Pallio #16 by qwertyo

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Pallio #16

Postby qwertyo » Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:14 pm

Oh man, I really like the colors on this one.

Anyways, this Pallio here is fluffier than most. They've got elbow/ankle fluff and a good amount of butt fluff.

I need to do more art/writing contests so... here:

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Since this is an art contest, here's the Pallio Anatomy Sheet. it'd be nice to chuck this at an artist you're commissioning, by the way.

Reservations accepted. Art may be commissioned. Prettying up forms is also good with me. Add-ons (likes/dislikes, etc.) are cool too.


No limits. But note that judging could take an eternity if you guys do like 10 long stories each.

And to help you guys out...

here's some things that I look for in a good form:

• Writing that makes good use of show, not tell.
• Character personalities that are well fleshed out. (remember to give them some flaws!)
• Art that tells a story of sorts. Not just a character standing there, even if it is well drawn. I take creativity over quality.


Deadline is September 10th 30th, but extensions may happen if requested. I know y'all have started school and all.
edit: I extended the date because as of my edit, there was only one form that was semi-completed. Can't have a comp with only one person!

and I almost forgot to add: Since this is a form making competition, there will be runner ups. I try to make my RUs have some kind of similarity to the main Pallio, whether it's sharing physical traits, colors, or cape.
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Re: Pallio #16

Postby SplashofOrangeJuice » Sat Aug 30, 2014 12:40 am

This one is really gorgeous, possible entry <:


[e] sorry babe, dropping out of this one :c
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Re: Pallio #16

Postby zaz » Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:36 am

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Re: Pallio #16

Postby kogane » Sat Aug 30, 2014 6:48 am

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Pallio #16 - Spotty

Postby Bluepup429 » Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:43 am

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Pallio name: Spotty

Gender: Male

Personality: Spotty loves to travel in the world of Patchling. Patchling is a planet, it's just like Earth, Spotty visits Earth and he was born there, his friend, Starry told Spotty to visit his planet! Now, on the personality, Spotty loves to travel and question about things, he loves being outside, he gets really nervous and shy when he first meets you, but as you and him get along more over time, he is really friendly and sweet. He loves outer space, and anything to do with nature! Spotty loves to daydream about things like "How was the Earth and Patchling made...? Was it from rocks? Where did we, Paillios come from?" He loves to daydream about floating in space too. Spotty only gets rude if you treat him rudely a lot. He doesn't want to have someone treat him like he is stupid, nope, he would only be rude if you said it in front of him a lot or made weird faces at him. Spotty loves to act funny too, he mostly does it around his friends. Spotty cries only if he gets scared, he is always thinking what would happen if he did something like what would happen next?

Story: Title: Outer space, here I come! (Note: From Spotty's point of view, field has a waterfall.)

I just stood there, on the pure white snow, it was so beautiful, it looked like blankets of snow. I walked next to water, I was shivering from the cold, I had to swim my way to the desert, since the water right here is closet to the snowy place, it's really freezing, just like if you swam in ice. I had no choice to swim my way to the desert, I putted my paw in and wow!! It's freezing! I quickly took out my paw from the water, but I had to swim my way to the desert. I walked backwards a little and ran and jumped into the water! Splash! I sank a little in the water, then went up and started swimming, though I had some fluff on me, I was still really cold, I really hope I don't get a cold. I swam and swam to the desert water, it felt really good. The desert water was warm and just like a hot tub, some stream was even coming out of the water! I swam to the field water, which felt warm, like not cold, not hot, just perfect! I love the field, it's so peaceful and I can agree that everybody in Patchling loves the field! However, some prefer the desert or the cold, which is perfectly fine! We all have opinions, right? I got out the water, my fur was all hanging down, I shook back and forth just like a dog, little drops of water went around. I heard someone calling my name then. "Spotty! Spoootty!!" Someone shouted excitedly. I looked left and looked right and I saw the king of Patchling. In fact, he isn't married, he is just the one and only king. The king panted and said breathing a couple of times during his talking "We asked everybody, in this planet, we need help. We finally made a rocket ship to go to fly to Aurora, I can't do it because, I'm scared of outer space, it's dark and creepy." I felt really happy, I can finally see what it looks like up in outer space. I nodded and said with joy "Yes! I would love to!" The king nodded and said "Great, follow me." He walked next to the waterfall and there it was the rocket! (Greyish black thing is the gas thing) Wow, it looks like there's not a lot in it...seems dangerous. This got me a little nervous, the king handed me these. The king told me "The water becomes air though the tube and it goes into your space helmet! It goes on your chest, let me put it on you, it's like a belt with a fish tank!" Space helmet? Water? Fish tank?! This didn't seem safe at all! Aurora doesn't seem far away, oh and Aurora is our moon and sun, it changes its own light through out the day. I nodded to the king and I told him "Should I go now...?" I felt kind of scared, too. What if I ran out of water? Maybe the king will know. The king said "Yes, you must go now." I nodded and I shivered a little, I went on the rocket, there was empty, but there was a Y-shape wheel and a button that opens the gas thing and a button that opens and closes the door and a few gas boxes. There was paddles like if this was part car...I opened the door and said "How do I start it?" The king told me just to push on the wheel. I closed the door and I pushed the wheel gently and... WHOOSH!!! The rocket started it went up slowly, as I pushed a little harder and harder, it went faster and faster. As it got faster, Patchling got smaller and smaller, it looks like I can pretend to crush it, aha! I saw Aurora, not too far, I had the belt thing on me, but I didn't connect the helmet to the tube, I didn't want to waste the water, yet. I was getting closer and closer to the floating white dots, what could it be? Marshmallows? I looked around while going to Aurora, it was really dark, pitch black, all of the pretty stars, and the blue glow around Patchling, so beautiful. My eyes glowed of how pretty Aurora really was, I looked around and...nothing to talk to the king with? Wait, what?! What if my water runs out?! Gaah!! What am I go- no! It's okay, I haven't used to water yet, and I probably be there for a few seconds and leave. I got closer and closer to the white dots, and woaaaah!! I can't believe my eyes! Those are not white dots! They are... crystal balls! Wow!! They are so pretty! So shiny and clean... I putted on my helmet (Or fish tank, aha!) and connected it to the belt-thing. I opened the door and quickly grabbed a small crystal ball. I didn't lose a lot of water, so I can still make it. I took the stuff off. Why did I wear it, you ask? Well, what if I fell? See, that's why. Wow, it's quite heavy, I putted down gently and I continued on to Aurora! My eyes glowed even more, how beautiful Aurora was up close! I'm seeing a lot of pointy things...what is that...? As I got closer and closer, I landed down safely on Aurora. Oh my gosh! There's so many crystals! It's so beautiful! The ground was like purplish blue sand...well, looks like it. I putted on the belt thing and I jumped out, I slowly landed into the ground, some dust flying out as I touched the ground. The ground was like rock, I thought it would be soft, I walked slowly and I got a little far away from my rocket, however, then, I started floating up, oh no! I'm too light, I tried to swim down....nothing. I kept breathing heavily, which was bad. The water got slower faster. I looked at the water, almost empty. No! I wasted a lot! Aurora got smaller and smaller. I got really scared, I'm going to die alone. No one will know until after days...no one will find me. They would have to build another rocket. I started to cry, this is it, I'm not ready...I teared up, I cried and watched Aurora get smaller and smaller. Ow! My back hit a crystal ball! The tear went into the tube, then went into the tank. Huh?! It helped! I grabbed the crystal ball, and I sank down into Aurora, I had to be fast, there wasn't much water yet. I held on the crystal ball and started running. My running was slow on space. I finally made it to the rocket! I went into the door and gently putted the crystal ball down. I'm safe! I started the rocket and flew my way to Patchling. I took off my belt thing and I flew to Patchling, everybody smiled and waved at me. I landed on the field. Everybody ran to me and said "Did you make it?!" I nodded and I said "Aurora ha-" then the King said "Wait for me!" He ran and said "Ok, ok." I said happily "Aurora's white dots are not white dots! They are crystal balls! I have two in the rocket, hold on." I ran into the rocket and grabbed one of it, and handed it to the king and I said "For you!" Everybody gasped and said "Wooooah!" The king's eyes glowed and he said "Woah! Thank you, Spotty! I'm glad you made it back!" I told them the story how I almost died in space, the king said "We should work on the rocket and the belt thing. We should of made it safer, sorry about that." I nodded and said "That's fine, my tears helped!" Everybody didn't laugh, which was good. So, that was it. I, Spotty was the first animal to set paw on Aurora!


Art: Starting to float! (Note: The rocket is far away a little)

Let's travel together!

Very cute! Art by: The Writer





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Re: Pallio #16

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Re: Pallio #16

Postby Roonie-Roe » Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:01 pm

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Pallio name:
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(Aboriginal; Meaning 'little brother')


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Friendly, outgoing, energetic, smart,... WIP

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Re: Pallio #16

Postby qwertyo » Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:32 am

Finally remembered to judge a comp on time :D

Anyways, it looks like we got only one fully completed form, so by default, the winner is:
Bluepup429 wrote:Username: Bluepup429

Pallio name: Spotty

Gender: Male

Personality: Spotty loves to travel in the world of Patchling. Patchling is a planet, it's just like Earth, Spotty visits Earth and he was born there, his friend, Starry told Spotty to visit his planet! Now, on the personality, Spotty loves to travel and question about things, he loves being outside, he gets really nervous and shy when he first meets you, but as you and him get along more over time, he is really friendly and sweet. He loves outer space, and anything to do with nature! Spotty loves to daydream about things like "How was the Earth and Patchling made...? Was it from rocks? Where did we, Paillios come from?" He loves to daydream about floating in space too. Spotty only gets rude if you treat him rudely a lot. He doesn't want to have someone treat him like he is stupid, nope, he would only be rude if you said it in front of him a lot or made weird faces at him. Spotty loves to act funny too, he mostly does it around his friends. Spotty cries only if he gets scared, he is always thinking what would happen if he did something like what would happen next?

Story: Title: Outer space, here I come! (Note: From Spotty's point of view, field has a waterfall.)

I just stood there, on the pure white snow, it was so beautiful, it looked like blankets of snow...!


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Even though you won by default, I did love the story you've written for this pallio. Heh, even I don't know where pallio come from.

So congrats on winning your first Pallio, Bluepup! I've added your name to the color in, please color in the pallio to claim them! Add whatever items you like, or write their name or something there.
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Re: Pallio #16

Postby Bluepup429 » Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:38 am

*o* Thank you!!! Wow!! I was nervous because I'm not good with forms, ahah. Though, I understand people were busy. :>
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Re: Pallio #16

Postby Roonie-Roe » Wed Oct 01, 2014 1:01 pm

Grats Bluepup! :D

lol, Yeah, I've been super busy irl lately so didn't have much time to work on my form, unfortunately. You definitely deserve him though. Such a cute story. ^^ <3

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