a coat of red and gold

Postby nymx » Thu Oct 10, 2019 2:43 pm

    Username: sky--lines
    Lion name: apollyon
    Lion gender: male
    Pride: tba
    Pride Status: founder

    What are they looking for and how did they get to the valley?:
    born to the royal family, he was seen as a blessing amongst their children. the youngest and he was favored along with
    his older brother. he was supposed to be their guardian. and the high priest supposed the sun sigil meant he was a gift
    from the sun.

    apollyon came to the valley for one thing; power. hearing rumors of lions forging many prides and growing by the number.
    it was a chance for him to start new, a chance for power. to grow and groom his legacy. starting a pride, a kingdom. how
    hard could it be? he was no longer welcome in his home, they had sent him away. his family burned away. but he was spared,
    the gods let him run. but as far as he was concerned there were no gods, just himself. they let his families closest friends
    betray them. they'd learn. for his claws were still long and sharp, as long and sharp as theirs. he'd come back and take
    what was rightfully his, but until then. he'd grow, and wait. for patience was a useful thing. when he finally came across
    the valley he found what he wanted to see. eventually coming across a religious group who deemed him a deity of the sun.
    they begged him to join them, for they insisted this was fate. the sun sigil on his back was examined and fawned over,
    they announced the gods had sent them elohim. he was resentful at the thought, there were no gods. but the longer they
    ranted and pleaded with him to stay, the more he realized what an opportunity this was. they chanted elohim, and they
    bowed at his feet. for now, he'd pretend to be the deity they wished for. it wasn't long before someone stood up to the
    new king. apollyon, now elohim was offended by the proclaim. the face raved about how elohim was no deity, he was
    not sent by the sun. he was a fraud. and the long he ranted the more he realized the people were believing the new face.
    but they stood silent, and he knew he had to act quickly. so he began to poison the food, wiping them out. when confronted
    with the new deaths he told them it was the sun punishing them for their lack of faith. when the time came, and there were
    only a few left, he wiped them out. proclaiming it was the sun god's wishes. rumors had spread of the tainted sun deity, he
    was feared. a king who had wiped his pride out at the first sign of unloyalty. he had power in his name. apollyon, rank elohim.
    his blue eyes sharp as he passed through the lands. he still had a task at hand, his family needed avenging, and with no pride
    how could he do that? he would start over, he would run things as he did with the past group. they would believe he was a
    god, and he'd lead them through victories under the golden sun. under the gods, for he was one of them, was he not?

    the false god, with golden chains hanging from his neck. his former pride's allies had heard of him, had gossiped and spread
    half-truths. what they believed to be the sun god's sent. from then, his name quickly spread throughout the savanna, luckily
    enough he had cut ties off with the allying prides when the rumors of his fraud began. afterwards he visited the closest pride,
    he had told them of what had happened. his pride had questioned him, his identity. so he did what the sun god had told him.
    he looked to the pride, asking boldly, "do any of you doubt me? do any of you doubt the sun god?" he called. fear was spread
    quickly, and they shook their heads eagerly. he seemed pleased. "spread the word about me," he ordered, standing tall and
    fearless. "faithless subjects do not survive here, you'll do well to learn that now." and with that he was gone. traveling yet
    again. he could only hope that the pride had listened, spread his name, his power. maybe then he'd have a shot. he would
    groom his pride to worship him, he just needed the right words, the right rumors. their precious gods wouldn't help them
    now. he was their holy word, their orders. he just needed to find the pathetic subjects who believed so faithfully in their
    beloved gods. elohim would rule them all.

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby Sixbane » Fri Oct 11, 2019 1:47 pm

This one is closed
i have like 4 large contests to judge and will probably set aside some time to judge all of them together
please refrain from posting until the winners up!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby Sixbane » Mon Oct 21, 2019 8:20 am

Sorry on delay, I mused over entries while I was on my vacation but now that im back

This one was super hard to judge; but in the end I've decided this one will go to
MySpoons;
As I thought your writing style was really intriguing and your form provided your character a strong, but simple motive full of mystery for what they'll do and what they'll bring with them to the valley. Your form really stuck through my mind reading through them, and I enjoyed the way that you built up the character through your writing.

With runner ups to
cyberdragon725
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With Hms/nods to these forms I also liked; I dont have time to do a bunch more RUS and I tried not to just give every single form an HM too but I really loved so many of them it was hard
Firedancer77
sky--lines
Amplify
ToxicShadow
Ravenshadow17
NARANDA
Isabella45
Meekins12345

Ill work on the runner ups in the next few days
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby MySpoons » Mon Oct 21, 2019 8:22 am

Ah, thank you so much, Six!!! I really love how much everyone worked on these entries <3
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby -Isabella- » Mon Oct 21, 2019 8:36 am

Congratulations! I absolutely loved what you did with your form! And congrats to the runners up too^^
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby nymx » Mon Oct 21, 2019 8:52 am

    congrats to spoons and the RU’s!! i loved reading everyone’s forms and seeing how each was developed! also thank you six for the HM!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby Ravenshadow17 » Mon Oct 21, 2019 9:02 am

Congratulations everyone!
And thank you for the HM!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby Amplify » Mon Oct 21, 2019 10:04 am

Congrats to everyone, and thank you for the HM!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby Meekins12345 » Mon Oct 21, 2019 10:29 am

.o. congrats, Spoons! And thank you for the honorable mention TuT
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #100 - The Lost Sun Guardian

Postby ~Soul~ » Mon Oct 21, 2019 10:44 am

Congrats spoon!! You may keep my art and thank you six for the runner up!
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