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Rise | #0989

Postby denja » Wed Sep 26, 2018 5:36 am

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!



to win this cat, tell me...
how did they lose the kits?

this cat was on kitten-sitting duty and the next minute... they're gone!
where could they be? was it even their kits?
what's going to happen now?!
the possibilities are endless...

now where have those tiny pitter-patters went?..

min: 500 words
max: 1500 words, 2 art pieces

this prompt is pretty open - as long as it explains how the kittens have got lost, that's good with me!

perhaps think about...
- why are they looking after the kits?
- where are their parents?
- what's this cats relationship to the kits?
- is this the cat's fault, or the kittens?
- how is it resolved? were the kits found?


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Gender: female
Age: --- moons
Description: a short-haired dilute tortoishell cat with medium white and caramel-brown eyes.

Other Features: None
Siblings: None Living


ends on the 8th of october!

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Father: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby weegeestar5 » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:39 am

username: weegeestar5
cat's name: morningbloom
gender: female
age: 56 moons
rank: permanent queen / nursery helper
clan: duskclan
where's the kits?:

big wip :3c
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby Chimericect » Wed Sep 26, 2018 7:49 am

username:
cat's name:
gender: female
age:
rank:
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where's the kits?:
- Punished by adderbite , forced to watch the kittens
- very bitter, doesn’t actually watch them
- kits get bored and decide to play a prank on her
- she doesn’t realize and they’re gone for like an hour before she realizes
- finds kittens out of camp, playing by the rapids
- obviously she screams because ??? danger???
- she rushes them back to camp where adderbite is,, less than happy
- kits take the blame, she has newfound respect towards them and is also forced to play with them for another two moons
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby kaminari.denki » Wed Sep 26, 2018 10:19 am

username: 1nkk
cat's name: Poppy | Bloom of Growing Poppy
gender: female
age: 15 Moons
rank: Hunter
clan: Reflected Sky
where's the kits?:
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby liightning » Wed Sep 26, 2018 12:06 pm

username: salty.sweet
cat's name: Wren Song (Wren) --> Wrenstar
gender: female
age: 24 moons (2 years)
rank: leader (in the future)
clan: LightningClan
where are the kits?: 500-1500 words

perhaps think about...
- why are they looking after the kits?
- where are their parents?
- what's this cats relationship to the kits?
- is this the cat's fault, or the kittens?
- how is it resolved? were the kits found?
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby whisky » Wed Sep 26, 2018 2:35 pm

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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby Only_Sky » Wed Sep 26, 2018 5:33 pm

      username: Only_Sky
      cat's name: Cloudsplash
      gender: female
      age: 97 moons
      rank: Elder
      clan: Fogclan
      where's the kits?:

      Cloudsplash, as an elder, is in charge of taking care of the kits of the clan. When a queen first births her litter of kits, she remains in the camp until they begin to waddle about beyond the nursery. Although it is her choice when she leaves her kits to begin patrolling once more, most queens will leave their kits in camp after their first or second moons in order to help out with daily duties. She will of course, return throughout the day to check up on them, but otherwise leave the care of her offspring to the elders.

      Since the first age of Fogclan, those who constantly occupy the camp have been dubber the carer of the clan's kits, and those cats are almost always the elders. It isn't just a job of simply babysitting, but also teaching the newest generations about their lineage as a clan-cat. The care of the kits is taken very seriously in Fogclan, they are taught basic training early on; how to hunt and to defend themselves in case of any emergency or disaster, and are given the opportunity to develop their social skills with older cats. But it is not all strict training, there are traditional games passed down through the generations, and stories that every cat in the clan will know after countless tellings. There are perks to befriending the elderly for the kits too, at the age of 4 moons kits are allowed outside the camp so long as they are accompanied by an adult, so if they catch one of the elders in a good mood, they might just be in for an adventure.

      [ The story will take place when Sloepaw and Frostpaw were two and four moons ]

      " Come out, come out wherever you are! I'm a big hungry fox looking for a meal! "

      A couple of excited squeals sounded from the inside of the nursery. Chuckling to herself, Cloudsplash stomped toward the shrubs, making low rumbling growls and snuffles as she neared her giggling prey. As she got to the leatherwoods, she peeked her head through the leaves, " Boo! " The two kits hiding in the shadows squealed and scrambled away, escaping through the other side of the bushes. Hurrying around the den, she stomped after Frostkit and Sloekit, who were thundering away toward the medicine den.

      Brushing through the bushes of the medicine den, Cloudsplash frowned as she found no sign of the kits. " Those two escaped through the back. " Minkpaw purred with amusement from her spot near the herb store, sorting through some old berries. Nodding to the healer, the elderly molly backed out of the den and peered around the camp. Now where did those rascals get to? Padding around the perimeter of the camp, Cloudsplash listened around for the sound of the kit's little pawsteps or squeaks, but could no longer hear them. Her heart began to pound as she headed back to the nursery and still no kits could be seen. " Kits! Come out now, play time is over! " She called, her eyes darting around, searching for any new movement. Cricketheart and his apprentice Heronpaw trotted over to her, curious gazes paralleling her now worried own.

      " Have you seen Frostkit and Sloekit? We were playing fox-hunt and they disappeared after escaping through the medicine den. "
      " We haven't seen them. Are you sure they're not just hiding in one of the dens? " The calico shook her head vigorously, and her tail began to lash anxiously. " Try not to worry, I'm sure they're around. We're about to head out on a hunt just by the river, we'll keep an eye out for them though. Alderfang and Elfie were in the warriors den just before, they'll help you look for them. "
      " Thank you, if you see anyone else out there warn them that the kits may have wandered off. " The brown tom nodded and lead his apprentice away as she hurried over to the warriors' den. Peering through the roots of the sycamores, Cloudsplash spotted the two warriors as well as Nettlenose. " The kits have gone missing, can you all help me find them? " She didn't need to speak another word as the three warriors agreed collectively and followed her out.

      It was half-way to sunhigh when the kits had first escaped, and it was now just past. The kits had been gone some time, and the group had done a thorough sweep of the camp several times, and they were beginning to get desperate. " We ought to search outside the camp now, they're clearly not hiding here. I'll search by the western stepping stones, Alderfang you look by the eastern ones, Nettlenose and Cloudsplash, you should search the island. We'll find them. " Elfie assured, but Cloudsplash could hardly feel anything but worry and guild. She had been in charge of the two kits, but now they were gone and she had no idea if they were safe or in some sort of danger. Giving the group a brief farewell, she bolted through the camp entrance and headed into the trees.

      Fogclan camp was located on a small island in the river, the only way off was along the stepping stones on either side of the isle, the kits small, but they might have just be able to get across them.. No, no, if she had taught the kits anything, it was that the stepping stones were dangerous, and the land beyond the river was perilous for kits on their own. They knew better than to wander off, and they'd be in big trouble for running off unaccompanied, but they definitely knew not to stray across the river. Her thoughts raced as she moved through the forest, listening and searching for any sign of them. If only my nose worked better, I'd be able to find their scent.. She sighed, growing more and more worried by the second.

      She had begun to near the end of the island, and her heart began to race. Just as she was about to turn around and search through another area of the trees, a familiar squeal sounded ahead. Pushing past the shrubbery, she spotted two tiny shapes and a two cats at the edge of the water. " Kits! " She cried out, rushing over to the trio, butting her head into the the little cats affectionately, knocking them into the pebbly shore. " You are in big trouble! You wandered off without telling me, and had half the clan worried sick over you! "
      " Oh dear. These two told us that you said it was alright for them to go for a walk. " Hawktail and Crowfur stood up to their bellies in the water, the black tom holding a small fish in his mouth. The kits must have caught them as they were leaving the camp and begged to go with them. Standing up, the elderly molly battered her paw across each kit's ear, earning her a couple of squeaks. " Serves you two right for not telling me where you were going and lying to two warriors. You're lucky I don't feed you to the crows. " Looking back to the two warriors, she dipped her head, " Thank you for taking care of them. Now, we're heading home. " Herding the sulking kits forward, they wandered back into the forest in the direction of camp.

      When they finally reached the camp, Cloudsplash and the kits were met by two worried and cross looking queens. As the two kits were both scolded and worried over, the elderly molly flopped onto the floor and let out a heavy sigh. The life as a grandmother to the clan was pretty exhaughsting. But looking at the kits that now muzzled their parents, Cloudsplash thought, Worth it.
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby EchoVoyd » Wed Sep 26, 2018 9:54 pm

username: Faededfyre
cat's name:
gender: female
age: 50 moons
rank: Warrior
clan: BreezeClan
where's the kits?: not here right now, call back later

never mind, the kits will never be in
they're dead
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby clouds-move-on » Thu Sep 27, 2018 5:19 am

username: ☁Lady Raincloud☁
cat's name: Palebird
gender: female
age: adult
rank: rogue
clan: NocturneClan
where's the kits?:
Palebird was a traitor to her clan. There was no denying it, not anymore, anyways.

It has been a long time coming... all the planning her and her kin had done. After being cruelly mistreated by their old tribemates for their linage, and finally being exiled for making a sorry attempt to gain some control, DustClan had been a beacon of hope. But paranoia ran deep; these desperate cats were not trusting of others, instead plotting and deceiving where they went. The eldest of the group, Palebird's grandfather, formulated the plan. They needed to have an ally, or a family member in high places; DustClan needed to be lead by \one of their family.

They need Eaglefrost, the deputy, to be done away with. Plans were made to execute him, and Palebird got her DustClan mate, Stonetalon, to aid her. It was to look like a rogue attack. Stonetalon was to have been trying to save him, but to no avail!

As it turned out, Eaglefrost survived. Froststar and his patrol caught the family, along with a befuddled Stonetalon, in the act. They attacked and defended Eaglefrost, and a battle broke out between the groups. By the end, Palebird's grandfather lay dead, and her father as well. The survivors were dragged back to camp to face trial.

"Killing the two ringleaders of your group was punishment enough." Froststar declared. "That said... we won't kill you."

Palebird let out a sigh of relief. She'd felt Stonetalon, who was pressed up against her, relax as well.

"However-"

The tension rang high again and Palebird's pet was bristling with contained rage.

"One of these wrongdoers is a queen! Her kits will be kept by DustClan. They have DustClan blood, and although their father is a traitor as well as their mother, we'll not be giving them up into the wilds. However, mother, father and these other rebels are... not so lucky. You will be exiled and chased from here, to be killed on sight if you dare return!"

Palebird started. These were her kits! She was prepared to fling herself up at Froststar and rip the smug smile off his face, but she felt Stonetalon's heavy paw holding her down by the tail. She would not be allowed to attack him. Her mind was boiling, but she just barely managed to sit back down, shaking with fear for her kits.

"We aren't barbaric enough to hurt them, Palebird. Don't worry." Eaglefrost snarled, shoving his bleeding muzzle, still freshly injured by her father's claws, in her face. "They'll grow up as loyal DustClan warriors. Like they should."

The rest of the meeting was a blur to Palebird. She felt the clan closing in on her, guard preparing to escort them out, a wail from her kits in the nursery as they awoke and spotted their father and mother being taken away, bloodied and muddied from their tussling in the battle. Palebird took one last look back to see her three kits being help back by Softpetal. Softpetal was a good cat; there was pity in her eyes as she watched her fellow queen hurried away. Palebird knew Softpetal would take care of her kits along with her own, but that didn't stop her from crying out as she was forced further and further away from her kittens.
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Re: Rise | #0989

Postby coppercanary » Thu Sep 27, 2018 6:08 pm

username: Canary22
cat's name: Turtlenose
gender: female
age: 33 moons
rank: Warrior
clan: Dawnclan
where's the kits?:
(This takes place when Turtlenose was a loner, and was known as Turtle)
Turtle sat in front of a large pine tree, bored. Leaf, Fern and Oak were tiring, like any three-moon-old kits are. She was twitching her tail slightly, and Fern had made it her game to pounce on it. She peered around the tree cheekily before leaping around it dramatically, meowing a battle cry before gently placing a single paw on Turtle’s tail. “That was anticlimactic,” Turtle laughed. Fern looked up at her, confused and a little hurt.
“What does... ‘anticlimactic’ mean?” She asked. Turtle lay down and groomed the kit’s head.
“Anticlimactic is when you build up to something, and everyone thinks that it will be big and exciting, but it’s the opposite of what they expect,” Turtle explained. “Anyway, where are your siblings? Fox wouldn’t be very happy if you lot were to disappear.” At that moment, Oak and Leaf bounded around the tree and piled themselves in top of Turtle, giggling.

“Grr,” Oak squeaked. “I’m a big, scary cat and I’m going to kill you!” When he said that, Fern jumped into her brother, knocking him off their adoptive mother’s back. Fox was their father, but the kits’ real mother had died during birth. When Fox and Turtle met up, they took a liking to each other, and became mates. Turtle helped ease the burden of the kits when Fox had to go hunting, and vice versa when Turtle wanted to hunt. Oak’s brown spotted tabby pelt blended in well with the earthy floor, while Fern’s ginger and white fur stuck out like a sore paw. Leaf’s silver spotted tabby patterning was somewhere in between, sometimes blending in and other times being very obvious. Trying not to unbalance Leaf, who was still perched on her back, Turtle reached over and gently prised the kits apart.
“Behave yourselves,” she said in a mock-stern voice. Oak squeaked and ran into the bushes, Fern and Leaf following him. Turtle sighed and stood up, rolling her eyes. Honestly, kits are little bundles of terror. She followed them through the bush, hearing little kit-voices and laughter as she did so. She knew that the kits were up to something, she just didn’t know what.

When she reached a break in the bushes, she felt three pairs of little eyes watching her. “Hmm, I wonder where the kits are,” she meowed. “Maybe they’re in here.” She pokes her head through a bush and looked around seeing a small ginger tail flick further into the bush. She took her head out of the leaves, shaking her head to rid it of stray leaves. “So they’re not in there. I wonder where they are?” She examined the rest of the bushes, spying the top of a silver ear and a flash of a brown paw. After checking the last one, she sat in the middle of the clearing. “Well, the kits aren’t here,” she meowed. “They must be somewhere else. I’ll keep looking.” With that, she walked away.

Trees cast the little-worn path in shadow. It was two long hours since she’d last seen the kits. She’d been searching for them since she’d walked away. Looking back on her actions, she realised that they weren’t the smartest things she could’ve done. “Oak? Fern? Leaf? Come out now, it’s not funny anymore!” Turtle shouted. She tried not to sound angry or stressed, as that might stop the kits from coming out, but it wasn’t difficult. They were only kits. Anything could happen to them. Badgers, foxes, birds, the river... The list was endless. Fox appeared behind her, just as worried as she was.
“I still don’t understand how you managed to lose three whole kits,” Fox commented. “I mean, kits aren’t easy to lose. You should’ve known that they wouldn’t follow you.” Turtle didn’t comment, but kept walking. She felt terrible about losing his kits. He was right; the trio were so loud, it was impossible to lose them. Well, almost impossible, as she had accidentally proved.
“I know,” she sighed. “I don’t know how I let them go, but I’m sure we’ll find them.” She continued walking along the trail. “Leaf, Fern and Oak! Come out!” As she called out to the kits again, she heard a little snigger in response. “Fox? Did you hear that?” She whispered. He nodded in reply. They silently continued. Occasionally they heard a quiet sound, like that of a leaf crunching or a bush rustling, that let them know they were being followed. In this game, they were not the hunters, but the hunted.

The trail continued for many, many more fox-lengths, but it eventually came to a dead end. “So if they’re not here, where are they?” Fox asked.
“Oh, I think we’ll find them soon enough,” Turtle replied. Sure enough, when they turned to leave, they found their way blocked by a small tabby kit. “Oak! You’re alright!” She cried, rushing over to the kit and nuzzling his small head.
“Of course we’re alright, Turtle,” Oak mewed happily. “We were practicing our stalking. Did we do well?”
“Of course you did,” Fox laughed, embracing the small forms of Leaf and Fern. “You three will grow up to be fine hunters, mark my words.” His eyes shone with joy as he looked at the three kits. Turtle walked over to him and wrapped her tail around his as they watched the kits tumble around on the grass.
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