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by plum » Thu Apr 30, 2015 7:18 pm
pls tell me what to change otherwise this will be less pleasant for the both of us
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by Metallic Dragon » Fri May 01, 2015 5:03 am
So far, there should be no lines on the muzzle(those are markings on my character rather than a species characteristic), the body is more thickly built,;think cougar, tail is thicker as well. Muzzle looks a bit too square and the nostrils should be more vertical rather than horizontal. The neck is either too long/Definitely not fluffy enough or the head is too small. Either way it looks a bit strange. Not sure what's behind the eye, but the two sensors in front are correctly placed.
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by plum » Fri May 01, 2015 5:39 am
OHHHH the sensors are the little things by th eyes, i put the extra sensor bc i thought the compound eyes meant like... Multiple eyes
( i thought they were the lines on the nose omg)
thanks for the feedback tho, I'll fix up the anatomy stuff soon!
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