[endless shelter;;]

Good luck!

[saturnus]

xx

username;; saikyouiku
name;; Katsumi. // 克己 ; "self-controlled"
gender;; male.

why do they cry?

There's an unspeakable amount of misfortune that plagues the world, be it tragedy, betrayal, or death; for every downfall there's grief. Grief over what could have been, what's been lost, what's been done wrong. Most times it's subtle, a brief crestfallen atmosphere that's swept away as quickly at it set in. But, these feelings are the result of a mistake, and mistakes, they won't do.

Katsumi strives for perfection— It's been hammered into his mind since birth that he must excel, that every failure is proof he's broken and terrible and flawed beyond repair. Every slip up seen makes the boy hitch his breath, his eyes sting, and he has to choke down the urge to yell at himself for crying in front of others because that just compounds onto the other inadequacies. Most times, bottling these feelings defuses the impending disaster. But without treatment, wounds fester, as do those sickened humors, grievances and guilts, and inevitably they broil up and hot tears run down his face. Katsumi hates these emotions, for they deny him from the idealized existence pressed upon him by his family and peers; to live is to be flawed, but that's a truth he cannot accept.


[200/200]

congrats saikyouiku you won this gal!! i really love your writing style! its very poetic and has a certain flow to it that makes it really pleasant to read!

other forms i liked were from raindrop, neondisaster, trivium, and epiale!! thanks to everyone who joined the competition! :3c

[nyota]

aaaa congrats!! your writing is so nice! you def deserved this lovely gal <3

[kolyakun]

Ahh congrats!! This is a really cool gal! You deserve 'em

[guil]

OH MY GOD I JUST WOKE UP AND!!!
THANK YOU so much oh my gosh,,!! I'm glad my writing style came off that way as that was my intention,, I just can't thank you enough for picking me for this vani!!

To all the other entrants! You all have some amazing concepts and writing skills as well, I'll be rooting you on in your next comp entries!! ^^

[Mariala]

Congratulations!