by Insaniity » Tue Feb 28, 2017 4:00 am
This kal is so pretty! Good luck to everyone!
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by Olive; » Tue Feb 28, 2017 11:09 am
Glad I don't have to judge this, it would be a very hard decision. Good luck to everyone, there's so many good forms<3
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by yenneii » Wed Mar 08, 2017 10:15 am
At last!! I'm sorry this took so long, but i'm here to announce the winners!!
Lemme just say, the writing and the art in this comp was excellent. Once again I'm stuck at a crossroads.
You guys amaze me with your capabilities to make this drawing into a person, it's just, really cool?
As usual, I'll start by awarding a couple Honorable Mentions. So many people are deserving to be honest, I would award runner ups to everyone if I could. I hope these help you in some way!
Girl of the Wolves: I think that journal may become a relic in kalon history.
You went above and beyond with the detail you put into Vertigo's entrance to earth. Vertigo is a very dynamic character, and it was very sweet seeing how she changed over the course of your writing. They are analytical, but more human than someone who's completely alien which makes them unique. Not to mention, the art you made is so colourful and peaceful. It's nice to look at!
Sylar: People are pretty scary...
I really liked the realistic view on the world that I saw in your story. The fact of the matter is, if a UFO landed on earth, we'd rather wreck the thing then learn from it. Most of the forms I saw had a joyous tone to them, but this definitely contrasted the lot. I really liked the idea of the dominant species not classifying Peregrine as a person either, we see it a lot these days even with other human beings on planet earth, and it's very unfortunate.
OliveMyLove: Lots of effort filled writing!
You're writing piece was just lovely! It was interesting to see Cronia's first experience on earth, meeting some of their own species and observing how foreign earth is compared to Saturn (let's admit, they're quite different.) It was nice to see a caring human take care of them in the end, as apposed to her own kind. Your art is also really cute!! It's great seeing some traditional art around.
ede: Another form with lots of truth!
Your form was very eerie, but appeared wondrous at the same time. The involvement of an extinct species as a sort of "teacher" to the new was reflective of what humans as a race have done. Despite the curtness of the conversation, it was clearly sentimental and great to read!
LostInTheEcho: A little piece of writing that goes a long way.
I loved hearing about these kalons interacted! It was really pleasant and honestly just sweet to read. What seems normal to us may not be normal to new people, and i like how Meteorigh's friends compensated for that by helping keep him warm. Not to mention, the ending of your story just warmed my heart!
trans: Beautiful writing.
Ahh once again, you've definitely made an impression on me with your form! I'm super impressed with the quality of the form and the aesthetic of it. Even if Jem was basically sleeping through the whole story, you got a great look at her caretakers and what they think of her. There's a lot of things that people do for us that we don't pick up on the instant, but i'm sure Jem would have been calmed to know that someone was there for them <3.
magbus,: I love the animations!
The ultimate space nerd! I love it! The character you made for Pheobe was really swell, and I enjoyed hearing about their little venture to earth. I hope they find Jupiter-Shine someday, poor little guy's probably floating around somewhere in space.
Next, I want to award Runner Ups!
★starblind: You made me think of colour in another way.
I was in love with the use of it in the story you wrote, it added so much meaning to Synesthesia's adventure. I really appreciate the poetic flow of the language used in your form, and the fact that you created a temporary character out of nothing. Their relationship was really nice, even despite the devastation Synesthesia may have brought on his village. Lovely work!
~Maddy~: So dreamy!
Despite the tone of your literature being mellow, the story you wrote was so dreamy. I couldn't imagine what it'd be like to be isolated in a rock, suspended in space around another planet, however you managed to make it sound peaceful. I also really enjoyed the structure of the relationship built between Everest and Pandora, as well as the allegory of Pandora's name. A great read! The art was also lovely!
And finally, Congrats to ryan. on winning E.T! The art in your form was lovely, your writing is fantastic and so was the "ending is just the beginning" feel in your story. Congrats! Take good care of this kiddo!
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by Olive; » Wed Mar 08, 2017 10:45 am
Aah, oml thank you for the HM! I'm glad you liked my art/writing<3
Congrats to the others as well!
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