[Sixbane]

Sorry on delay (i fell asleep), This one is closed to judge and ill try and get winner up asap

[Avisowl]

Ahhh I’m so nervous, goodluck everyone, everyone’s entries are sTuNnINg

[dimi.]

Good luck all! Awesome concepts ouo

[Jippy]

Good luck everyone! Can’t wait to see the winner! c:

[stan.]

Best of luck to everyone! ^^

[NaCl]

good luck everyone! <3

[zakuro.]

:sweats: best wishes <3

[Killawolf17]

Good luck everyone!!!

[FluffyBirdie]

Oo good luck everyone! Awesome ideas out there @.@

[Sixbane]

So sorry on the delay! It took me some time to find the time/energy to sit and read forms (im glad i made it a short contest, lest i'd never have found the time lol), then it took me a while of bouncing between them to settle on the form I wanted, In the end, I've decided this one will go to
zakuro.
As I really enjoyed the concept you went with, I thought it a cute play on their abilities and the way she uses it to help her family was an interesting character development. I also enjoyed how you played her relationships with the family, and personally thought she fit in very well in a fun way in their dynamic. I also felt like your form in general had a lot of personality and it stuck in my mind, in the end. Well done.

I cant give official honorable mentions, but I wanted to leave a note for these forms as well as I also enjoyed them/ they were also strong and stood out to me.
dimi. - I enjoyed the dynamic with her family that you presented as well, and the art did a lot to capture personality and attention. I thought that the hymn was a lovely addition and well written.
Kiaa - I really enjoyed the direction you took the form and their abilities, and thought it extremely unique and clever to have the kalon be the one to do the forgetting. I also thought the possible conundrum of her forgetting her mother and sister to be a tragic, and intriguing developmental "what if".
Fluffybirdie - I adored the character development in your form, it was very well thought out, and well planned. The naivety contributing to her being so selfless, and the fact that she hides any sort of sorrow over her condition of potentially being forgotten- by rationalizing it as not preventing her from helping others. It was a unique outlook on the concept that also caught my attention.


If anyone may want more of my opinion/or suggestions/critique on your form you are welcome to pm me and i'll be happy to tell you what I thought!