to projecting out all her ideas. she's not one to sit and read a 500 page book in two hours, but when vi finds something that she really likes, she gets really involved into it. she'll end up daydreaming about whatever she's read up to days after, and it's hard to pry her away from a good book or two.

✿ a note from the adopter;;


hello !! nwn i'm immask1, and i'm obviously trying out for this babe. i own two plumerians, caius and emmett, and i'd say that i'm fairly active in the plumie community.
enough about that, however. i'd like to tell you why i want her so much uwu i do this on most of my impress me forms, but feel free to skip if you'd like. so why do i want her? well, i'll have to admit- the first idea of a 'zombie plumie' seemed kind of dull to me. i could only imagine a rotting looking plumie- not anything like the beauty that came out of it. she has the qualities of a zombie plumie, yet she's very gorgeous and gentle looking at the same time. my favorite parts of her design are the feathers, and the hair. i really love the way that pink and green go along together, so the feathers on 371 really catch my eye. their design looks like brains, but they're still really pretty quq the colors are just hhhhh <3. but for why i like her hair, it's definitely the white streaks in them. i really like how it looks, especially on the black ^u^ overall, i find this plumie to be extremely pretty, and i can't find anything that i dislike about her design <3.
besides from her appearance, i'm actually really attached to the character that i've developed for her. it's not overly developed, but if i win her, i'd continue to add more and more on to the character that i have going for her. vivian has a personality that i can work with very well, and i'm sure that i'd be able to rp decently with her. i love her design, and my ideas for her make me even more attached to this beautiful plumerian <333.
but i'll attempt to save you from any more walls of text, so this is where my form ends |D good luck to everyone, including you, beat, and i hope that this plumie goes to a great home !!

I really like the whole form and how it is coded. The mix of pictures and drawings help make this form both visual and informational. However, the biggest fall back to me is that the character is a little typical in the traits that you have given it. Plus I was hoping for a character that really liked zombies and fit well with the design. I also see your list of likes and dislikes and pretty much kind of blank on all of these things. You didn't give much reasoning for why she likes/dislikes these things and it makes this section very forgettable. But another upside of your form though is that I kind of like the plumie being very shy and such while the first indication of this plumie would be that they're aggressive.

Username:
RainbowM&MsInFall
Name:
Clarice
Nickname:
Carrie; Clarry; Car-Car
Meaning:
Bright
Sex:
Female
Gender:
Female
Birthdate:
June 24th, 2000


Hex Codes!
Feel free to use c:

█ #486843
█ #1D2E1C
█ #131E10
█ #E0F0E5
█ #080A09
█ #FED6D6
█ #FFB3B3
█ #E67070
█ #C94747



Random Info
- Dragon (chinese zodiac)
- Leo (zodiac sign)
--- Lucky
--- Flexible
--- Imaginative
--- Artistic
--- Bossy
--- Spiritual
--- Charismatic
--- Warm-Hearted
--- Intolerant

Likes::
-Entertaining
-Dance
-Design
-Fashion/Beauty

Hates::
-Attention hoggers
-Being Ignored
-Center of attention
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wip <3

You have a completed form, but I'm not sure if it was finished. nwn" It seems broken for the fact that I would really appreciate more info on the 'random facts.' Just looking at it, it doesn't give as much information as I would like!

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• U s e r N a m e : Frenchie., I do not have any nick names and would only like to be called Frenchie. If I win this Plumerian he will be my first one and I will love him for life.
• P l u m i e N a m e : This little cute boy is named Lark, I have no meaning for the name I just thought it really fit him.
• G e n d e r : Lark's gender is a most definitely a male.

P ｅｒｓｏｎａｌ

• P e r s o n a l i t y : Lark has a very odd personality, some may call Bi-polar. He has mood swings all the time and because of this is anti-social so he does not blow up on any of his close family members or friends. He does shout some times because of his condition but other then that he is a very nice, down to earth Plumerian who just loves to watch 'The Walking Dead.'
• L i k e s : The Walking Dead, Anything to do with zombies, gory movies, horror movies, pop corn [ his favorite food ], And also a variety of video games.
• D i s l i k e s : When seasons of his favorite tv shows end, girlie movies, His bi-polar condition, and vegetables.

You have a really cool character being shown here for a zombie themed plumie OAO the only thing I could say though is that the pictures of the plumies ref take up unnecessary room, and I want to see more development of the character than just a small peek at it.

Hello, I'm O b l i v i o n, a current non-owner c: I hope I can call this beautiful Plumie my own.

This Plumie's name is Francesca. Her friends call her Fish. The reason I chose this name is because Francesca is very quirky and I feel the name suits her personality.

This Plumie is a female. She is bisexual so she likes both males and females but is proud.

~ The beach
~ Reading
~ Orange Fish
~ Drawing
~ Doing Her Hair
~ Chilling with Friends
~ Seashells
~ The Walking Dead
~ Netflix

~ The Rain
~ Plumie's with Stutters
~ Baggy Pants
~ Baseball Caps
~ Math
~ Bugs
~ Pollution
~ Cars

Francesca's birthday is May 21st, 1996.
Which makes her 18 years old.

~ Reading
~ Makeup
~ Studies all day about Fish
~ Stares at her huge Fish Tank
~ Drawing things from Nature.
~ Making friends laugh
~ being different.

~ Bugs
~ Fear of bullying
~ fear of abuse
~ fear of pollution
~ fear of mold

Francesca is really different when it comes to her weirdness. She always carries her little stuffed fish around. Fran can never go without it! Her friends tease her and say she's acting like a little kid. She always has a little pocket fish book in her bag! Can't leave the house without one of those! She keeps the same hair style everyday because no one has the same hair as her. Francesca has a bad habit of always getting up to check that her alarm clock is set. Even if she set it, she still checks it about 5 times before she goes to bed (psss: she sleeps through her alarm clocks)

Different~
Francesca is very different than your normal average young adult. Like I said before she carries her little stuffed fish around, even to school! She wears cute, but unique outfits only that designers would actually take the time for their models to wear! She takes so long picking out outfits. There is always gossip going on about her but she ignores it and she is still happy. Fran is trying to make an organization to help end bullying since she was once a victim.

Friendly~
Francesca loves social interactions an cant live without it. She has her phone by her side 24/7.She has amazing friends who sometimes tease her but they don't mean it. There favorite place to go is the movies where they pick out the scariest ones and watch it together. She also love to meet new plumies! Fran is someone who never judges plumies.She doesn't care if they have a disability, if there not good looking etc.

Over Protective~
Fran hates when you touch her stuff! Never go near her stuff or something not good would happen to you. If you touch her fish, then you will never hear the end of it. No one can touch her stuff besides herself.

Art by: Xerberus

I really love the character you have made here, and the idea of a dependency on a stuffed fish is adorable. The mix of cute and scary makes me really happy cause it's a nice mix. More art instead of flashy pictures would be really nice. The coding is pretty, but is extremely distracting. I found it difficult to stay focused on reading the actual form.

;;Username;; ShammySlyvmin


;;Name;; Melancholy

;;Nicknamed;; Melon
Melon's his nickname as a joke by his imaginary friend Mr. Brain. Mr. Brain would tell him that his name doesn't suit him so he is now dubbed a Melon.


;;Gender;; Biologically female but sees self as male.
Well Melon just can't see himself as a female. He always felt as if he was born into the wrong gender so whenever he is called a female he would get very defensive.


;;Sexuality;; Bisexual
Melon usually likes girls better but he finds boys easier to relate to so he can easily love ether gender.


;;Brains Anyone?;; Brain Masala
Oh man if Melon had a choice he would eat brain masala all day everyday! He just loves the soft, smooth, creamy texture of the cow or goat brain along with the spices added to it. Spicy food for life! He likes to try new foods since his saying is don't knock it till you try it.


;;Quirks;; His dry erase board and speaking in third person.
Melon likes to carry around a dry erase board where he would write for Mr. Brain so everyone knows what Mr. Brain is saying in the conversation but when he speaks he likes to use third person. For example if someone asked his favorite ice-cream flavor he would write for Mr. Brain on the dry erase board and for himself he would say, "I like pumpkin spice flavor, says Melancholy."


;;Reactions;; His peeves, what he enjoys, and how he reacts to those he has a crush on.
Being judged is something he hates so so soooo much! Anything from labels to stereotypes. Melon refuses to support them so he and Mr. Brain are currently finding ways to fight against this injustice. His minor peeve is messes, he expects people to pick up or clean after themselves because he refuses to be the 'maid'.
Melon loves playing pranks, harmless ones of course! Since he has the zombie looks he adds on some makeup blood and pretends to be a zombie, successfully scaring the pants off others.
His goal one day is to make a plush of Mr. Brain so he may have a body of his own.
Ohhh Melon loving someone is the cutest thing ever! He would suddenly blush deep red and then hide or be unable to say much. It's funny when he is asked if he likes someone because he becomes animated and flails his arms denying it and then slouch down in a corner of mushrooms finally admitting his feelings. But if his feelings ever gets returned he will shower them in rainbows of love.


Mr. Brain;; It's like Melon's got two left feet when it comes to dancing. =D

The lovely mix of drawings to actually go with the information makes this form highly memorable as a character. Not only is the character despicably adorable as a zombie, they even have an odd friend that helps develop interaction. I love the form, and the character is so well put together. The only thing I could say is that I wish it did have more information, maybe stories, to develop the character more for me.

username //
heaven stream.
gender //
Male.
name //
Jiang.Half of Jiangshi,meaning zombie in chinese.
story //
Jiang felt somewhat off in the head.It was a school day.Great... Jiang thought.He got out of bed and padded downstairs,tired than ever.After all;he keeps thinking about so many things at once.He inserted two waffles in the toaster.While he waited,he packed his bags for school."Shoot!"He said as he forgot to do his homework.He threw his binder on the table and grabbed the waffles.He stacked the waffles onto a plate and poured syrup on top of it.He slid it to his seat,stopping at the edge.He wiped his forehead in relief.He sat down and wrote down the answers.Eating while doing so.When he finished,he noticed he's late!This is what it's like without his parents...He grabbed his bags and ran outside,chewing a waffle.He arrived in 5 minutes,since he missed the bus.Just in time.Three other plumies stared at him with a cold stare.
"Looser.."One wispered.The other two snickered as the bell rang.He padded to class.After school,the three plumies from the start of school stood in front of Jiang.Jiang tried to move away,but they blocked him.
"I have to go."Said Jiang.
"Too bad."Answered the biggest one.The 3 threatened him.Until a girl plumie saw.
"Leave him alone!"She shouted.
"What are you going to do?"The smallest one said.
"Oh,I have my ways,the principal,your MOMS."She replied,picking up her phone.The bullies padded off.Then the female walked up to Jiang."Whats your name?"She asked.
"Jiang..."He answered.
"Nice name,I gotta go.See you!"She said,running off.
"Hey-Wait!"Jiang shouted back.But she was gone.That's a typical day at school...
Jiang is bullied,and very different.
animal that represents //
The crow.Not sure why,but he loves crows,and they actually bond quite well.Crows are his friends.Also a tad bit of ravens,as they are loners mostly.

The story was written alright, but the character doesn't show up much. This just seemed to be a small peak at what the plumie might be as a character. If there was more information, I would have connected more to the character and it would have been more memorable.

Username:
Mythy (Still a non-owner). I really appreciate the concept of the no-form-left-behind thing, since I've been trying out for these for a couple of months and haven't had any luck yet. I'd really like to know what I can do to make my form better!

The Basics

Name:
Victoria, but she goes by Vic. Part of it is for convenience's sake, but part of it is that she finds it easier if people assume she's a guy before meeting her for the first time, so her girly personality doesn't color their interaction with her before they get to know her.

(She's also named after Victor Frankenstein. Thought it might go with the theme)

Sex:
Vic is biologically female, and surprisingly girly. Although one might believe from her short haircut and more masculine coloration she'd be a little more boyish, Vic still loves dressing up and having girls' night outs with her friends. She only wishes that wearing reds and pinks didn't make her look so Christmas-y.

Heart and Mind

Personality:
As mentioned previously, Vic is a bit of a girly-girl. She loves dressing up in pretty clothes and shopping for them. She's also a surprisingly good cook! However, she absolutely hates when people assume that, just because she likes the color pink, she must be a vapid waste of space who can't think further than the next shopping trip or boyfriend. Nothing can be further from the truth- Vic, although not a genius by any standards, is intelligent and incredibly hardworking. She never leaves a task half-finished if she can help it, and absolutely loves learning things for the sake of learning. She hopes to be an engineer or an architect someday, and to make a lasting impression on the world.

That being said, Vic isn't above using people's first impressions of her to her advantage. Someone sees her as just another girl? Fine. Let them underestimate her. She's not above using her femininity to manipulate those who see her as weak, just because she happens to like wearing dresses. In addition, although she has incredible patience when it comes to a task that she needs to complete, but will take time, she has no patience for others taking longer than she believes that it would have taken her to complete a task. She also tends to make snap decisions about things that she considers to be unimportant, and those decisions tend to come back to bite her in the but later. She also doesn't tend to take others' feelings into account when making decisions that will affect others.

Positive Traits:
+ Intelligent
+ Hardworking
+ Ambitious
+ Self-confident

Negative Traits:
- Manipulative
- Impatient
- Impulsive
- Blunt

Sexuality:
Vic is a demisexual panromantic. She's open to romance from any corner it comes from, but she's not really interested in sexual relations unless she really likes the other plumie.

Likes:
Food: Chocolate, Beef Ramen, Black Raspberry Ice Cream
Things that are pretty for the sake of prettiness
Purples, blues and reds
Reading, especially science fiction and fantasy

Dislikes:
Being cold
Rude people
Strangely textured food
Neon colors

Characteristics

Balanced or clumsy?
Vic would like people to think of her as graceful, but she's about as coordinated as a newborn giraffe. That is to say, not very.

Mannerisms/Poses/Movement:
Vic tends to eye-roll a lot when someone says something silly. She tends to stand with her feet planted well apart, giving her as sturdy a foundation as possible. She uses a lot of gestures when talking, rarely standing still unless she has to.

Describe their walk:
"Attempted grace" would be the best way to describe it. She tries to walk as gracefully as possible, but every once in a while, she trips. Rather dramatically.

Speech Patterns:
Depending on who she's with, Vic's speech pattern change. Around those she respects as superior, her voice tends to be higher pitched, and she speaks much more formally. Around friends, her voice is much lower pitched, and she speaks less formally. She does have a tendency to stutter very slightly, and will repeat sentences if she stutters at any point during it, even if she's only a word or two from the end of the sentence.

Unique phrases/words:
She tends to repeat phrases she heard in books, or on television shows that she's seen lately.

Do they curse, and if so, to what extent?
Not unless she's incredibly angry, scared, or surprised, or she feels the situation warrants it. She doesn't swear in everyday speech.

Voice:
Her voice is relatively low pitched for a girl, smooth and relatively level in tone. When excited or angry, her voice climbs several octaves in pitch, and will stay there until she calms down.

Describe their laugh:
She has a relatively pleasant laugh, if slightly too high-pitched. It's not too annoying, though. If she starts laughing really hard, she tends to snort.

Sleep Patterns:
Vic is a night owl. She'd rather take a nap during the day and stay up late than go to bed at a reasonable time. Once asleep, she sleeps pretty soundly.

Psych Evaluation:

Secret desires:
Vic really just wants to do something that will change the world someday.

Self-confidence level:
She gives the impression of being more self-confident than she actually is, although she's been faking it until she makes it. On a scal of 1 to 10, she's about a 7.5.

How does she see herself?
She probably sees herself in a slightly more rosy light than she actually is. She doesn't tend to acknowledge her bossiness or impatience with those she sees as incompetent, and tends to see herself as more intelligent than she maybe actually is.

What is she most proud of?
Probably her intelligence and drive

What does she like least about herself?
She wishes that her appearance was a little girlier, and that red and green didn't go so poorly together.

How does she express herself?
Ah... Poorly. She tends to bottle up her emotions until they get too much to handle, and then explode at the first person who angers her.

Patience level:
Low, unless she knows and trusts the other person.

Emotion or Logic?
Mostly logic, some emotion. She prefers to work off of facts, but she can be impulsive and reckless.

Most at ease when:
Alone or with close friends, working on something that she knows.

Ill at ease when:
In a group of people she doesn't know, or when she's out of her element.

Describe their sense of humor:
Self deprecating, very punny.

If granted one wish, what would it be? Why?
She'd want to be able to succeed in anything she tried. Want to fly? She somehow succeeds. World peace? Success. Going to an Ivy League college? Done.

If she could be described with one of the seven virtues, which would it be?
Temperence

If she could be described with one of the seven sins, which would it be?
Pride

Biggest Vulnerability:
Once she trusts someone, if they betray her, she probably wouldn't be able to come back from that easily.

Optimist or Pessimist:
She prefers "realist"

Introvert or extrovert:
Introvert

Greatest Fear:
Freezing to death. She hates being cold.

Other Fears/Insecurities/Phobias:
Being humiliated, being wrong, not having any friends/being alone

Musical talents/instruments:
She plays French Horn as a hobby, and used to be a mellophone player in marching band. She can't carry a tune in a bucket if you ask her to sing, though.

Character's darkest/deepest secret:
Most people assume that she really loves horror films, but she secrets hates them. She pretends to like them, because people always seem to be so enthusiastic about them, but now it's gotten to the point that she can't admit that she hates them for fear of her friends realizing she was lying to them.

Agh I don't have time or payment for art. It seems I'll need to hope a picture is worth a little less than a thousand words.

The character you have made is very enjoyable and I love what you have here. Unfortunately a bit more coding or just one art piece would have brought you a long way. It is rather intimidating to judges when they see a large word wall. The question section I feel could have been done better: maybe put an image along the left of it. Blank white space in a form can tend to be a little boring to find. The character you built though seems to be nicely thought out, and I do like what you have started. It's a very nice character all together and I just wish there was a little bit more to look at rather than read, but it's still very nice. Plus your writing is easy on the mind to read because of the quality.

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Big tip for impress me contests. uwu Make sure to check into the fanclub sometimes and ask for people to check over your form! Getting some pre-judging will help you sort out any problems you are having. Getting art in an impress me tends to be a large bonus because it helps large word walls to be easier to read. Make sure the art shows the character as well: you want the judge to connect with the character and want to see it more.

[serl]

Oh,Ok.

{Defiently not gonna win cx}

[Mythy]

I just wanted to thank you for doing the comments on all of the forms- I wish I had had time to code it better or do some art for it, I agree with you completely that word walls are horrible. Thank you for the comment on the quality of my writing (I try, I really do, writing is a much greater strength for me than art)!

So basically, thank you so much for the critique on my form, I know I'll definitely be putting it into practice next time I apply for a plumie.

Good luck to all of the other entrants, and a great big thank you to Beatnik!

[O b l i v i o n ☯]

Good luck to everyone that entered! Beatnik, I do agree that my form coding was a little to overwhelming and I think I was working too hard to try to get my first Plumie xDD

I think you should use this method for future plumies as this helps me make my forms better. ^w^

[ShammySlyvmin]

X3 Yes I agree with liking the way this is being judged, it really helped me to know what was needed in my form and I thank you for the critique!

[Beatnik]

;;Username;; ShammySlyvmin


;;Name;; Melancholy

;;Nicknamed;; Melon
Melon's his nickname as a joke by his imaginary friend Mr. Brain. Mr. Brain would tell him that his name doesn't suit him so he is now dubbed a Melon.


;;Gender;; Biologically female but sees self as male.
Well Melon just can't see himself as a female. He always felt as if he was born into the wrong gender so whenever he is called a female he would get very defensive.


;;Sexuality;; Bisexual
Melon usually likes girls better but he finds boys easier to relate to so he can easily love ether gender.


;;Brains Anyone?;; Brain Masala
Oh man if Melon had a choice he would eat brain masala all day everyday! He just loves the soft, smooth, creamy texture of the cow or goat brain along with the spices added to it. Spicy food for life! He likes to try new foods since his saying is don't knock it till you try it.


;;Quirks;; His dry erase board and speaking in third person.
Melon likes to carry around a dry erase board where he would write for Mr. Brain so everyone knows what Mr. Brain is saying in the conversation but when he speaks he likes to use third person. For example if someone asked his favorite ice-cream flavor he would write for Mr. Brain on the dry erase board and for himself he would say, "I like pumpkin spice flavor, says Melancholy."


;;Reactions;; His peeves, what he enjoys, and how he reacts to those he has a crush on.
Being judged is something he hates so so soooo much! Anything from labels to stereotypes. Melon refuses to support them so he and Mr. Brain are currently finding ways to fight against this injustice. His minor peeve is messes, he expects people to pick up or clean after themselves because he refuses to be the 'maid'.
Melon loves playing pranks, harmless ones of course! Since he has the zombie looks he adds on some makeup blood and pretends to be a zombie, successfully scaring the pants off others.
His goal one day is to make a plush of Mr. Brain so he may have a body of his own.
Ohhh Melon loving someone is the cutest thing ever! He would suddenly blush deep red and then hide or be unable to say much. It's funny when he is asked if he likes someone because he becomes animated and flails his arms denying it and then slouch down in a corner of mushrooms finally admitting his feelings. But if his feelings ever gets returned he will shower them in rainbows of love.


Mr. Brain;; It's like Melon's got two left feet when it comes to dancing. =D

I didn't want to ruin anyone's 'Non-owner November' fun by taking away that title from you, so I waited until it was over to post. uwu The winner of the plumie is Shammy. I thought the character added nice diversity to what I usually see! The art to go along with really showed you spent a bit of time thinking out personality for the plumie and the imaginary friend of theirs~ Of course, I was really hoping to see a huge zombie enthusiast around, but I can't be picky with what other people want in a character. I also really loved the character that Mythy created for the plumie. It was rather entertaining to read, and I'm really surprised you haven't gotten a plumie yet. I wonder why you haven't since you make very nice characters, but maybe you just need an art piece to help spice up your form. Because I cannot give a RU since I am only a GA and my term is already over (Posted my last plumie alreadty: western one), I'd like to offer an art piece to you for the next contest you do that you need an art piece for. owo I can only offer one commission though, so when you pm me about it, I'll tell you what I think if it's a good idea or not, and if I have enough time for the competition to make a good piece.

[ShammySlyvmin]

OAO Omg *spazzes* ;u; omg I'm soooo shocked since there were so many amazing forms!!! Thank you so much, you really made my day!!!! And I also learned how to improve my form so I am also very grateful for that! X3 This contest was super fun! <3333333333333 8'D And pfff Melon does have a obsession over the game Left 4 Dead/ Left 4 Dead 2.

[Mythy]

congrats, Shammy! I loved your form- I had a feeling you'd win!

And thank you so very much, Beatnik. When I find the plumie of my dreams, I'll definitely take you up on that offer- thank you so much!