[bananer]

As the very title.
I will add a tuunge reference, like I've made with the eyes. And I hope it's allright looking ^v^

[aequilibrium]

cute ^^

just a few things:
- the tail in not meant to have a different type of fur in the end like a lion
- The hind paw doesn't have that toe, they have one less tow than the front paws
- The fur on the cheek goes down into a feather
- the mouth is meant to have that stripe down to the end of the mandible
- the claws are meant to be longer

sorry if any of that wasn't clear in the sketches...
you don't need to change any of that for now c:
everything else is pretty good ^^

could you please add me later? c:

thanks for entering!

[bananer]

You're added, but I'll make the edits a little tad later ^w^
When does this competition end? <3

[aequilibrium]

okay, thank you <3
i set the end date to 4th april but it may change (to after that) c:

also, the eyes have no pupil. gah, i hate to point out these things to something great that people put so much effort into, sorry :s

here - some changes without the lines and here for the lines (+ the larger claws i didn't change) c:

Ignore that part of the stripe of the jaws, it doesn't look good in these lines c:

[bananer]

How's this? ^w^

[aequilibrium]

I think I prefer the way the lines looked before...

could you possibly do something like in the edits I made please? really really sorry to make you edit it all again :s

If possible, try to edit these:
- same fur that you had before but larger and without being separated from the rest of the fur (close to my edit)
- slightly longer claws - the claws in the left hind paw are just perfect, don't need any change in there c:
- and I like your feathers, the one from the cheek may be the same as the ones in the tail and I think the cheek fur was better before, could you also change that and make it close to what i edited?

again, I'm really sorry to make you edit it all again :s
gah, i feel so bad making you edit it all again and have the double of the work.......

[bananer]

Yes, sorry for late reply, been in school and had some important tests. I might manage to Edit them by friday.

[aequilibrium]

No problem c:
Thank you so much <3

[bananer]

Oh, I had totally forgot about this, sorry. Yes, I'll finish this today

[bananer]

Done