[mal du pays]

Original entry by vympyre

number will be updated as soon as this is moved to the myos thread

username: Takura.
clan: The Veil
myo using: 1 common myo, 1 rare edit, 2 uc edits
coat description: Black smoke ghost tabby (broken classic) with low white and red eyes
edits:
[nr] expression, accessories, claws
[c] min fur, whiskers
[uc] long tail, unnatural eye color
[r] folded ears
obtained how?: Purchased

[I Like Bees]

Unfortunately this white is looking a bit disconnected and stripe-y.
Could you connect it a bit more so this cat can be approved?

Here are two examples of versions of this white that I'd approve;
you can switch the leg/face markings between photos too
(i.e. first image's face markings + second's leg markings)

[mal du pays]

should hopefully be fixed! :3

[I Like Bees]

Looks good! This cat is now approved, and your bank/archive have been updated!