Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby Dreamie » Sun Jan 08, 2017 6:38 am

    oh boi; i have to finish.
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby mal du pays » Mon Jan 09, 2017 2:10 am

Due to request I will be extending this one final time to the 10th; this will be the final extension, no more will be granted after this one.
It will end at the same time on the 10th, 5 PM mst.
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby lovage » Wed Jan 11, 2017 9:46 am

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Oliver is mild invert at heart, but he is truely inbetween. He is highly sensitive due to all ways being alone. He is a social butterfly on the internet, but not in real life. He is very clumsy and may look dumb, but don't let this behavior fool you he is very strong minded with an open heart. Oliver is always highly cheerful and friendly even when he is down. Sometimes Oliver would pretend to be someone else to impress others and make them believe he is happy when he isn't. For those who need it he is very protective and brave. As he matures he grows in his caring, thoughtful, and cunning self.
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Oliver walked through the town during the night. It has been a while since he had been here. He wanted to know what changed after the six months that past from the last stay. Barely a thing changed as he walked to his favorite ice cream parlor in town. A stray black cat walked in across his path. Oliver yelped in surprise because of his large belief in superstitions sayings. "It has no tail what's wrong with it and it is still bad luck!" he screamed, he ran off while the stray ran after him. The stray still followed him even when he was in his room. Duck was in the room just laying on the second bed. "Help me there is black cat out to get me! It's black cat I saw in the window!" Oliver screeched as Duck looked up in surprise to see what was going on. Duck looked through the window at the cat then saw the bobtail it had. Duck looked confused than asked,"Isn't that a rare Japanese Bob-tail Cat? When you pet the cat it isn't suppose to bring good luck." Oliver opened up the window to let the cat escape the cold. "I didn't think of that." Oliver mumbled as he stroked the back of the cat, "I will call you Jinx and you will be my lucky pet." Duck overheard him say and questioned,"Hey we aren't allowed to have a cat due you hating them for their bad luck." Oliver just nodded his head and place pillows and the warmest blankets he could find on the pillows. As Jinx settled down in her bed Oliver gave her food and replied, "There you go. I am sorry I cannot keep you in the house and this is the best I can do for you right now." He smiled down at the cat and patted Jinx on the head before closing the window.
The next day Jinx sat at the window waiting for Oliver to give her food. Oliver came up with some chunks of meat and a home made collar with a broken bell on it. "Here you go," he chirped, placing the food down next to Jinx, "You have collar now with a broken bell on it so you can hunt still without it ringing." Jinx batted the bell as Oliver tried to put it on her. Oliver giggled as she tried to still bat the bell. "Oh what a curious cat you are!" he stated and Jinx meowed as if it was an agreement.
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A Few Days Later...
Oliver and Jinx trotted happily together along the sidewalk. As they crossed the crosswalk a car came hurling around the corner at top speed. Oliver didn't know what was happening while Jinx pushed Oliver out of the way even through she is a cat. Jinx took on the force of the hit while Oliver had his paw hit. The car drove off without stopping. Oliver weakly stood on his paws then said, "Jinx, you saved me... thank you-" He smiled weakly before passing out in pain.
A soft beeping sound woke up Oliver from a passed out state. A nurse stood off to the side talking to Oliver's family. The nurse turned in surprise state to see Oliver awake. "Hello there I am Erin your personal nurse! You were in a wreck early that you might not remember well. Just tell me what you need and I will get it for you." Erin chirped with a smile. "Where's Jinx?" Oliver questioned. Worried thoughts filled him through out his body. "Oh that cat that protected you... it lost a lot of blood and the vet just came to try and save it." Erin's reply silently fading. Oliver slow got up, but was rushed back down by near by doctors. "Hey take it easy! You are still injured and you could of injured yourself even more!" Erin scolded Oliver. "I just want to see Jinx one last time if she dies." Oliver cried out. Erin rolled his eyes then got a wheelchair and slowly lowered Oliver on it. Oliver rolled himself to follow Erin to where Jinx was located. Jinx was in a small room with the same set up as his. Jinx was awake and meowed to greet the newcomers. "Jinx! Jinx! Your okay!" Oliver exclaimed, rolling his wheelchair to pet his cat.
A Month Later...
Oliver sat in his bed with Jinx reading the newspaper from two weeks ago. "Hey Jinx have heard that the Kalon, who crashed into us, is paying all the hospital bills and is giving us hundred thousand dollars if we don't sue them to ruin their perfect record." Oliver said then added,"I am happy that both my parents let me keep you! They say that I am highly lucky to have you around. Also we going to be all healed up soon." Jinx wagged her tail with a meow. Jinx jumped down from the bed to her cozy bed on the floor and looked at Oliver to pet her. "Remember when the first night I had you and said that you are a lucky cat. It is true that you are really lucky." Oliver said, he petted her.
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby apprentice_ » Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:19 am

    User ; rainichi
    Name ; Onion
    Gender ; dmab; demiboy (he/they)

    personality
      Onion seems to get a lot of comments of the same nature: “What a lovely dream you have!” “You sure dream big!” “You’re so inspired!”

      These are true statements, of course; When Onion imagines his future, he sees deep space, or the depths of the ocean, or himself standing in front of the whole world and accepting an award for curing all disease and illnesses. People have told him he can do anything, and he’s sure he can!

      While Onion’s most noticeable trait is his enthusiasm, there are lots of other things too that create the glowing ball of excitement that Onion is. He’s a brave little guy, and will take on daring tasks from any who asks. To climb the fence to fetch the frisbee, to ask out his crush, he’ll do it all. He’l even fend off the dust bunny attack- well, that one takes play more in his imagination than real life. Vacuuming isn’t all that scary (anymore).

      This kit travels far and wide, discovering new lands and slaying evil beasts. In his mind, he’s a respectable knight well known throughout the world. Or other days, he’s the dragon protecting his castle full of gold (and don’t forget the beautiful princess).

      Either way, Onion is elsewhere, creating a world for himself where he’s someone big and important. In reality, he’s nobody particularly special in the grand scheme of things, but he’s sure he’ll get there one day.

      He really does travel, though. Perhaps not far, but he enjoys discovering the city he lives in and meeting new people. He has a tendency to bother other kalons with questions and chatter, but he’s only being friendly (he doesn’t exactly realize that not everyone wishes to talk to a stranger).

      Onion is a sweet kit who wants to make friends with the world. He can get nervous in awkward social situations, but he’s generally outgoing. He loves laughing (and he laughs easily) and thus values friends he finds funny, along with kalons who will play along in his fantasy worlds.

      He’s fascinated by nature and has taken a liking to bats and butterflies, but otherwise just enjoys dancing around in the park or forest. The city feels like home to him but something about the wilderness calls his attention. Maybe it’s the vibrant colors, or scents that can’t be made elsewhere, or the warm sense of peace that doesn’t quite get across indoors.

      Whatever it is, Onion can barely stay put. He’s always on foot, he’s here and then he’s there, thus he’s practically impossible to keep track of. He’s a constantly elated kalon with energy to share, he’s an adventurer with endless worlds to explore, he’s a[n overly] curious kid without a care in the world.

      Onion is a sunshine child, with a glowing smile and an undeniably bright future- anyone could tell just by looking at him.

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    i call this, "it was passed midnight when i lined this and obviously i forgot how anatomy works"
    alternately titled, "i don't know how to color, but the chicken is cute at least"
    one time onion brought home a chicken !! reactions varied.
    sass wasn't happy

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    relationships
    Duck || brother || supernovacity
      Duck and Onion are attached at the hips! Most days the two could do their own separate things and forget the other even exists, but they tend to spend more time together than apart. Onion is the elder of the two (barely) and is rather protective of Duck (especially against their crazy parents ;o). The two tend to travel around together, with Onion often pointing out cool scenes that maybe Duck would want to photograph. In awkward situations the two glue themselves together; There’s a safety in numbers.

      At the end of the day, Duck can be a little... usual. But Onion’s made it a sort of personal task to show Duck about, to liven up their worlds, and to spark Duck’s interests in new things. (Honestly, Onion acts older than he is when it comes to his little brother.) They’re very close and wouldn’t have it any other way.

    Mochi || dad || Takura.
      Mochi eats trash. Actual trash.

      That’s really weird. And when people ask about Mochi, that’s the first thing Onion thinks, and he always hesitates a moment before he can think of other traits Mochi has. Like, for example, how totally chill Mochi is, which is great when you’re a kid and just want to follow your own rules. (Actually, a couple times Onion has scolded Mochi for being too relaxed- “we need some sort of authority around here!”)

      That aside, they get along really well. When Onion comes home (likely much after dark), he loves to share the day’s stories with Mochi before crashing. The two regularly talk, just about this or that, whatever topic might be on the mind that day. They seem almost more like friends than father and son, which is sometimes good, and sometimes... not so much. Either way, they have a healthy relationship.

    Sassafras || dad || Takura.
      For better or for worse definitely for worse, Onion idolized Sass. Why this is remains a mystery.

      Theoretically, it’s because Sass works at the carnival, though Onion imagines more of a trapeze line and sword swallowers carnival than a ring toss carnival. He asks his dad a lot, “when are you going to perform?” Sass always deadpans of course, stating that he’s just the guy behind the booth- but Onion is stubborn.

      Otherwise, Sass is the more disciplining parent, and while this sometimes creates arguments, at the end of the day Onion is respectful and will do as told. The two aren’t so much on a friendly conversation level, but even so, Onion loves to tag alongside Sassafras so as to at least be around him.

      Plus, Onion finds it sort of amusing watching his dad get irritated over customers, whether they’re just hyper kids or rude adults.

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    future job
      Onion lives out of town, in a more rural area occupied mostly by empty fields and sun. He moved here in his early twenties after the city grew to be just sort of, the same old place, the same old thing. But here in the plains, he owns a small farm, in a sense. It’s odd to live in such a quiet place considering how they prefer the presence of people, but the few neighbors they do have are extremely friendly.

      Onion actually only has chickens- and while there are a couple of your average egg-laying breeds (namely, leghorns), the coop mostly contains silkie chickens. They, among a few other breeds that Onion owns, are more so entered in shows than they are used for eggs, due to their low laying rate.

      This job isn’t always greatly paying, so when they’re low on cash, Onion sometimes sells bouquets from their flower garden. (Or begs for money from his parents, either way.)

      Onion’s taken this occupation because it allows them to stay in an open area with lots of fresh air. This, and they’ve loved chickens ever since they were young!! As shown by the chicken he somehow adopted when he was young.

      He invites his parents and brother over to the farm often, or will travel back to the city to visit. They don’t often go more than a month apart- even that is longer than usual.
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    im too lazy to code bye
    thanks for reading tho ayy
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby mal du pays » Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:32 am

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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby BoomARat » Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:37 am

I'm so nervous. :v
Best Wishes everyone!!
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby ♡Chocolate♡ » Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:58 am

    rushed the last story oops
    welp hoping for the very best~
    just lost in a contest for another kit, so keepin' my hopes high <3

    good luck everyone ah
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby mal du pays » Wed Jan 11, 2017 12:01 pm

NOW CLOSED, ANY EDITS MADE AFTER THIS POINT (5 PM MST) WILL DISQUALIFY YOUR FORM

will get judging asap uvu
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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby apprentice_ » Wed Jan 11, 2017 12:07 pm

    punctual

    good luck everyone !!


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Re: Onion readopt - first post updated

Postby Dreamie » Wed Jan 11, 2017 12:29 pm

    best of luck to everyone!!
    lots of great forms. :0
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