[Jippy]

Can I request a day or two extention?

I would like a two day extension as well, if that’s okay?

[ArizonaT3a]

Due to many pms, and a couple requests on here. I will be giving this a 6 day extension, one more extension is allowed after it if needed. But that will be all! Good luck everyone, I saw some pretty good forms that were completed. ^^

[Jippy]

Due to many pms, and a couple requests on here. I will be giving this a 6 day extension, one more extension is allowed after it if needed. But that will be all! Good luck everyone, I saw some pretty good forms that were completed. ^^

Thank you!

[Cyrano]

Username: Smith(ers)

Name:KONE

Gender: N/A

Sexuality:N/A

Captains Log Number One
We have stumbled across a planet much different from our own. On a land of beasts beyond comprehension we have classified them as Scalabars. My crew and I were sent to conquer this wasteland but...the creatures though are much different than us and our home creatures. The Creator would be truly fascinated

Captains Log Number Two
Some days I stay awake and wonder was the Creator wrong? Is my existence just some fickle dream? Is my death to be in vain for some Creator to benefit while his creation suffers?

Captains Log Number Three
It’s all coming back to me now the memories...I was so blind. The training all just for a suicide mission for some asinine Creator to benefit. No longer will I lay idly by watching this dastardly plot be done to my world I will regain my crew and awaken them from their comas of ignorance.

Captains Log 4
I AM KONE, I AM INTELLIGENCE. Leader of a Resistance

[Flooffy]

Username:flooffy
Name: B6-X5/binx
Gender: female
What do they believe they are?:
I was real once. I had feelings, I could feel pain.
But They took all of that away from me, made me fake. Now I feel nothing.
They turned me into a monster.

Sleep
The last thing I remember before falling asleep was the bang, and hitting the cold floor. Babies crying people screaming. A man rushed over to me, he was saying something but I couldn't understand him. A wave of exhaustion fell over me, and I just wanted to sleep, and never wake back up.

Awaking
All I feel is cold.
Everything is cold.
My eyes slowly open my vision is rather blurry, and It takes a few seconds for eyes to adjust and everything to focus.
I look around the small room I'm confined in, and all I see are four concrete walls, a small flickering lightbulb, and a huge steal door. "Huh, is this the waiting room for hell? I thought it was supposed to be hot..." I mumble shivering.
I try to stand, and hear the sound of mechanical parts clicking and groaning.
I look down to see my front legs had been replaced by machines.
It wasn't long before I realized I was part machine.
I screamed.

Piece by piece
I become a little less human. They replace something to simply "improve" my abilities. My feelings slowly start to waver.
Everything slowly gets colder.
every is day fight. I bite, lash out I do everything in my power to escape, and one day I did.
I was running thought the never ending concrete halls. Then there it was, light from outside. I could tell because I hadn't seen something so pure in what felt like ages. I was feet away from the light when I felt a slight pain in my neck and I black out.
I woke up in the test room to see another part of me being replaced.
That day Is when I became completely artificial. This really is hell.

Numb
They take me apart and put me back together a million different ways. To Them I'm just some experiment, just some toy for Them to play with.
replace every part that made me alive. I'm just an empty shell at this point.
Oh, why couldn't they have just let me sleep, I have all the memories from my past life. They used to make me happy, now when I recall them I feel nothing. But that's how I'm programmed.
Now everything is cold, so cold.
I am nothing more than a empty shell.
A machine.

notes: wc=426 characters=2255
welp, this is super last minute, hope I made it time...
Didn't spell check it, so it's probably the crapiest thing every written. oh well.


Extras: art wip maybe...

[alyxmin]

Username: pebs
Name: commander atlas
Gender: male
What do they believe they are?: (read above this please so no one puts "unicorn")

the kalon only heard a light bzzzzz from the outside world.
he was an ordinary kalon, he didn't know he was meant for greater things. That's what those aliens told him that day, he was special. he was important.
so that's what he thought he was.
he didn't know they were just dragging all of this on because they wanted to hurt the kalon planet.
and now he was a failure.
he truly knew now, he was ordinary, and he had all the flaws of it.

---
doctor's pov:
it was unbearable to see a patient suffering. when we found the kalon missing two of his legs, breathing heavily, even the most advanced doctors almost had a heart attack when we realized who it was.
it was commander atlas.

missing for a few months, to find him cruelly hurt on a ship he somehow drove close to the hospital.(we think he used his head to control everything, but even then, how could he get here? they didn.'t know.) by the time we found him, he already passed out from exhaustion. we think he may have been driving for a few hours in a row, and he clearly tried to take care of his wounds. he had wrapped some elastic bandaids across his cruelly beaten legs.
it was going to be a shock for him when he woke up, to see his now amputated arms.

--
pain.
that's all i felt.
i howled out, my eyes sealed shut. I wanted to open them, but they seemed to have a different idea.
pain.
i felt it again, crying out once again.
pain.
again, and again, it never changed.
pain.
the limp arms holding me down seemed to go away, making it a lot more comfortable.
pain.
it hurt, it hurt, it hurt!
'' stop! ''
I shrieked, wailing, i needed the pain to go away. I barely could say the words, it jumbled and the voice I had a mixture of pain.
pain.
oh, please, stop it.

--
doctor's pov:
commander atlas is restless again. we keep giving him shots to make him go to sleep, but he keeps having night terrors whenever he shuts his eyes.
i'm afraid that he won't make it.
many doctor's are already quitting on the job. they think that he'll never survive, and he should just be put to sleep.
i'm not giving up though.
This patient is going to survive.

--
breathing heavily, I was beside the aliens again. they filled my head with lies, telling me how I was special and that they could help me.
but again, it was lies, lies, lies.
they filled my head with hollow lies, and I was a fool for believing any word they said.
I needed to get out, but once I tried, they hit my ship.
I was falling, falling.
the items crushed my front chest.
and then my legs went limp.
but I needed to get out, I needed to-

my eyes fluttered open. my eyes adjusted to the bright light, and I swore I couldn't speak.
I was lame.
No front paws anymore, no power or commandments for me anymore.
my glory days were over.
I knew it more than ever now, I was ordinary, nothing more.
I was a living being.

Extras: (Optional)
maybe i'll add some later ?? but not rn

[Hot Dad]

Mark,,,
I'd love to participate if another extension is done ! : )

[ArizonaT3a]

I've gotten 5 pm requests about another extension.
This will be the last extension sadly.
The competition will be extended for 5 more days, it'll end on December 3rd 9pm MT.

Sidenote at the very least, there will most likely be 2-3 ru's for this. Good luck again everyone. ^^

[LovetheHoly]

username: ghod
gender : male
boyoboyoboy idk why or how I'm
gonna finish in 1 day :")

R I D D I C K



The world is empty | The earth is full

"I've lost my way bot", he heard an echo, he understood the words, they come from an origin of which they are spoken from, there must be someone else here. Getting up he looked around, he felt hurt but wasn't sure where it was coming from nor what to do with it, "You are, the greatest knowledge, and the beholder of humility", it echoed once more, but he sensed something in the voice, a manifest of grief without tears. His eyes darted up continuing to search for the voice but with no panic or fear, seeing pipes and clanking metal shutter and swing from the dome shaped roof, they could easily fall and crush him so he trotted at a mild pace towards a rusty control panel, he wasn't sure how he recognized these things, he doesn't even remember seeing them, or anything for that matter. The building began to tremor, he followed is instincts and held tightly to leg of the table still not riddled with fear but more so being cautious of his surroundings, he staggered up onto his feet and scanned the panel, he felt like he knew what to do but couldn't do it, he doesn't remember. He saw a pamphlet reading, 'RIDDICK R.I', he peered at it as he tried to rapidly open it up but the building was almost angry at him as it knocked him off his feet with another jolt of shaking, he still had the pamphlet clenched in his hand as he shut his eyes hearing loud sparks zap from above, he stumbled up worried trying to find an efficient escape route. Suddenly in the corner of his eye he turns around to see a long sparking wire dangling right above a tank, he dashed to an exit and kept running out until he was in a field of tall grass, he saw the building as it had gone in flames by now and slowly fell apart then exploding into a burst of strange lights that seemed rather out of the ordinary. "私は花火が好きです! (I like the fire works !)", he heard a more younger, feminine, and louder voice to his right, he didn't know what she was but whatever that may be she was certainly either a dwarf or a child, he stared at her unsure how to respond, "なぜあなたは沈黙している？(why are you silent?), he still kept staring hardly understanding her, and in fear she could have caused this as he still doesn't know what she is, "あなたはそうしない好きな花火?" (You don't like fireworks?), she said giggling sitting beside him watching the explosions grow smaller and shorter until they simmered down to flames, he looked on as well confused, there was silent pause a moment of peace within the chaos, that was until she rolled over and pet his arm, "あなたは面白い腕を持っている (you have funny arms)" she exclaimed chuckling and feeling around it playfully out of curiosity, "私はしません持ってる奇妙な腕" she mumbled frowning at her arms before looking back up at him, "あなたは何者ですか？(what are you?) she questioned pointing directly at him, he slightly raised his brows looking down at himself, he had a feeling that he understood what she was saying, so he then pointed at himself as well, she reacted with a nod, "そう、あなた (yes you) she repeated as she began to sit up eager to hear his response, but this girl wasn't going to hear anything out of him anytime soon, he looked over at the building that was continuing to smolder in ashes as the flames kept burning the remaining structure, then he recalls the pamphlet and quickly holds up the hand in which he had kept it, but it was torn and had missing parts that could be long gone in the fire by now, he fumbled through it only to tear it again realizing his claws were damaging the vital information, she got up with eyes wide peaking over his hands to read it, "面白い名...(interesting name...)" she said quietly as she couldn't quite read the name so the girl assumed she had never seen it before. She tried to pronounce it numerous times but couldn't quite get it right, but he wanted to learn what it said so he began trying to repeat her attempts until she seemed to give up, he looked down at the pamphlet and practiced, "R.. Riddi...k?" he mumbled almost inaudible, he looked down at his hands and moved them trying to figure out of what specimen he is.

R.I LOG 80
"I've been taught how many moons become years and how many years become two, including the alphabet and mathematical system, I'm now bilingual being fluent in English as well and have officially completed it, it may have been my mother tongue as I felt a stronger connection to, and it was easy to learn. She always came back to visit me in the fields as we both collect carnations in the light of the day, she began to ask me the same things that I hadn't understood before, my dear friend never seemed to leave without a response. I had no mother, I wasn't born, therefore I am not a biological being, and now that I can read the pamphlet clearer, it reads below the title, "regenerative intelligence", which only further proves unfortunately I am not of her kind, when I told her she displayed no worry in her expression and accepted me as I am as unknown as I may be. While she held no judgement, the superstitions and rumors about my presence around the village were beginning to include my friend and exclude her from her kind, I couldn't do that to a soul as forgiving as hers, so the unknown must live where the unknown lies. Today I left her a basket of carnations, and I hope to send this letter to her when I return to earth."
- Riddick


He came back to an empty land full of tragedy. Riddick searched hours, there was no life in sight. Only a sign reading "Nagasaki | Quarantined"

[(1000/1000)

[ArizonaT3a]

This is officially
CLOSED
But you have 5 hours to quickly finish up if needed, any forms edited after the given time limit- will be disqualified.

No new entries are allowed, along with extensions.
If you have any questions feel free to pm me, although responses will be slow today till I am home.

The winners will not be announced till tomorrow or the day after, I prefer to reread over forms a lot and it takes time.
Thank you all for being patient, and good luck everyone!