[park.]

I apologize for the wait! I will work hard to finish everyone's forums and my batches! You guys did so well I want to read every single thing and understand it all c:

[Thebattleangel]

The wait is fine my dude, don't sweat it c: I'm excited to see the results~

[park.]

x
x Okay so sorry the results took forever. Everyone did a very good job and I really wanted to give everyone RU's XD. I wrote details for Wolf Winter's entire form because they are indeed the winner and I wanted them to know what exactly got them there.

@Wolf Winter - winner!
▪ "Yes, I was born to a pair of ordinary viscets, in a time so long ago that their bones are now dust on the sands of time." This sentence is amazing. I know its one of the beginning sentences, but it just really got me into the mood to read your piece.
▪ I love the story of how he first used his power. Imagining their feast and celebration made me smile.
▪ The little blurb about not telling his mother really got me. Good job with pulling on the heartstrings.
▪ Okay I am super sad, Igdens dead, his partner. His BUDDY. Ugh at least it was peaceful.
▪ No Seli no!
▪ "The most painful part wasn't the wars or watching my new friends die, it was leaving behind the ones who were still living." -
▪ "I won't share that number, because it is both less and more than you'd expect."- Also another really good sentence. Just reading some of the things you like flowed so wonderfully. There weren't any dead end sentences like "He ran away. He was sad."
▪ "Then a week later we got more news of fighting elsewhere stopping, and the mysterious force behind it." Your introduction of Borean was amazing. He's so cool!
▪ Their struggle in chapter two well written and I like his friend's Bjørn's teamwork.
▪ His inner struggle to avoid killing someone is well written.
▪ The candle set up was really cool
▪ "The rhythms of daily life pounded into us." - love this sentence.
▪ ""I'm not like most people," I said. I cringed mentally a moment later, I of all people knew how cliche that was." hahahaha funny
▪ "Everything I thought I had known shattered as someone I loved yet again turned to dust before my eyes." awww nooooo
▪ "Then I told her my story, because it was also her beginning, as tears of extreme happiness and deep sadness fell." - aaahh my heart this is so sweet.
▪ Yooo I loved the ending!! I love Australen's note.

@.kaede - RU!
▪ The second best forum goes to .kaede. gosh your writing is 10/10 and the forum was just so fun to read because it was pretty! Even thought the three other shots weren't done (which I really wish they were) you still impressed me. If you want the RU, then respond to my private message and I'll get started on it!


@Sunlitsecrets - RU!
▪ Woah! SO much artwork here. Like dang, you did a really good job. I loved your writing but I was really impressed with the time and effort you gave with art. Your style is so cute! I love the scanned traditional work! I will send you a pm regarding an RU after .kaede responds c:


@Prince Audric, Surroundingcrystals - x2 stubs
▪ Again, hard work! It can't go unnoticed guys! You both get some stubs c: thank you for participating!

[Prince Audric]

congrats guys, I had fun with this.

[✦ nemuri]

hhhhhgn congrats, WolfWinter !! ;v; feel free to use the art in my form, so long you credit the original artists. some of the art commissioned was from flight rising ^^;;

congrats to sunlitsecrets for the other ru, and to prince audric and surroundingcrystals for the hms/two stubs !! it was super fun competing against all of you, and i feel that i've learned something in regards to tackling on larger competitions such as this, which i am grateful for.

lastly, thanks so much to park_enhuii !! it's truly an honour, being given an ru ahaha ^^;; i can't wait to see what the newest addition to my viscet family would end up looking like !! ;0;

[Sunlitsecrets]

Aaaa park thank you so much for the RU ;w;

Congrats, all! <3 WolfWinter, all my art is yours.

[dzo]

Congrats .kaede on the RU!! I loved your form and what you did with Aatu! <3

[WolfWinter]

@ .kaede Your form was really quite lovely! The first post with the leaves and the quote was really striking. Congratulations on the RU, I can't wait to see what they look like!

@ Sunlitsecrets Your traditional art throughout your form is really good! I like how you mixed what you used to color, it made your art really interesting to look at. Your story is really impressive, too! Congratulations on the RU!

@ Prince Audric & Surroundingcrystals Your ideas were pretty unique, congratulations on getting stubs ^^

I really enjoyed this competition. The forms were all fun to read. Good luck everyone on your next comps!

[magpiemochi.]

viscet offspring:

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NB 2335:
Forum/viewtopic.php?f=124&t=3985109