[pochei.]

good luck to everyone who entered!

[cardboardteeth]

good luck!!

[messenger]

good luck everyone c:

[skywalker,]

good luck everyone !!

[yeena]

finally got around to finishing this judging, so, without further ado, huge congratulations to messenger !!

pulled in a guest judge and we both loved your form !! it was simple, down to the point and ended up tying together in the end. so,, congrats again !! ill add you to larssons reference in a bit.

but id like to award a ru to Izurude !! feel free to pm me and give me a dog breed to base your ru off of if you want it. the personality you created for toki was both amusing and yet realistic at the same time ?? in short it had me actually laughing at the character so,, kudos to you.

finally, hms to Nodell, Lyrium, shrillkrill, enet., and skywalker,. y'all all had nice forms, but something was either off or missing in them but i still felt like you deserved something so congrats congrats.



that was pretty much all, thank you for withstanding the minimal wait time with judging, good luck in future comps !! if you want any critiques about your form, what was off, on point, whatever, feel free to pm me !! a minor list of suggestions in the code, just put it in the box so this post isnt too messy:



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- consistency is key. dont try to make your personality like a novella (excluding if you list traits and then describe them; but even so), thatd make it harder on you as the writer to keep the character consistent.

- try to tie in any loose ends with your character as well, your character is loyal and kind so... why ? what do they do thats loyal and kind ? question your own words and then answer your questions !! or maybe get a friend to look over your form and tell you what theyre confused on and stuff. another perspective never hurt anyone.

- also like. maybe keep the words simple and sweet. its not like anyones asking you to go get a thesaurus for the word "rude" or something. big words are nice, but if you arent fully certain of how to use the word to describe a character, dont. edit: sorry @ whoever said this was PA, i didnt intentionally try to make it like that :'0 so apologies again anon(s) forgive me

[skywalker,]

thank you for the HM !
Congratulations to the winners !
Also, thank you for the tips ! I will
totally be using them c:

[Mima]

Thank you so much for the runner up! And congrats to the winner and all the HMs. I sent you a PM!

[Anza]

Congratulations to everyone ^^
This Kalon is wonderful & you all had terrific personalities

[Hail.]

Congratulations