[MenheraCollie]

It's Taylor! The design is by castiiian
uc: hair down to paws, fluffier/longer fur

[castiiian]

so close, almost!!

editwise/linewise

her hair is actually supposed to look like it's "thrown" over her shoulder, so imagine it all pulled that way
her hair is a lot longer than you drew it! it's uncommon, so it goes all the way down to her paws, also, it has a loose strand sticking out the left side!
just a small problem with her bangs, i'm not sure how to explain it, so i redlined it in the visualizer!
please make the hair as accurate as possible to the drawing!

color/designwise

her horns/teeth/eyes/paws/etc everything are supposed to be all white! the multiply/shading layers confused you again, sorry about that!! also, make her sclera a little lighter yellow/paler!
add a white gradient to the whole bottom of her design! just a little!
her ghost friend on her shoulder is supposed to be facing up/moving up! he doesn't like to look at the ground!! :(
visualizer