Kayip Atlar Tekes~#011 by Chronometer

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Kayip Atlar Tekes~#011

Postby Chronometer » Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:22 pm

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Barn Name: Casper
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Colour: Blue Roan with Extensive Binding
Age: 6
Height: 16.1hh
Genes: aa/Ee/RR

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Re: Kayip Atlar Tekes~#011

Postby Raxtus » Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:31 pm

Quick critique, from a horse owner.

Neck is too thin; back leg, while properly shaped at the top, needs more muscle and thickness. The current effect is that the horse is extremely emaciated and underfed. It's kind of sickening to me, personally, as a horse owner. I have a friend with a Teke gelding, so I'm familiar with the breed standards.
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Re: Kayip Atlar Tekes~#011

Postby Chronometer » Wed Oct 22, 2014 11:58 pm

Major Pain wrote:Quick critique, from a horse owner.

Neck is too thin; back leg, while properly shaped at the top, needs more muscle and thickness. The current effect is that the horse is extremely emaciated and underfed. It's kind of sickening to me, personally, as a horse owner. I have a friend with a Teke gelding, so I'm familiar with the breed standards.


I'm awfully sorry my work 'sickens' you. I suppose I over-emphasized the stereotypical Akhal Teke look, making the horse look unwell. It will be a hassle to change the line-art, but if it really bothers and 'sickens' many of my fellow equestrians, I can attempt to change it to make everyone happy.

(I ride an appy. What do I know about other, more exotic horse breeds?)

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Re: Kayip Atlar Tekes~#011

Postby Saturn V » Sat Oct 25, 2014 9:03 am

I quite like the uniqueness of this adopt, there is no need to change it when first off it would be a hassle to change the line art and secondly its an animated adoptable and is not supposed to be 100% realistic, if you think the species looks unwell it doesnt really matter because it isnt a real equine.
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