Re: Deerssert #240

Postby berceuse » Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:05 am

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Postby epimetheus » Thu Jul 10, 2014 6:56 am

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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby hypersomnia. » Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:54 am

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Name: Aurelia (Or Relia, as her friends call her) (Or-Ell-Ee-Uh)
Gender: Female
Story:

READ BEFORE STORY: She has a british accent! It will change the way you see her.

It was an especially bright day under the sea- which is odd because the sea is a dark place. Anyway, it was a very bright day in the sea, and, of course I found out the bad way that involves a lion fish bloody stinging you on the back! So I had to trudge (or swim lazily) all the way the clownfish den and wait for them to wake up - there's a reason why they sleep in those poison spokes. But it wasn't that bad, as the brightness helped me on my way, and the clownfish woke up reluctantly, and came out to see me. "Ey, what do you want?" This particular clownfish seemed to have a new-york like accent, and he also seems really reluctant to heal me right now, so I said back, "Um... may I see Reque please? He's my usual Doc." "No, ye got what ye got, no tradin. I don't care if he's your usual or not." He swam behind me and examined my back. "Well then - lionfish gettin you, ey? I can get that fixed up for you in a jiffy, ust hold on for a second. By the way - my names Red." My eyes went wide and I backed up a bit as he easily swam through the anemone without crying out slightly. How do they even...? He came back and rubbed some ointment onto my sting and then left without saying a single word. "How rude." I said, glaring back and walking back towards my den. But before I could get back, Reque jumped out of the shadows, scaring the crap out of me. "Reque, what in the world do you think your doing? You cant just jump out of the shadows like that, you'll give me a heart attack!" "Hehe, sorry. Anyway, I got you this." He pushes forth a blue crown out of the shadows blushing. "Oh, Reque! Thank you so much!!! It's absolutely beautiful!" I said, Adjusting it on my head. "Thank you so much!!!' "Your welcome. Hey would you want to explore a shipwreck with me? Thats where I found you crown, and thought I should stop and wait for you, you know, for the rest of it." "So you were scared." I say grinning. He looks at the sand. "Sure." I say reassuringly. "So, when are we going?" I ask. "Now?" "Works with me." he says, smiling. He lead to the shipwreck which was about 50 feet away, at least. When we got there, it seemed pretty depressing, and I wasn't surprised Reque was scared. But I tryed to seem brave and urged forward, giving Reque no chance to complain. I kept swimming onward, faster and faster, until I was so deep inside the ship that I had lost my way entirely and couldn't see a thing. Then I heard a laugh. I tired, raspy laugh. It was Reque's. "Uhm... Reque? Stop it, I mean it!!" Then I felt it... wrapping around my leg like it was a christmas present, pulling me away from the darkness, and into the light. And there was Reque, holding a knife and smiling evilly. And he lunged at my heart. But I am capable of things, too. I spun around, and kicked. I missed, but the net fell to the ground. Partly, anyway. I stood on my back hooves and crushed him, like a horse, my heart with him. And then I ran, far away, ran until I couldn't see my town anymore, ran until there was nothing but sand around. Oh yeah, my crown... I felt my head, searching for it. But it wasn't there. Good. I kept running, then tripped over something sparkly, and blue. My crown. Dang it! It was going to teleport to me were ever went wasn't it?! So I put it on my head, and climbed onto shore. And here I am now, hoping to find another water deerssert who understands my problem - someone like me. Someone like Aurelia.
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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby Leafe » Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:05 pm

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Name:Ariel - Ari for short.
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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby laf » Fri Jul 11, 2014 5:57 am

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    Name: Rhaenys
    Gender: Female
    Story: Do ordinary days start out being thrown out of a comfortable float by a whirring man-machine? Boats, they're called. Rhaenys had seen them before, of course, but never had one come so close. She had been so content to linger just under the surface and watch the dolphins chase around the silver shoals of fish, only to be tossed briefly out of the water and then back under. The shouts coming from the men aboard the boat are easily heard when she resurfaces, pointing and speaking to each other in their strange foreign tongue. Rhaenys can only tilt her head and watch as they run about their vessel. She is briefly distracted by her crown tilting and beginning to slide off of her head. The week before, Rhaenys dug the trinket out of a pile of doodads she found in a small cove whilst poking her nose where she probably shouldn't have. It's only blue stone with pink seashells, but Rhaenys found it to complement her scales nicely. Lost in thought about her appearance, Rhaenys doesn't notice the net flying towards her until it has almost reached the water. With a shriek of surprise, Rhaenys turns away and tries to dive under, but her back right hoof gets snagged in the net. She tugs violently while the fishermen begin to pull the net in, thrashing about in the water as she is pulled closer and closer to the surface. Finally, as she is almost out of the water and with as much strength as she can muster, Rhaenys twists about in air and the net rips around her. She plunges back into the ocean and swims as fast as she can down to the safety of the depths.
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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby gomi. » Sat Jul 12, 2014 8:32 am

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Me? I'm Lisa Kashnovi, a non-owner looking for a deersert of my own! But enough about me, let's get on to this beautiful bae!
Name:
This girl is Ariel. Not very original, but beautiful.
Gender:
This girl is a female. Could she really be anything else?
Story:
Story?... Oh! You want to know "The Story", as Ariel calls it? Well then, here it is:
Ariel was dangerously close to the surface today. The surfers were out. They came out often, but Ariel usually missed them. They looked so awesome, riding the waves. She wanted to try. At night, Ariel walked out of the water, carrying planks from a sunken ship tied together with seaweed. She was going to try surfing. She put the "surfboard" in the water. She put a hoof on the planks. Surprisingly, it didn't sink under her weight. A huge wave was coming in. She paddled out to sea. Approaching the wave, she braced herself for impact. The wave towered above her, and Ariel felt the board rise and turn with it. Ariel shrieked as the wave picked her up. "Wait... am I...?" She whimpered and looked down. She was! "I-I-I'M SURFING!!" She laughed, but wiped out, gasping and paddling to the shore. A boy walked up to her, grinning. She looked up, scared, then realized the bottom half of her body was hidden in water. "That was pretty cool." He chuckled, and held out a hoof. Ariel blushed. "Yea." She dismissed his hoof. "I'm okay." She sighed. The deerssert looked around. "Where's your board?" He asked. Ariel sighed. "I-it was old anyways. I don't need it." "Well, you can use my spare. I'm going surfing." The deerssert said as he pointed to a surfboard and waded into the water. Ariel stared at it, then looked at him. He was already out surfing. She never knew people surfed at night. She walked out of the water, careful to not let the boy see her scales. She walked over to the surfboard, which was a completely different from her own. She wasn't surprised. She took it and waded into the water, next to surfer. She smiled at him, then sighed and looked down. The surfer frowned. "What's wrong?" He asked. "I have something to show you..." Ariel said. The surfer nodded as she took her scales out of the ocean. "Cool!" He laughed then went to meet the wave. Ariel watched him, hearts barely visible in her eyes.

The next night, Ariel and the surfer met again. "Hi!" He said and waded in with Ariel. "What's your name?" "Ariel." "Baron. Anyways, I have something to tell you." Was he going to confess his love? The next words were a whisper. "I'm sorry." The next thing she knew, a net was around her, strangling her, and she was dragged to the shore. "I love you. But you can't stay in the ocean!" He said with a crazed grin. "How about a fishtank? I can watch and love you." Ariel struggled to speak. "I fell in love with a monster." She hissed. Baron looked down at her, hatred burning in his eyes. "Well. I'll never forget your unnoble death." He said and left. Ariel almost died, but she managed to gnaw herself free. There was a leftover piece on her ankle. She decided to make it as a memento of the monster she had loved.


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This would be sooooo much better but the 500 word limit was murdering me. Xd Sorry for all the short choppy sentences! It's also not designed very much but I cannot code for my life.
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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby ophanimera » Mon Jul 14, 2014 4:08 pm

Best of luck to everyone.
This deer is gorgeous...

To the future winner :: I'd love to roleplay Heimdall with this girl {literate/semi-lit RP preferred, any relationship, even romantic}.
hmu if you're interested after the results are announced. <3
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Re: Deerssert #240

Postby 'paradox » Sun Jul 20, 2014 4:15 pm

♥ Thanks everyone for trying out ♥
♥ Winners below ♥

Congratulations to ...


Vulpining !

I absolutely loved your story! Especially the ending; where she promises herself to be the protector of the ocean. I hope you will enjoy your new Deerssert, I know she will have a good home!

We're not done yet !

Congratulations to ...

capt. Hook !

I couldn't let your story go unnoticed! You will be receiving a runner up,which will be another merdeerssert.

Once again,thanks to everyone for entering!
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Re: Deerssert #240 WINNER

Postby mango sherbet » Sun Jul 20, 2014 4:18 pm

      congrats to you both ^^ please don't use the art i made.
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Re: Deerssert #240 WINNER

Postby scolipede. » Sun Jul 20, 2014 4:22 pm

Congrats to both of you~!!
Everyone (or the ones that finished) had amazing stories! ;o; <3
So congrats, and even to those that didn't win! I know that I enjoyed reading through the entries~!! <33
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