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L.O.C. #19

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:36 pm

Ah, we have a female here! c:
Her element is Poison! Be wary of her now!
To adopt her, simply fill out the form, and answer the question <3
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The form given is only a skeleton c:

Ah, she seems to have an X on her chest! But it isn't part of her markings...?
It's paint! I wonder why she put it there?


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L.O.C. Name:
Aralia Venixom; Ara for short.
Don't be fooled by Ara's name. Although aralia may mean herbal plants, Ara isn't someone who would heal another.

Element:
Poison

Personality:
Secretive, cold, unpredictable - these three words sum Aralia's personality up.
She wasn't always like this. Not until it happened.

When one first sees Ara, they'll realise she hides many secrets, almost too many. But it doesn't bother her, bottling up these secrets and shoving them into the darkest corners of her mind. One can never know what she is thinking, what she is planning in her mind.
Ara has the tendency to react coldly to anyone who approaches her. She is direct with her insults and words, uncaring about how others feel about her.
One can never tell what Ara might do. One day, she might attack them for speaking in her presence, another she'd be fine with loud chatter. No one can predict what actions she might take, and that's the way Ara likes it.

The Story of the Cross:
Aralia wasn't always the way she is now. Long ago, back when she was just a teen, she had the brightest smiles and an optimistic personality. When it happened, she wasn't ready. She wasn't prepared for what was brought upon them that night.

She often repeats the words in her head, that it's not your fault, it's not; you just couldn't control it, but it never seems to get into her head. She tries hard to believe what they had said before it happened to them, that it's not her fault, but she can't. Because she's the one who's killed them, even if it's accidental.

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Years back, when Aralia was an ever-happy, cheerful fluff of hyper, she had friends around her. She attracted other Lions to herself for her fun personality, her charisma and for her gentle consultations to problems they may have. Those around her just loved being near her.

She hated injustice, hated death, hated anything that harmed others. So when she hadn't gotten her power yet, she hoped to get her mother's power of Air. She didn't want her father's power - in fact, she despised it, although she did love her father. His element was poison, and it harmed others. It hurt and killed them, and it would serve no purpose to her, whereas Air - at least that element could let her float for a little bit, rustle the leaves of trees to make apples fall for other animals to snack on.

Her mother let her believe she would be a bearer of the element of air; the older Lion always agreed with her, telling her yes, you'll be like mummy, and mummy knows it.

So when she realised her power, she was taken by surprise and fear - because she didn't think she would've been a Poison lion. And she didn't think she would kill a friend - or friends - either. Accidental or not.

Three days before Abby's [[not a real LOC, just needed a random lion]] birthday, Ara accidentally scratched her, just a light wound, from playing tag. Three days after, Abby was on the verge of death and finding it hard to breathe. The lions realised it was from poison, and that was when Ara remembered she had accidentally harmed her friend. Abby had told her it wasn't her fault, that she didn't know, but Ara, being who she was, shook her head, thinking yes, it was her fault. Abby died on her birthday.

A year after that, she played with the younger lions, although she was still upset over her friend's death. Again, during a game of tag, she accidentally scratched one, so light it couldn't be seen. The young cub died three days later, again telling her that it wasn't her fault, they were playing and it just happened. Ara shook her head, and again, she took it harshly. It was her fault, it was her fault, and it traumatised her.

Her father started teaching her how to control her powers three months after. Ara had lost her laugh by then, lost her happiness. She was silent and diligently learnt from her father, practicing on innocent bunnies that the older lion had caught.

She learnt to control it in a week, and could seep the poison on her claws back into her body with ease. But even being able to control it now didn't help. She was still traumatised and feared killing more innocent lives. She turned her back on them and instead walked her lonely path, shoving those who tried to befriend her away.
Because this way, she wouldn't kill anyone else important to her again.

---

You must be wondering by now, so where does the cross come in? Well, it comes in after she learnt how to control her element. She drew the cross over her chest in warning - do not touch, do not come close. It's drawn in purple because her element is poison. So it's a warning to others, and a reminder to herself when she looks at her reflection in the water - she's dangerous, she'll kill.[/size]
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby TheGodessOfMischief » Sat Nov 09, 2013 6:10 pm

Pulling out sorry
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby .holly999. » Sat Nov 09, 2013 11:15 pm

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L.O.C. Name: Nauscia
Element: Poison
Personality: Kind¬Adventurous¬Curious¬Fun¬Friendly
The Story of the Cross: I will do soon ^-^
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby >> Leafstorm515 » Sun Nov 10, 2013 2:39 am

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L.O.C. Name:
Viktoria, But often times goes Vik.
Element:
Poison
Personality:
Viktoria is a rather dark and sly female. She isn't really someone that you'd want to be close to, nor would you ever want to be her enemy. She has a superiority complex, and views herself higher than others. (Although his is far from true.) At one time, she was slightly less dari, but as time passed her by she became bitter. Snarky and brutally sarcastic even to the youngest of the time, Viktoria has no respect for anyone who has not 'earned' it from her. (Which rarely anyone will) She has a deep love for casuing others emotional distress. Sort of like her element, poison, Viktoria can at times come across as sugary sweet only to a few moments later be at your throat and you will be fighting for your life. She can be sultry and rather flirty with males, but this is mainly due to her ned to get revenge for herself. (See story below.) Although she can be nasty and rather rude, Viktoria can at times show brief moments where her old and more soft self ill show through. She doesn't talk about herself, even though she believes she's better than anyone, but instead points out other's flaws.
The Story of the Cross:
- Writing from Viktoria's POV -
The light rain that had begun to fall coated my fur as I padded through the land. A soft and knowing smile was slowly working its way up my lips, and I shook my head, dissapating the butterflies that were rising in my stomach. It was nearly night, and somewhere off in the distance thunder was rolling. But hte sound seemed to add to the feeling of expectance that I felt.

I had never known what love was until I'd met him. He'd taken all my fears and doubts and put them aside. As I walked toward our meeting place, I grinned happily to myself. He loved me, and I loved him more than all the world. Our world was so plain, but I knew that I was supposed to watch over it. But that thought was on the back of my mind tonight.

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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby apricotflyer » Wed Nov 13, 2013 5:49 am

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Hey, I'm Apricotflyer and I love this girl. I already have a mysterious story in store for her.
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Her original birth name is Felicity but her code name for the secret club is Eagle as their secret names are all of birds.
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Felicity is the fierce bearer of poison.
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Felicity has never felt that she ever has truly belonged. She was sweet and kind and the perfect example, she always tried so hard to be a perfectionist. To fit in. But no one was ever there to congratulate her on her accomplishments, not even her parents truly cared. Life seemed like a stupid game until that night when she wondered and discovered a group.

The group changed her and now she is confidant about herself, it gave a purpose, something worth serving. She was little too trustful though, expecting kind and welcoming hearts but as she grew stronger she was carried within the depths of the group. She turned nasty, sneering at the lower members, the imperfect ones. They had to do everything right to fit in, it wasn't all fun and games any more. She was a high ranker in that group and she let power stand in the way of her true friends.

She finally came to her senses, understood the lives she had ruined and then she changed even more. She closed up, becoming less trustful and just wanting to lock herself away. The few who were her true friends stuck to her though and helped her realize her true potential. She was now brave and was willing to stand up for anybody in need of it, and she would never let herself become a bully again. That group shattered her life but it made her see who she was, who she could be. She had always belonged, she'd just never believed it.

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What I'm about to tell you is the truth, it has hurt me and has hurt others. I will only be giving code names, to hide the identities of my peers. Because I belonged with them.
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I'd never belonged before, my parents didn't respect me and I was simply that happy lion. But nothing else, no one had actually tried getting to know me. It felt like I was playing the game of life, and I was losing. I always wanted to fit in.

I decided to go for a casual stroll that night, I hadn't done such a thing before. I was the sweet girl who did everything perfectly. As I strolled a little down one of the rivers there was a small dip in the ground. Light flickered from it and I peeked over to see about give lions gathered around a fire, chanting. I held my breath, not wanting to disturb them. But as I turned to walk away I slipped and was soon whizzing down the gentle slope. BANG! I collided with a lion which I would soon discover to be the leader of this group.

At first when he saw me he looked angry, then his gaze flew past me to the sky and he smiled. I twisted around, eager to see what he was staring at. It was a purple comet shooting past the sky, and then it was gone in an instant.

"A sign," he spoke boldly to curious others and he once more faced me. "What is your name?"[/ b] His voice was powerful, how could I not reply. He was so confidant and so I trusted him instantly. [b]" I am Felicity."

"Welcome to the group. We are called Wings Of Hope," he smiled at me and then tilted his head, a signal the members responded to in a matter of seconds. They brought forward several different leaves with bright colours on each. "Now, tell me your element," he said, but this was not a question. It was a command and I obeyed, obedient thing that I was. "Poison, sir,"
I replied merrily.

I was immune to poison due to it being my element, and my leader knew that. They brought a wooden bowl out with bright purple or pink poison in it. He dipped his claw in it and painted a single tear drop on my snout. That was the entrance mark, I would receive more as I ranked up.

After that I went to every meeting, never missing one. New recruits joined and we taught them our ways, we all belonged. Then when I first ranked up I was given a new name, the name of a bird. Only second ranks and above could receive such an honour. I accepted the name Eagle, my confidence rising every day. The second markings I received were the three stripes under my belly.

No one but the other members knew that I was in this group, knew that this group even existed. It wasn't all fun and games, I ranked up twice more after that. Receiving a dot and a streak around my bear print mark and two spots on my ears. The poison was a part of me now, it was now a part of markings. It was who I was.

I made many friends in thus group but I began to ignore them as I was one of the highest ranks you could get. Falcon, the leader, told me the secrets. He kept me in on everything and I became his right hand man (even though I was a female). I even began to feel love for him.

To join you had to pass a test now, you had to be perfect. I bullied the members who weren't. I made their lives hell, the power had gone to my head. This went on for so many months, and I came to my senses. I realised the monster I had become. It was my friends who helped out of the darkness and in that moment I knew I had to leave. So one night I announced it to them all.

"Wings Of Hope. I'm sorry for my decisions, for my cruelty. You all have the right to hate me but you have a choice. I am leaving this group, it has gotten out of control. So join me if you have had enough!" I cried out, a beautiful and loud speech that rang across the whole dip. Tears streamed down my face, I was about to leave everything I had grown to love. Leave myself behind.

Falcon growled but he let me leave. The ones departing all received a special mark to announce that they were no longer a part. Falcon stared at me, he was doing my mark. His eyes pleaded me to stay and I almost did just that. But strength rose within me and I shook head. His claw pressed into my fur fur the last time, placed a big purple cross on my chest. Never again would I be a member. Never again would I see him.
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Now I know that I always belonged, I just never wanted to believe it. My friends followed me and helped me recover from the shock. I closed up to everyone but the ones who had stuck by my side, even through the torture I had put them through. I am still confidant but I will never become a bully again. Instead I am a figure that will stand up for anyone and I am finally proud of myself, perfect or not. I still wear that cross, and it reminds me everyday of what I did, what I lost, and what I gained.

Please note that any lions mentioned in this story are not real, a part from Felicity, the lion I'm trying for.
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Wed Nov 13, 2013 6:24 pm

Is Saturday the 16th a fair end date?
I want to make sure everyone has time to finish their forms!
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby apricotflyer » Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:40 pm

Saturday sounds good to me.
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby kyum- » Fri Nov 15, 2013 5:44 pm

'Til the sixteenth? Then I'll have to finish this on Friday. xD Or I'll have to drop out.
Homework and exams. Ugh. Life. ;-;

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L.O.C. Name:
Aralia Venixom; Ara for short.
Don't be fooled by Ara's name. Although aralia may mean herbal plants, Ara isn't someone who would heal another.

Element:
Poison

Personality:
Secretive, cold, unpredictable - these three words sum Aralia's personality up.
She wasn't always like this. Not until it happened.

When one first sees Ara, they'll realise she hides many secrets, almost too many. But it doesn't bother her, bottling up these secrets and shoving them into the darkest corners of her mind. One can never know what she is thinking, what she is planning in her mind.
Ara has the tendency to react coldly to anyone who approaches her. She is direct with her insults and words, uncaring about how others feel about her.
One can never tell what Ara might do. One day, she might attack them for speaking in her presence, another she'd be fine with loud chatter. No one can predict what actions she might take, and that's the way Ara likes it.

The Story of the Cross:
Aralia wasn't always the way she is now. Long ago, back when she was just a teen, she had the brightest smiles and an optimistic personality. When it happened, she wasn't ready. She wasn't prepared for what was brought upon them that night.

She often repeats the words in her head, that it's not your fault, it's not; you just couldn't control it, but it never seems to get into her head. She tries hard to believe what they had said before it happened to them, that it's not her fault, but she can't. Because she's the one who's killed them, even if it's accidental.

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Years back, when Aralia was an ever-happy, cheerful fluff of hyper, she had friends around her. She attracted other Lions to herself for her fun personality, her charisma and for her gentle consultations to problems they may have. Those around her just loved being near her.

She hated injustice, hated death, hated anything that harmed others. So when she hadn't gotten her power yet, she hoped to get her mother's power of Air. She didn't want her father's power - in fact, she despised it, although she did love her father. His element was poison, and it harmed others. It hurt and killed them, and it would serve no purpose to her, whereas Air - at least that element could let her float for a little bit, rustle the leaves of trees to make apples fall for other animals to snack on.

Her mother let her believe she would be a bearer of the element of air; the older Lion always agreed with her, telling her yes, you'll be like mummy, and mummy knows it.

So when she realised her power, she was taken by surprise and fear - because she didn't think she would've been a Poison lion. And she didn't think she would kill a friend - or friends - either. Accidental or not.

Three days before Abby's [[not a real LOC, just needed a random lion]] birthday, Ara accidentally scratched her, just a light wound, from playing tag. Three days after, Abby was on the verge of death and finding it hard to breathe. The lions realised it was from poison, and that was when Ara remembered she had accidentally harmed her friend. Abby had told her it wasn't her fault, that she didn't know, but Ara, being who she was, shook her head, thinking yes, it was her fault. Abby died on her birthday.

A year after that, she played with the younger lions, although she was still upset over her friend's death. Again, during a game of tag, she accidentally scratched one, so light it couldn't be seen. The young cub died three days later, again telling her that it wasn't her fault, they were playing and it just happened. Ara shook her head, and again, she took it harshly. It was her fault, it was her fault, and it traumatised her.

Her father started teaching her how to control her powers three months after. Ara had lost her laugh by then, lost her happiness. She was silent and diligently learnt from her father, practicing on innocent bunnies that the older lion had caught.

She learnt to control it in a week, and could seep the poison on her claws back into her body with ease. But even being able to control it now didn't help. She was still traumatised and feared killing more innocent lives. She turned her back on them and instead walked her lonely path, shoving those who tried to befriend her away.
Because this way, she wouldn't kill anyone else important to her again.

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You must be wondering by now, so where does the cross come in? Well, it comes in after she learnt how to control her element. She drew the cross over her chest in warning - do not touch, do not come close. It's drawn in purple because her element is poison. So it's a warning to others, and a reminder to herself when she looks at her reflection in the water - she's dangerous, she'll kill.
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby apricotflyer » Sat Nov 16, 2013 12:11 pm

Sorry to ask but could this actually be extended to Sunday? I need about one more day.
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Re: L.O.C. #19

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Mon Nov 18, 2013 1:03 pm

This competition is now closed;;
I will give one hour for edits. Any edits done after 9:00 p.m. EST will not be counted c:
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