I went and wrote up the post on mobile (thats how I judge) and switched tabs and it deleted my whole post so now I am back on my laptop and have to retype it all XD
What I said before was that I am sorry I am currently prepping for an out of state move so I dont have a ton of time and wont be making any RUs but I Will be giving out an Honorable mention! I really am glad I found the time to judge this one, the forms were absolutely magnificent and I loved all the different views on love and broken hearts <3 Even if you did not win this one I want you to know that these forms were all great and I cant wait to see you all in more contests!
First I will be awarding a single HM to Mid-Life! I really enjoyed your form and love the different viewpoint on how the cool kid feels, because everyone knows 'cool kids dont cry'. It showed a sort of reality to emotion and feelings of guilt, and though there were some forms with similar concepts I quite enjoy how you executed yours!
And then the winner of this contest is undoubtedly The Pirate! Congratulations!! I was seriously impressed by your form! The plot twist seriously got my feels in a ruffle when I was totally convinced that M was a past fiance, but when i found out that it was their mother my feelings went out the roof because love from the family is a great view to take this from. The short story you provided is most definitely worthy of a win, so congratulations on him! And i know you will take good care!