steampunkvale wrote:Hollyyyy molly this was quiet a breath taking contest going on here i'm shaking from all the agenaline going through my body right now. Everyone did so amazing I loved going through this contest and just reading what everyone had to put into their forms and their ideas they had for this character it had been a blast.
Super good luck to everyone!
Shoutouts wrote:Not actually stubs, but recognitions! In no particular order:
tiny little boxI thought that the concept had merit, though the information on it was bare.
Sandstorm814The visual story concept you had in mind held some merit, though again information was bare.
dave.I enjoyed the effort shown and the character you created was solid, but it was potrayed in a way that seemed somewhat disconnected if that makes any sense? I couldn't connect to the character as his own individual, and for that I couldn't elevate the form beyond informational blocks of paragraphs.
~Prophecy~Similar to tiny's, the information was bare, though I saw that the emerging concept held some merit.
x1 Stubs wrote:Sweet and SaltyI honestly adored the effort shown here, and the art was beautiful as well! However, with the story being the majority of the form, I judged it within the form to hold more weight than the actual art, and was left more than a bit confused; though I thought your writing was good and I enjoyed the format, his character never seemed to reach a sense of stability. I was left dumbfounded at some of his motives and actions, which left your otherwise perfectly acceptable concept hanging and ultimately damaged your form despite the holistic structure of your form.
Cutieduckpie1Ooh I loved your concept, but the lack of development and information left me wanting more! Serious thanks for entering however, because I found the concept interesting all the way through. You seemed to know exactly what you wanted for this character from beginning to end<3
SteampunkvaleThough the concept behind your character was kept somewhat vague or was simply underdeveloped, the relationship of the character with his snake quasi-mother pulled at my heart-strings! Sometimes, a well thought-out relationship can make a form stand out, and your form did just that<3 I do wish there was more development overall however!
x2 Stubs wrote:WolfWinterI found the concept to be very interesting with a great deal of promise! However, the form lacked somewhat in cohesiveness; it seemed as if you attempted to put in so many different concepts and characters that it seemed overloaded in many parts of your story, and ultimately that made it hard to follow in spots. I do commend the massive amount of effort shown in the story, however.
Rare RU wrote:cyberdragon725This was a completely solid form and I commend the fact that you knew exactly who you wanted this character to be from beginning to end. The information about the snake stood out in all of the forms in its originality, and I honestly loved that. However, the amount of information that went into worldbuilding and explaining virtually everything but the actual character detracted from your form; while I enjoy worldbuilding myself, the information about the other characters detracted from the main focus (the legendary) and somewhat lessened her importance in your story if that makes any sense. In doing so, she simply became another character in your story and less of a main character. I do love a good concept though, and yours was well developed.
--You're welcome to choose 1 regular rare trait to put on your RU + 1 roaming event (multiple eyes or anntenae)
Please let me know if you wish to claim your RU! If not x3 Stubs are coming your way<33
Event Rare RU wrote:Doctor Whooves LoverOh man, there was very little in this form I didn't like! Though other forms offered dark tones within their stories, yours was legitimately dark and oooh my god I love gore and disturbing things like this and this was a++! I quickly connected to your character and readily followed his descent into his own little brand of madness, and I am not at all lying when I say I wish I could give you a pixie legendary of your own, just to let this character be portrayed in his entirety (Vision, flight, and all!)! Kudos to you dude! I just wish it was longer w eeps
(CAN I JUST SAY HOW CLOSE THIS WAS I WISH I COULD GIVE U A LEGENDARY W EEPS)
--You're welcome to choose 1 event rare trait (from the halloween event, so butterfly tufts, scorpion tail, bone shell or monster horns) to put on your RU + 1 roaming event (multiple eyes or anntenae)
Please let me know if you wish to claim your RU! If not x3 Stubs are coming your way<33
Winner wrote:MatreatsOoooh dang you do not know how sad I was to see that the epilogue wasn't done!! ;0; It was like coming to the end of a book and finding out the last few pages were ripped out, or coming to the end of a good fanfic and learning that the last chapter hasn't been posted w eeps
I honestly just love how solid this form was?? From beginning to end you seemed to know exactly what you wanted to happen for the story. You developed your villain in a way that made him suitably dangerous, and I connected so mightily to Raavah on her quest as she learned and grew as a character<33 Wherever you end up with Ravaah's storyline for the future, I say good luck to you! Enjoy her friend<33
//confetti spaghetti
aHHHH I CAME, I SAW, I DIED????!! wHAT THE H DUDE??? All throughout your story I was immensely charmed oml, lemme just say this now before delving into my final thoughts,, tomorrow
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