Re: Viscet # 586 - UFA

Postby PikachuTori25 » Tue Apr 12, 2016 4:41 pm

Good Luck Guys! <333
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Re: Viscet # 586 - UFA

Postby troye » Tue Apr 12, 2016 4:43 pm

      aaa good luck ♡
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Re: Viscet # 586 - UFA

Postby DogLife. » Wed Apr 13, 2016 2:45 am

Good luck all.

don't think I am gonna win, I was ill for the last three days so could not Finnish :-(!

































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Re: Viscet # 586 - UFA

Postby canary. » Wed Apr 13, 2016 11:51 am

Did I say good luck? I don't think I did. Anyway, good luck everyone! C:
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Re: Viscet # 586 - closed

Postby SilverSamurai » Wed Apr 13, 2016 12:01 pm

closed! please keep in mind that there are a lot of long and complex forms and it will take a while to judge. Please be patient, as I am also really busy with my classes at the moment! I will try to have this judged by the end of the weekend though.
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Re: Viscet # 586 - closed

Postby Ravenshadow17 » Wed Apr 13, 2016 12:41 pm

Good luck everyone!
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Re: Viscet # 586 - closed

Postby WolfwithWings38 » Tue Apr 19, 2016 12:21 pm

Good luck everyone! :thumbup: :clap:
Hey, this is me! WolfwithWings38! You may call me: WolfwithWings38, Wolf, WolfwithWings, and WolfyWingy Though I really don't know why you would XD ....... and in a nutshell I'm weird when I really want to be! I also don't mind trading... and also PM me if you want to talk or something, I won't bite!
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Re: Viscet # 586 - winner!

Postby SilverSamurai » Mon Apr 25, 2016 4:27 am

Sorry for the delay! i've been quite busy recently u.u
But due to a lot of forms, I am going to comment on every completed form and narrow it down from there. If you do not see you're name or a critique on your form, then it probably wasn't competed enough to be judged (more than just a name+gender).




PikachuTori25 - right off the bat I see that your form is very organized and neat. It's kinda squished, but it's nicely placed. aw poor lonely bab hopefully he'll find them. Very nice character and development! I loved the story about Atlas and all the little individual stories. Nicenice!!

Doctor Whooves Lover - my first thought was perhaps check the form over for spelling errors and grammar mistakes? also I wish you could have finished it! I would have loved reading more about his dragon journals.

Marki-moo - First of all I love the coding you did. It looks nice and it's not overly complicated. But oh wow, he's quite a unique guy, I really like how you came up with all of his traits! It's too bad that you couldn't fill up your form as much as you wanted, but it was very nicely done!

Troye - hhh walls of text, maybe add some spaces or extras to break it up a little bit? "the miracle of all miracles, a half-full tube of superglue." the realest thing I've ever read tbh. gosh he's such a nerd. I just kinda wish there was more and everything was broken up a bit?

DogLife. - how many viscets have been named Kiara oh gosh. again the walls of text and all the color is kinds throwing me off? i don't think you could die from a bullet to the leg either? it reminds me a lot of the old cat books, and it's kinda jumbled around. Good writing, but perhaps try different placements of things for a greater effect?

Xelinator - aaa i love the concept, i wish you had time to finish it ;u;

WolfwithWings38 - please use spell check and read over your form before you post it.

doglover947 - aaa pretty and simple coding i love it. whoa that's a lot of music. But the concept is cute, i wish you went on and described more about her and her 'princess' life!

Doctor. Hurri - kinda squished to the side, but nice. the words cutting off at the side kinda makes it hard for me to read though. Little hacker gamer nerd cute. why does he dislike unicorns. does he have a grudge or something? aw he's such a sweet guy, i love that little piece about the tree house, i wish it was finished!

Ravenshadow17 - I love the name and the simplicity of it, and I really wish you would have gone on!

AcetheKidd - ok first of all I really like that gif. oh gosh a viscet patrol sounds cool. Again with the wills of text though. i love grumpy turtles. aw that's such a cute story, it really explains Nik's past and present well. but the grammar is a bit wonky throughout the whole form. The relationships and little writing tidbit really tied things together! nice c:

CaesarHorse - nice writing and lovely story! The images are a bit large and take up a lot of space, but nice nonetheless!

Vesinir - most of the images were broken and that threw off a lot of the form, making the coding funky. aw this smol sick fluff. aw that's really nice ;u; i really liked the story and her relationships and aaa it was nice !!

~Hug A Pug~ - i like the banner and coding at the top, it's nice. actually the coding all around is really nice, and the spaces are very welcomed. They seem like a very down to earth character and seem very nice to be around c:



whew, that took a lot longer than I thought it would ^^' sorry for the delay! There were a lot of great forms and again I haven't had much free time recently.

You guys really made it hard for me, I loved so many of the forms and you guys really did a great job on this one. Kudos to all of the completed forms!

But in the end, there can only be one winner. So in the end, the winner is...





AcetheKidd! Congrats, even with all the grammar errors and and walls of text, the character was well rounded and there was a sense of completeness to the form. Take care of him!



That being said, I feel like a RU is necessary, as I just couldn't shake the concept and unique character from my mind. So I'd like to offer an RU to Marki-moo if you'd like it! PM me for info if you're interested c:




Well done to everyone else! there is so much talent in this community, good luck on your future forms!
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Re: Viscet # 586 - winner!!

Postby PikachuTori25 » Mon Apr 25, 2016 4:55 am

Congrats Ace & Marki!
I am somewhat heartbroken, but I know Ace will take care of this babe. <3
You may keep all of the art in my form if you want it. c:
and Marki, I can't wait to see your RU!
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Re: Viscet # 586 - winner!!

Postby PikachuTori25 » Mon Apr 25, 2016 5:21 am

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