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| Artist | kavlri [gallery] |
| Time spent | 1 hour, 11 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 2 |
| 9 people like this | Log in to vote for this drawing |
Your entry is really good and you clearly put a lot of effort to get this Volato. The story also show your understandings and his personality very well. Well done!
Your entry is also good, but you lacks some understandings of Volato's personality. Volatoes are a very social animals and couldn't live very long on their own. Even though he got kick off, he'll need to find another group somehow.
Again, I was very impress with this entry. I love the point that you link everything about her to her personality and history, also when you add the name of another Volato, Blue jay, in her history which makes it even better. The only thing that you forgot is her wings on the art, but apart from that you totally deserve her!
Your entry is almost perfect, from what I've read. I like the story really, where the other Volato didn't understand her and blame her on things( just like real life isn't it XD),you're just about to get 1st!
Another great entry, better than another one, but again I feel it lacks some understanding. Very good effort though.
Short, simple but interesting entry, love it! I like where you add that she occasionally got lonely for being the only pup because it really shows that you understand the point that Volatoes are very social. Your art is very cute too ^^
Love the entry so far, it's so hard to decide between you and soy. Sad start but happy ending :3
Ok entry, but lacks something. Volatoes don't usually want to be around people that much. Sorry
Incomplete form.
[b]Pup Number:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Why do you want him/her?:[/b]
[b]History:[/b]
[b]Art of Volato:[/b]











Soy wrote:So cute! Nice one Peace&Colby!
Pup Number: #3
Name: Willow
Personality: Young and foolish, kind hearted, popular
Why do you want him/her?: Not only is she beautiful, but she's not a 'usual' character to have, as in, most people, list their characters, most of them, dogs, cats and horses- but not many are unsual breeds such as your litter of Volato. I think she would be a great asset to have on a character page, and if i got her, i'd make sure she wouldn't gather dust.
History: WIP
Art of Volato: WIP




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