I'll just say though that everyone had very nice ideas, and I wanted to write something for all the forms I saw at least partially complete!
- Oreoskys - I like how you included the activities that the kit enjoys with the siblings and their feelings on them. Also, the picnic story was adorable, and I really liked the idea; I really would have liked to see the finished story.
!~Mara~! - You had a very kind yet somewhat extravagant personality idea in mind! I would have really liked to see how you would have continued with this base idea.
~The Original Alice~ - The quote method you used for the form was nice and helped for me to understand various aspects of the kit. It’s also very cute how you centered various aspects of the kit around their butterfly markings.
Little Echo - The idea you came up for the kit is very cute, and the kit’s feelings for their siblings seem very interesting. I found their feelings on Taliyah to be quite unique. It’s also nice how you described his personality; you definitely gave the kit a sweet personality ^^
olivionary - The description you gave of the kit’s relationship with Mauricio is very well worded. Your description for the relationship also helped show their feelings and place in the family.
Moonie - The way you started off the story for the relationship aspect is very cute. Also, the headshot of the kit is very cute. However, you did not use the right siblings for your writing ;_; Still, the story was very interesting and it would have been nice to see more of it and to understand your idea of the kit’s personality better.
Pieces - The art piece you made is very cute, and it helped me to understand the kit’s interest and relationship without really needing to read the description. I found your idea for the kit very unique, and I really like how you weaved in the kit’s personality and interest with Taliyah’s. You also had a great idea in the extras section, as your writing helped me to more deeply comprehend the kit’s personality and dream of becoming a professional photographer, which I saw reinforced by the art c:
NaCl - The idea of the kit being a traveler seems very nice, and I like how you mixed in the kit’s connection to their siblings with the traveling. The art you made is also adorable, and I found it interesting how you tried to mix in the kit’s name with a Hamilton.
And now for the three I limited my judging down to:
For the forms of these three, I could not feel that anything was lacking, and I could deeply see the thought and time given to portray a thorough sense of this kit. These forms really made it hard for me to decide and led me to think a lot on who should get this kit.
planiteri - I honestly found your stories phenomenal; all three are very descriptive and indicative of the kit’s personality! The stories you crafted for the relationship section imply portrayed an adventurous and affectionate personality while also portraying the personalities of Mauricio and Taliyah well. The took such a unique approach with this section, and the approach might have been limiting and risky, but you executed the approach quite well to show a lot of the sibling relationship. Your story for the extra was great as well, and like the two prior stories, held a lot of feeling. In addition, your art piece is stunning, and I can feel the kit looking ahead, prepared for the future.
thor. - I also like the format that you used for the relationship; I could envision an interview taking place with the kit being questioned on their sibling relationships. From this section, I could see an emotional and passionate character to the kit. The kit also indeed seemed loud and talkative as you described in the personality section. Also, I liked the well rounded description of the personality, full of both seemingly negative and positive traits. I also liked how aspects of the personality contradict one another and add up to make a neat, complex character. I also found the aspect of her being an otaku funny yet fitting in the kalon’s personality, and I also saw the other aspects you added after to also fit well with the character you thought of. In addition, the quotes added a nice touch to exemplify the kit’s determination for their dreams!
CourtofLions - Your relationship section is indeed very thorough and feels well thought out. In this section alone, I could get an ample understanding of the kit’s personality as well as interests; I could see an active, stubborn personality and an openness to learning and fixations with camping and biology. Your extra section is likewise very thorough and well divided and helped me to understand plenty about the kit and your plans for the kalon the develop further! The section helped me to understand your idea of the kit’s positive and negative characteristics completely as well a complete idea of what the kit would do for comfort or fun. I also found some of the things you put for facts quite unique.
And now for the winner:
- thor.! The idea that you have for Varuka's personality ended up really sticking with me, as I admired the contradictions in her character that somehow seem fitting and make her a lovely kalon that I want to see shape her future and accomplish her dreams! Your formatting and ideas for the relationship section also really helped me to connect with Varuka better and see how her siblings have shaped her life and can continue to! In addition, I believe that Varuka's personality and desires could likely result in the family she's from but could also add a lot of dynamic to the family! I'm eager to see how she continues to develop and finds a way to fulfill her dreams c:
Congrats! If you ever want to develop Varuka's relationship with the family, just let me know! I'll be adding you soon!
For CourtofLions and planiteri: For being so close to winning, I could give you a standard edit or some pets? Just let me know if you'd like either. I really wish I could give you guys more because I really enjoyed your forms a lot!
Here is the drawing I made of this kit that now belongs to the winner ^^
Also, as said before, I'd really prefer all art to go to the winner.
Thank you to everyone who entered! I also wish you all the best in all the other competitions you guys enter!!
