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To win this girl, write me a story about her getting her way with Boys by using her girlish charms and her enchanting looks ^^ <3

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Kelpie height: 15.2
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[NightGaze]

Username: NightGaze
Kelpie Name: Delilah
Kelpie age: 4
Kelpie height: 15.2
Story:
Delilah had a way with the boys. Whenever she walked by, they whispered about her. Whenever she had a chance, she played pranks on them. It was a hot summer day, and all the Kelpies were chilling by a large lake. When she jumped in, she saw a few stallions following her. She had an idea. She ducked her head underwater, so they couldn't see her. Delilah creeped up behind them, then jumped out, with kelp covering her. They bolted, leaving her cracking up in the shallows. When there's a boy she likes, she is a huge flirt. Delilah will bat her eyelashes, which drives the boys crazy, and will keep up a romance until the boy is no use anymore. She is crooked, but who says a girl can't have it all?

[Foxtrot101]

Username:Foxtrot101
Kelpie Name: Ursula
Kelpie age: 4
Kelpie height: 15.2
Story: Ursula was an enchanting mare, she always seemed to get the attention of the stallions around her. Her looks, a beautiful mahogany colored coat, violet eyes and a wavy black mane; what more could a guy ask for? Her sassy and bubbly attitude got the stallions to whisper amoung themselves, talking about the way she looked and walked but there was one thing that made them fall under her spell. Her voice. It was smooth and gentle like honey, every word she spoke nearly made the stallions drool which made her giggle since they looked so funny while falling over themselves just trying to say hi. Her voice was almost like a love song, very intimidating but comforting in every way and this feature plus the ones she was given made her every stallion's dream.

--Dropping Out--

[Curious]

Username:
Freckles
Kelpie Name:
Anna
Kelpie age:
Teen
Kelpie height:
15.2
Story:
Anna trotted away, her mane flowing behind her. Her violet eyes flicked back and forth, scanning the fields. Anna was with her herd, and she was well-known there for her beauty. She had many suitors, but didn't feel she should spare a second with one of them. So, Anna had her ways with the foolish stallions, and always managed to make a good prank out of thier behavior-- embarrasing them and teaching them to back off. This mare was talented. Once, on a cold winter day, there had been a stallion, talking to her by a stream while she drank. His mouth had been running nonstop, due to his desire to flirt. Anna had suddenly slung her head up, startling some birds in a nearby tree by hitting it with her horns. The snow fell on the stallion's head, pushing him backward into the cold river. When he had gotten out, shivering, the birds had been angry, and flew down to peck at him. He ran away, screaming, and never even uttered a word to Anna since. Another time, Anna had seen a group of boys talking. They had kept glancing in her direction, and this angered Anna. She calmed down, and cooly walked over to the gossip group. Anna gave them her sweetest smile, and had given them directions-- to a contest to see whoever was suitable as her husband. They had listened intensely. She gave them the directions oof the path they would race on, and whoever finished first would win her hoof. The path had included a jump over a small pit, through the woods, then around a sharp corner into a stinger bush. Anna had not told them about the last part, and that the finish line was on the other side of a wide gorge. Nobody had won. Anna always had a way with stallions.

This will be my first BK if I win her, and I just love her-- she is beautiful!

[Mysty Fox]

Username:
Mysty Fox
Kelpie Name:
Noelle
Kelpie age:
5
Kelpie height:
15.2
Story:
What comes without being called, and leaves without being stolen?

She was beautiful, her long locks of midnight raven's wing, eyes of the purest amethyst, and a smooth graceful walk that the most agile of cat would admire.
But who was she?
She had stolen many hearts, broken all of them, but left a soft smile on the lips of all she met. She traveled alone, a gypsy in look, mind and heart. But she never stayed, never dallied for any longer than a day or so.
When asked about her wanderings she would cock her head and her eyes would go soft, then she answer, "I must go. My heart demands it."
Why did the mare of such enchanting looks and ways leave without even a backwards glance at the stallions she left behind, mourning her loss, or the mares she'd befriended?
Her journey was long, and at times her heart faltered, and in the dark of night she would cry, asking her heart why she was never allowed to stay in one place, but she kept moving. Placing one hoof in front of the other, until weary in body and mind she fell heavily on a small creekside. There she lay, unable to push herself to her hooves, her heart quiet at last.
Perhaps she would have laid there until she breathed her last, except for him. He came without being called, just as he had the last time only this time he wasn't ethereal and wispy. The shadow horse of her most wonderful dreams was real.
On this day of Yuletide, he stood before her, his mane blowing in the gentle breeze, snow blanketing both of them. And as quietly as he came he knelt beside her, offering her his quiet strength and warmth. Tears filled eyes of purple, and she nuzzled him. He returned the soft caress, his velvety nose smoothing over her chilled neck and back, until he lay curled around her.
"Noelle..." He stopped, hugging her gently, "How I've missed you! How I've searched for you!"
He lifted his head to stare into her eyes, "How dare you leave after becoming my heart and soul?"
He pressed his nose to hers, "I followed the stars, and they led me back to you. My love..."

[alphatoros]

Midnight's Star

Username: alphatoros
Kelpie Name: Midnight's Star
Kelpie age: 4
Kelpie height: 15.2
Story: She walked around her group of following stallions. They eyed her carefully, as if waiting for her to say she wanted them. But his was her way. Midnight's star looked at each of them, watching them for any nervous movements. Eventually she got tired of waiting and began to move away, her beautiful star-like eyes sparkling in the daylight. She heard a younger stallion whinny softly, but she ignored him. Midnight's star went into a trot. She went up to the leader of the herd, but he just stared at her admiringly. This was odd, as he was much older than she. Her beauty just seemed to attract all types of stallions, puny ones, strong ones, fast ones, weak ones. But she had rejected all of them. With a flick of her black tail she left them to their disappointment. She slowed to a walk and went over to another group of Kelpies. But this time she did not ignore all of them, no. There was a stallion with eyes of fierce interpretation, and the beauty of the nights rays.

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Closing tomorrow!

[SmaugTheGolden]

Username: hallibi141
Kelpie Name: Nera Core (Italian for Black Heart)
Kelpie age: 4
Kelpie height: 15.2
Story: Nera was a solitary kelpie, all the stallions loved her but she didn't back. The only time she could be alone was deep in the forest where in the center of a clearing was a deep dark lake, filled with kelp and muk, just the way she liked it. One day when she was at the lake, she spyed a pure white kelpie, she had never seen a white kelpie before and instantly fell in love, she trotted over to him and asked his name, his name was Bianco (White in Italian), nera told Bianco her name, he loved the name and when he saw her bewitching good looks, how could he ignore her with her soft gental voice, peacefull violate eyes, soft velvety coat and of course the looks, she made him feel like he was going to fall to his hooves, they then became mates and they now both live together by the lonely lake with a black and white filly called bella, Nera's days of being followed endlessly by stallion's who wanted to be her mate were over, and she had the best mate of all, Bianco her white prince charming.

It isn't great but it is the best I can do

[SmaugTheGolden]

Who won???

[PolarizedVertigo]

Username:
Kelpie Name:
Kelpie age:
Kelpie height: 15.2
Story:StarDust Flicked her tail around and rised her head, her nose flared and she smelt the air.. "Hemmm.." she said as she smelled a... stallion... she decided to trot along, she went up on a hill, the sun behind her, her black mane was hot, but it shined, like a black pearl... it was pure beauty.... she flicked her mane and bent her head down what ever so gently to graze, she had gentle and swift movements...
-stallion's/Juke's pov-
He heard some hoofs, he couldn't smell what it was... but it could be a stallion, he puffed up and decided to act like he didn't know of it and maybe surprize attack it...Then she came,... she was beauty.. she was pure gold.. she was a goddess... she was.. the one.. He flicked his tail and slowly made his way to her.. soon he was 2 meters away.. he flicked his tail again and began to speak up. "Hello..?" he said, in a tone asking her name.
"Hello.. I'm Stardust..." she said in a voice of melting gold..., "Ahh, hello, Lady Stardust.." he said romanticly... "I'm Sir Juke, looking for the fair maiden of this valley... But i guess i didn't have to look far.." he mustered up.

-Stardust's POV-
She chuckled, "I think you got it ALL wrong..'' she said Fakely sad.. she sighed unhappily (shes faking her unhappyness) She then did a small whimper.

Juke's POV-
"Oh i'm not wrong.. your beautiful, your goddess like, your the one..." he said melting into her purple eyes, they went into his soul and made his heart the dimond of love...

Stardust's POV-
She flicked her black tail, it shined as if it was in gold dust.. she smiled, "Really?.. i look.. weird.."

Juke's POV-
He did a snort, and smiled.. "No.. you don't, you look more perfect than Aphroditie herself.." He got beside her and nuzzled her,.. "Belive me.." He said romanticly..

Stardust's POV-
She smiled and gently and swiftly nuzzled him back, it was dark, she then decided to swiftly walk away, she was just like the air, no noise, she then left, never to be seen by juke again..She might have been the one for him... He wasn't the right one though...
-gets this in really fast-