Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby Aeyote » Wed May 23, 2012 11:48 pm

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.::Name::.

Tyr (pronounced t-E-re)

.::Gender::.

Male

.::Personality::.

Being born and raised on the outskirts of Isket's plains, he naturally developed the habit of being a loner. Despite keeping to himself, he is strictly a serious and regal fellow. He never shys away nor questions orders or rules, and he'll follow those to the letter. He's a bit old fashioned, being raised by his father for so long and thus he was taught to be a gentleman as well as obedient. Thus being this way he has a majority of flaws. People say he's too serious, unnerving, has no sense of humor and is generally a stick in the mud. Tyr sees no use for humor or other profuse things, finding them distracting. And because he's such a 'yes man' sometimes he'll just accept the order without question then regretting why he didn't ask for more details.

Because he usually is so serious and tends to dance around the idea of 'fun', most never get to see his other side. When he relaxes and loosens up, others will see that he is very open-minded, and will actually crack a smile from time to time. Affection for him is a foreign concept and he'll feel uncomfortable watching or receiving such actions.

He looks to older warriors for guidance and the utmost respect. Younger members he feels protective and proud to know that they're safe because he's helped. When he thinks no one is looking, he might even bat a clump of grass for pups to play with
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.::Story::.

"What do you mean she's gone!?" The loud booming voice of an older warrior cried. Tyr turned his attention to the sound of the brute's cause of distress, listening in.
"Blast her!" He shouldered his way through the gathering crowd of concerned warriors and out of the towering cave the pack resided in.

The young male bounded over to the worried father, matching his stride easily thanks to his long legs. "What's happened?"

"My daughter's run off! Don't just stand there go and look for her!"

"Of course." The adolescent would never argue with an order. Nor would he have another pack mate out wandering the dangerous landscape. He wasn't entirely sure who had run off. Perhaps he'd get lucky and find her regardless. Not many wandered off alone. He'd grown up most of his life in seclusion and he knew when to run and when to fight. Still, he wasn't a master fighter either.

Tyr's earthy toned, limber body easily cut through the tall grass as he loped about, casting around for the scent of anyone out there. He'd been running through a mental list in his head while he searched, knowing that the male's daughter could only be a select few. His yellow-green peers fixed upon the shadows of the dark forest that stretched before him. If she's gone in there, she could be hurt or worse... Just because he hadn't grown up here didn't mean he didn't recognize a dangerous place when he saw it.

Taking a deep breath he plunged into the shadowy foliage. At last! A pack mate's scent. And it was fresh. His pace quickened as he increased his searching rate. He'd find her. He had to. He had been ordered to. A flash of tan caught his eye as well as the unmistakable acrid tang of fear. He spun around just in time to see the menacing form of a juvenile Kronador looming over him. His ears went back as he snarled challengingly at this grotesque creature. He had to fight to protect the pack. Even if he stood no chance. He barreled his side into the creature's chest without warning. Unfortunately he wasn't as quick as he'd hoped for the chimera had time to adjust it's stance. His blow only made it stumble. Wickedly sharp claws gripped him then. This couldn't be it. He wouldn't back down. His front was lifted as his head snapped upwards to bite into whatever flesh he could reach. The tough hide of it's shoulder. Try only realized his mistake too late. There was a sickening snap and a white hot bolt of pain traveling from his right fore paw up his arm. Shock was overtaking his body and he was slowly losing consciousness from it. The last things he heard was the menacing growl of a warrior then the shuttering jolt as his body hit the ground.


.::History::.

Tyr and his brother, Heimdall, were born and raised on the outskirts of Isket's plains by their father. The siblings' mother had died not long after the pair were born due to the vicious actions of a Kronador attack. Their father chose not to take them back to the pack out of mourning for his beloved mate. Despite his own selfish reasoning, he taught his boys all he could while he had the chance.

Both pups soon grew to healthy adolescents when their father became gravely ill. The siblings wondered if his heartbreak was the cause and the two cared for their father as best they could until he inevidably passed on. The siblings debated for some time before Heimdall came to the decision that he was going to live out on his own, to set his mind at ease as well as finish what their parents mission had been.

With little choice, Tyr said goodbye to his brother before he quested to find the pack and bring their Alfas the news of all that had transpired.


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What is the name of the woi's enemy?

Huge, Lumbering Chimeras called Kronadors

((Random question here. Was the name of these guys inspired by the Konators from the movie Dinosaur?))


Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines?

Yes! Others then know that you are allowed and are the proud owner of a W.O.I. This will prevent unneeded drama as well as providing an accurate reference image for your W.O.I.

What is this contest judged by?
50% Art, 50% Story but everything else IS needed and is still looked at. <3 As well as dedication and completion.
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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby chargay » Thu May 24, 2012 9:57 am

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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby Amethysts » Thu May 24, 2012 10:49 am

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Name:
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Gender:
♀ Female ♀

Personality:
Very shy, Looking For Love, Optimistic, Persuasive, Adventurous, & Playful.

Story:
W,i,P

Art:
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What is the name of the WoI's enemy?
The name of the WoI's enemy is known as the Kronadors,
They are the color of the Isket.
&They are huge Lumbering Chimeras.

Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines?
Yup, others then know that you are allowed to rp and are the proud owner of a WoI.
This will prevent any unneeded drama in the future as well as providing an accurate reference image for your WoI.

what is this contest judged by?
The contest is judged on by the story & 50/50 of art.
Other sections are taken in consideration and aren't left out.

Everything is in W.i.P

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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby Houmawolf<3 » Thu May 24, 2012 11:06 am

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Name: Luna
Gender: female
Personality:shy, waiting for love, kind, swift, great agility, very protective of the ones she loves
Story:
8 Weeks


Luna opened her large, bright eyes. The light was so bright that she had to shield her eyes with her unusually large paws. Then something large and dark blocked out the sun.

she started her eyes at the also large paws in the tall blades of grass in front of her. Luna's eyes slowly made it up to his wide chest, then to his broad shoulders, and straight to his face. His eyes met hers and she whimpered and rubbed her face on his furry chest. She new this male. From somewhere but she didn't know where. He wrapped his tail around her. Her licked her nose gently.

When she lifted up her head and looked around she noticed something. Everything was black and white. Luna couldn't see any color, she was puzzled. The male she was with suddenly also looked around and frowned. Then he motioned her to follow him. He and Luna slowly walked around the large forest to a dark spot under the trees where some flowers lay. Thats when he told her it was their parents grave. She looked at him puzzled,"their?".




That is when he began to speak," okay first things first Luna, i am your brother. and your eight weeks old. You were born on a tragic day, your parents, well um our parents, died eight weeks ago. Eight weeks ago, your mother gave birth to you in the middle of a battle with the Kronadors and this is how it started: When she was 9 months pregnant with you our father received a telegram quoting that there was a Kronador attack near the river. Your father left and secretly your mother followed. Even though she was pregnant.

I stayed in a near by cave so i could accomplish my surprise attack on the leader Kronador that i was informed to do by Rayo. After a long time no one came to get me. So headed out to the river and the warriors were surrounding something. I pushed through the crowd there you were, unconscious. I picked you and carried you to a near by cave. I tried to wake you up over and over again. But you wouldn't. That is when a warrior came to the cave to tell me that mom and dad died. I didn't really care though, all I cared about was you. Plus mom and dad were people that I didn't bother to care about.

You'll learn why someday, but not now. So after he left you woke up. I managed to get some food into you and then you passed out again. This cycle continued until today and.... oh um never mind, i have already said to much." Luna stood up and then asked him,"so is that why I have such bad vision?"

" I don't know why you have such bad vision, i wish i did"

" what is your name?"

" just call me Brother", he replied.

And she continued to call him that.




2 years later

Luna never left Brother's side. They always stayed together. He taught her how to hunt, run, hide, and love. He never left his side.
Until now.




4 years later

After all those years they were together there had been very bad Kronador attacks on the Warriors land of Isket. Brother had fought
in all of them. He never had to go very far from Luna. But one day they received a telegram saying that he was needed in a
war in the Kronador part of Isket. The telegram also informed that the time he could come back was unkown. Luna was with him when he received the news and when she heard this she ran. She ran out of the cave onto the woods and didn't stop.Luna didn't know why, she just wanted to leave and never come back. This was her worst nightmare, and now it had come true. She could hear Brother behind her called Luna's name.

Suddenly his calling stopped and she
stopped running. When she turned around she saw no one. Then when she turned to face straight forward there was Brother. She
jumped. " you just cant leave like this". She felt a tear role down her face.
"Our warriors need me. I cant leave them"

" i know but then your leaving me"

" this is a good time for you to learn to live on your own"

Luna looked at her large paws, then his. "but we are the same, if you leave i wont be the same".

" You will always be the same trust me", Brother whispered.



He rubbed his head against hers." i leave tomorrow, don't do anything stupid while Im gone". Brother laughed. " you know I'm all
about stupid", Luna also laughed. She had a record of doing crazy things and risking her life for no reason. One she even attempted
to kill twelve Kronadors with her bare teeth and no help. And even though she did kill them her brother hated when she does this stuff. " now lets get back to home", her and Brother walked home.

The next morning she could hear Brother leaving the cave."wait!",
Luna called. He stopped and turned. She ran towards him and gave Brother a huge hug and lick. He laughed and said "i will always
love you". Then he turned and ran to the side of a dark tall wolf. An they ran through the misty morning. Luna now had an empty
heart. She needed someone to love. And she wanted to find someone to love.





6 years later
Luna wandering in the morning mist for an easy meal. It had been 2 years since Brother left and so far it hasn't been easy. She never a had a friend or mate or anything besides Brother so she was always alone. Even though she had other warriors that wanted to be around her, she didn't want to be around them.

She trotted to a nearby tree and sniffed the air. Something wasn't right. Then that's when she saw a female Kronador trekking towards her. For a second she froze thing what Brother would do, then she darted. Not away but straight towards the Kronador. They were running straight for each other. Then it was a head on collision. Their shoulders seemed to shatter as they hit. The Kronador scratched at Luna's body and Luna was defenseless. For some reason without Brother here, she couldn't do anything. Then the Kronador took his teeth and seemed to rip at her stomach, she howled and her life flashed before her.

She saw her mom licking her and her dad laying at her side, dead. Then suddenly a Kronador came up behind her mom and grabbed her throat and there Luna was limp and helpless. Then Luna woke up from the daydream and she saw a large claw and then blacked out.

She rustled. She woke and something was towering above her. Tall,dark,and black. It was a male and he was licking her wounds. She whimpered, "Brother!", but the wolf replied,"no, its not Brother, um just call me Mate". Luna whispered as stumbling to get up," why does everyone ask me to call them things, that aren't even names?!", Mate just rolled his eyes.

He carried her home to Luna's cave and she asked if he had a place to stay and he said,'' well, um, no not really, i mean um, its kinda a lone wolf thing", "well you could um stay here....", Luna replied, not really knowing how to talk around guys. He just shook his head and left." wait, no!", Luna howled, but he already ran away.

Luna stared out of the cave into the empty forest. It was now the late afternoon. Something was strange about Mate. And she was going to find out.




6 and a 1/2 years later
Ever since that day, Luna never saw Mate again. She searched every where and she never found him. After a long day of hunting, she walked into the woods and sat next to the tree Mate saved her at. She could tell it was the tree because her blood still was on it. She tensed up remembering the beautiful moment, and began to howl. She didn't know why, but she just did. Her voice ringed through the trees, and the wind seemed to whistle along. Everything was in sync, just not her. It almost sounded like she was howling with Mate and they were in sync...And then they were.

Their two hearts joined and they sang together as nature sang along. Then Luna stopped and Mate stopped too. She was puzzled, where did he come from? Then abruptly, Mate got up and his body brushed against hers. Luna felt a chill go down her spine. She whimpered. Then he nudged her shoulder and she nodded her head. Then they started to run. They ran through the woods and kept running. The leaves blew off the trees and flowed behind then. They continued to run, into the farthest any wolves would go into the woods. But now they weren't just wolves, they were mates. And soon , they wouldn't be just mates, they would be parents, leaders, and warriors....





Art: Image you, see um, im a very inexperienced artist and this took a very long time. Im really sorry, but i tried my best Hope you like it.
What is the name of the woi's enemy? Kronador
Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines?yes, so the board can make sure that no one made a fake woi. but also no because you have to do your own drawing in a contest for a woi.
what is this contest judged by? half on art and half on story..
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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby KenmilltoSky » Fri May 25, 2012 4:31 am

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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby nixxiona » Fri May 25, 2012 7:09 am

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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby Glint. » Sat May 26, 2012 6:52 am

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Her name means bravoury in Latin.
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Girl,niña, fille,ילדה,女の子
I thought Animus should be a girl because that's what she strikes me as... A girl I think I was most influenced by her beautiful markings and long tail.

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As well as being Sweet Animus can always be sly and she is very cunning which is as per usual for a teenager! She always has trick up her sleeve so just be aware, she is very persuasive so almost all ways gets her way, but that does not make her spoiled, she is not self centered nor vain, she is just good at what she does.
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Evan though she may be shy, you can always trust Animus, she will never let you down. To her loyalty is a code of honor, letting you down is like a Poisson. She hates to see disappointment in other W.O.I's faces.
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Animus is not always a play full, fun loving pup. She is often very serious, especially when danger is involved.She is very protective over younger pups due to what happened to her family. She likes them to stay close, to stay safe.
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Being a W.O.I, Animus is very smart, she is logical and loves to be ahead. Since a pup she has been very indipendent and likes her own company, she get around fine, no help. She will deniy that she sometimes must get lonly but you can see it in her eyes.Animus is a strong willed wolf who will never let anyone stand in her way.
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Animus likes many things but these are her favourite;
•Thunder storms. • Fresh kill.
• Rainy days. • The forest smell.
• Snow. • The grass.
• Play fighting. • oh….
• Running around. • and all of the above.
• Going wild.

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• Being shouted at.
• Fighting
• Loud noises in genral.
• Screaming.
• Some other warriors
( not pointing names or naming fingers.)
• Being injured.
• Space invaders.

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Other W.O.I's in the story : Aderyn owned by [ . α ∂ є я у η . ] and Kafka owned by amigo Girl I have permission from the owner to use this W.O.I

| NameAnimus | RankTrainee | Gender Female | Age pup |

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Hi guys! I ran over to Aderyn and Kafak Hi. we lay down on the side of the cliff looking onto the setting sun. Why did you call us here? I stared at there confused faces. YOLO! Aderyn grinned back ok?. I watched for any change in expresion but nothing came YOLO... well after what happened today I decided I wanted to explain my past, the things I never told you! so here it goes.

Smashed ice!
I felt my mothers warm pelt, knowing that she was there comforted me through the storm. I nuzzled her, needing my way into to the warm fur. Slowly I started to drift back to sleep, then there was another large clap of thunder. I was cold now, mother wasn't with me. She was standing at the entance of the cave, the lighting iluminated her face. She was worried, I whinned and called out for her. She turned, her eyes wide and picked me up in her jaws, my brothers and sisters followed after her, I was the smallest so the slowest and had to be carried. I looked around, the other wolves where in there armour, they were fighting the Kronadors. I was so scared. The lighting flashed and thunder roared through the skys. My mother started to run. I looked behind me and saw one, it was huge! a Kronador. The beast grabbed one of my siblings, it shook her in its jaws untill she bacame limp then through her to the side, she didn't twitch. I started to whimper, the creature came faster and faster, snipping at my mother's tail. She was tired, I could hear her panting, she was also wearing her armour. We turned a sharp conner, there was a hollow tree to the right, my mother seemed to notice this as well, she took me and my siblings and hid us away. The lighting struck again, there large shadows appeared on the frozen surface of the lake. She ripped at the beast throte but nothing happened, it let out a roar. Me and my brother waited, we watched them battle. Suddenly the Kronador took mother by the neck and through her high in the air. She hit the surface of the lake with a loud thud. That was when he ran out. My brother went full sprint towards mother, but the Kronador noticed him. It let out and roar and took him in his jaws then tossed him aside.I waited watching the Kronador, tears streaming down my face, I lifted my head, finaly the Kronador was gone. I sprinted through the snow on to the ice, I slipped a little but that didn't matter. I reached my mum, she was lying perfectal still. Mum? I nudged her with with my paw. Mum! I licked her muzzle, the tears cxame faster now, I was alone, I snuggled close to my mother, her armour was cold, a patch of blood was spreading from her neck, flooding the ice. She was gone. I was alone!

To-the-day

| NameAnimus | RankApprentice | Gender Female | Age teen |


Animus woke up panting, her heart was racing, she had not had one of those dreams in years, as if she was actually there! Shaking her head she streatched and fluffed out her fur. A icy drop of water hit her muzzle,she looked up and saw the frost melting of the cellig of her cave. She stuck her head out into the sun light. The snow had already started to melt and Isket original land scape was re-forming. Yawning she stepped out side, not many otehr warriors were awake but the ones that were had only just woken up. The she looked around, noticing no one she knew she decided to go hunt.The forest was still dark, barley any light had made it through the thick layer of trees, she sniffed the air, the strong scent of deer filled the air. She turned her head to see antlers pocking out the thick bush, Animus dropped into the hunters crouch, she slowly pressed the wet dirt, her belly brushed the cold dead leaves. The deer pricked his ears as she stepped on a dry twig, Animus froze. The deer glanced round, ears twitching, then lowered his head back to the grass.Slowly Animus rose up from the under growth, she went into a pounce and jumped, she sunk her teeth into the deer's thick fur, she swiped her paw pushing the deer to the ground, holing it there she went to its throat,the deer struggled, but Animus sunk her teeth in deeper. She removed her fangs the deer as it froze. There was a sudden rustling behind her, she turned quickly to see a sandy coloured wolf jumping out at her Aderyn! The wolves laughed at the moment. Want a hand?Animus nodded as Aderyn lifted the buck. The dragged the large deer across the forest floor back to camp. That looks heavy. a small pup ran out of its den Kafka! Animus ran over to her, the two rubbed necks, Aderyn and Kafka had always been like a family when Animus needed them most, she loved them to pieces. The three dragged the buck across camp to the very edge. Animus watched Aderyn and Kafka talk about ..... well Animus didn't know because she wasn't paying attention. She watched the other wolves wake up and leave there dens. How much longer? Aderyn paused What do you mean? Animus shrugged when does the apprentices become warrior's? Aderyn looked shocked Why? Animus smiled, I just want to go from apprentice to warrior, gain my armor and be free! Aderyn laughed YOLO! Animus cocked her head YOLO?
YOLO, you only live once! enjoy it, your always in such a rush! Animus smiled. But I have to go.... Aderyn cocked her head I have to go, go become a warrior, find him, find my father. Kafka nuzzled Animus Don't go! Animus grinned, she licked Kafka's forehead. Don't worry I'll be back! Kafka looked up at her tears streaming down her face be careful Animus smiled at Aderyn Good bye guys they nuzzled flanks Good bye Animus. Aderyn nodded and took the whimpering Kafka in her jaws.


Finding Glory.

| NameAnimus | RankApprentice | Gender Female | Age teen |

Animus sprinted down into the forest, the sun hadn't risen fully but that didn't effect her vision. The tree's grew closer together as Animus got deeper into the forest the tree's started growing closer together. Animus struggled to clamber through the thick trunks. She froze, a loud roar came from behind her, slowly she turned to see a Kronador, its warm breath making Animus chock. Oh... Animus turned and jumped through the forest. The Kronador roared and ran after her, taking out the forest with it. Animus sprinted, her heart racing the Kronador came feet away, its fangs biting at her tail. She slipped down a mud bank. Looking up she could see that the Kronador had lost her scent. Panting she padded across a shallow stream into a dark cave. She lay down on the cold floor. animus was so far from her home and so tired. But she had to go. Turning round she saw that the cave had been once a home to a W.O.I. Animus padded inside and through the left tunnel. She looked up to she the ice melting of the roof of her cave. Animus looked to the end of the cave, something was shining and the very back. She cocked her head and padded to the back. A large pile of metal was waiting for her, looking at it more closely she saw that it was not metal but armor! was this it had she found her armor? Animus walked over to it, the platinum shimmered though there was no light. There was a set of Emeralds and Sapphires that covered the edges of the beautiful platinum. She took the head piece and placed it on her head.
The rest of the armor was easy to put on, she tightened the straps and stood proud. Animus grinned, she padded out the cave into the light. Her armor shimmered. It didn't not take as long as she imagined. The Kronador was still there, he caught the shine of her armor and roared. Animus ran up the bank and sunk her teeth into the Kronador's front leg. The armor made her lose her fear, she felt safe, for the first time she felt protected. Running at the Kronador she took its leg in her jaws and pulled it to the floor. The Kronador cried out and swung his head, it hit Animus who staggered, but the helmet prevented any head damage! She pulled up and bit into his neck, he gasped as she broke through his wind pipe. He struggled but the Kronador couldn't breath. Holding on to its neck Animus looked into its eyes and watched it heart stop. Animus dropped the Kronador and spat out the blood. It was time to get back to camp. She sprinted through the destroyed forest. The red mountains came into view. She ran up to the camp. The sun had started to set, she grinned round at the astonished warriors. Animus! Kafka and Aderyn ran up to her and licked her nose and muzzle You got your armor! Animus nodded. Did you find your father? Animus laughed No, not yet but I will found out what happened to him ! but I was only gone for a day! The three laughed , Kafka and Adreyn padded of. I promise dad, I will find you!.



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Dawn 'til Dusk.
In all her glory.
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Kronadors, large , dragon like creatures who insist on fighting the Warriors.
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I would say yes so that TWG90 can see what our W.O.I's look like.
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Mainly story but 50/50 with art.

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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby shibuki » Sat May 26, 2012 7:28 am

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戦士-壊れた
Senshireta
Ƨɛиƨнιяɛтα
{sen}-{shee}-{reeta}
The name Senshireta is a mix between the two Japanese words, Senshi {Warrior} and Kowareta {Broken}
Her full name translates to Broken Warrior {Senshireta}

Nicknames

Senshi
Sen

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She is usually happy, cheerful, and sweet and well tempered. She has a heavy lisp and is sensitive about it, also she is slightly socially awkward and does not really know what's popular. She prefers work over play, but does enjoy laughing with her friends. She has a fierce rivalry with sunny.corgi's Mink and doesn't even try to hide it.

[b]O U T E R . F e a t u r e s[/b]

• Color blind in one eye due to a kronador attack
• Lisp
• Slightly masculine
• Long tail
• Normal ears
• Yellow + Blue eyes
• Dog-like markings

+ P o s i t i v e +

Cheerful

Senshi is usually sweet, and kind warrior to hand around with. She is usually happy, however not always. But mostly she sees the glass half full in life. However, she is also very serious and prefers work over play

Loyal

Sen will stick with her friends and family all her life, and will never leave their side. However, she understands personal space and doesn't invade your... "bubble" so-to-speak. There are few things she holds a grudge over.

Smart

Senshi is very intelligent, and has knowledge on many subjects, but is not a genius in any terms. She has slightly above average intelligence, but just slightly. She does have a lot of common sense however.

Serious

Senshi does not tolerate much fooling around, and would prefer to do her work than play. However, she is open to some fun once in a while with her friends

Independant

Even though she is loyal, she also prefers to do things on her own. She would much rather work single than have a partner.

- N e g a t i v e -

Lonely

She has few friends, however she does not show this emotion often and usually forgets it's there.

Sensitive

Many often mistake her for a male, in which she dislikes. She is very sensitive about that matter, and does as much as she can to look feminine. She is also VERY sensitive about her lisp and holds a grudge on people who make fun of her for it.

Stubborn

Unfortunatly, she always acts like she has to win, even when she loses. She is too stubborn to accept the fact that she can lose, and is constantly showing this with her rival Mink {Owned by sunny.corgi}

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♥Likes+Dislikes♥

Likes

• Roses
• Work
• Friends
• Training
• Storytelling

Dislikes

• Being called a boy
• Being masculine
• Gossip
• Loud noises
• Her lisp

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♥Relationships♥

I have permission from these users to use these WOI

Mink (sunny.corgi) Rival
Celandia (【 ➹ SWALLOW ➹ 】) Friend
Lyra (Wolves Run Free) Friend/Half Rival

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Senshi - 11 months old

"No, I'd rather train"
"But Sen, we haven't played in FOREVER!"
"Thelandia, pleathe. If kronadorth attack, where will you be? Playing and goofing off, while I fierthly fight off the beathtths."
Celandia giggled for a moment.
"What?"
"Beathtth." She laughed.
"THUT UP, YOU KNOW i HAVE A LITHP."
I gave her a playful bite on the ear and went back to training. She rolled her eyes and walked away. After a moment she turned to me and said, "You look extra boyish today"
My eyes flashed open and I gave a sharp growl. I whisked around, my yellow and blue eyes blazing with anger. I leapt at her, and we wrestled for quite a bit.
"Idiot"
"Thut up"

Senshi - 11 Months old

“Thhhhhhhhhhhhhh”
“Theriouthly, thut up” I growled.
“Oh look, I’m Thenthi and I can’t pronounthe my etheth!” Mink taunted, dancing around me.
“THUT UP” I yelled, a spray of spit coming of my teeth. “I KNOW I HAVE A LITHP, THTOP MAKING FUN OF IT!” Mink recoiled in horror and pulled back. I laughed to myself and felt quite proud. Then, I found a shadow towering over me. I turned to face Rayos, who glared at me from above. “Th-thorry” I whimpered.
“Don’t do it again” Rayos grumbled. He turned and padded away, and blushed profusely. Mink snickered and I growled back.
“Thut up” I muttered. Mink stuck her tongue out at me and grinned.
“Stop it.” Celandia said, suddenly popping out of nowhere. She walked up to beside me and glared at Mink. Mink made a face and strutted away.
“Thankth.” I grinned.
“No prob Sen, you would have done the same for me. Now, do it for me.”
“Uhh… Wh-what ith it?” I sheepishly asked, however fully knowing what it was.
“You know fully well what it is Sen” She giggled.
“Noooo”
“Pleeaaaaaaase, Sen?” She pleaded.
“Fine” I muttered. “The thells thea thells by the thea thore.”
Celandia squealed in delight and licked my ear. I grumbled and started away.
“Hey Sen!” A voice came from behind me.
“Hello Lyra.” I said without even looking behind me. Lyra bounded up beside me. I gave her an annoyed look and she gave me a worried one.
“What’s wrong Sen?” She asked, perplexed.
“Mink won’t thut up about my lithp.” I muttered.
“Well I can help you with that you silly Thenthi!” She laughed.
“Thtop callin me Thenthi, you don’t have a lithp.” I grumbled.
“…Thorry” Lyra bluntly giggled. I rolled my eyes and started away. "NONONONONONO!" She yelped. "I can help, seriously." I rolled my eyes at her. "Now, where'd Mink go. I can rough 'er up" Lyra smirked, flicking her tail vengefully. I shook my head and grumbled to myself. "Now repeat after me" Lyra said, quite condescendingly. "Ssssssssssss"
"Thhhhhhhhhh"
"No. SSSSSSSSS"
"thhhhhhhh"
"Ergh, this may take a while"

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"SSSSSSSSSS!" Lyra exasperatingly said.
"Thhhhhhhshhhhhhh" I spluttered. "SHHHHHHHH"
"Yess!" Lyra cheered, falling to the ground. "I thought you were hopeless... you are pretty hopeless... BUT YOU DID IT ANYWAYS!"
I frowned, but consumingly turned to a smile. "She shellsh she shellsh by the shea shore." I proudly mused. Spit flew from my mouth and splattered Lyra's face.
She wiped her eyes with her paws. "Just go back to what you had. It's less... wet"
I sheepishly grinned. "Thorry" I nervously laughed.

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Mink looked at my eye. A clear film covered it, and it was almost as if you couldn't look away. "What happened to you eye, idiot?"
"Nothing you need to know about, kith up." I retorted, flicking my tail in anger. It wasn't too weird. I was just colorblind in that eye.
"No, seriously Senshi." Mink asked. "What happened."
I twitched my tail. She never called me Senshi, just an insult. "Fine" I gave in. "Now let me start...

...

The wind whistled through the leaves, the sound ringing in my ears. I also heard something else. The sound that a Chimera usually makes as it slinks through the grass. I gasped and crouched down, my ears flattening back, terrified. The chimera slinked out of the brush and looked around.
He snickered and started towards me. I braced myself for the attack but he just went right past me. The chimera tagged a smaller female one hiding in the bushes and laughed. I figured that he had not seen me, they were just playing. I was so small compared to them; I hadn’t realized ‘till then that we were all the same age. The female giggled and made sounds that sounded slightly like counting. The male started to run away, but his leg came down on my head, a claw digging into my eye.

The pain seared across my face, ripping my mind and wrapping pain's cold hands across my eye. A piercing scream escaped my mouth, ringing in my ears and across the grass.The chimera looked down at me, I knew I was in BIG trouble. He gave a menacingly evil smirk and reached his claws down the the dirt. He clawed up the dirt and flung the dust onto my face and eye. The grit stung in my wound and I let out a little cry of pain.. I never knew that anyone could be so cruel. The chimera leapt away, going to finish his game. I lay on the grass, staining the blue grass a dirty red. I weakly stood up, but fell to the ground as soon as I did. My face burned with pain, I could barely see out of the eye that was stomped on, and blood dripped down my muzzle. I lay there, not ever wanting to move. A blurry figure walked before me and I heard muffled talking. I shut my eyes, knowing that I was safe.

...

"Tho yeah, thatths how that happened." I finished.
"Wow.. So you can't see colour? HAHAHAHA YOU CAN'T SEE MY WONDERFUL DESIGN"
"Mink, you idiot you're black and white anywayth."

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Senshi - 2 months old

I sat, waiting impatiently as my dad paced back and forth. He kept glancing at the cave entrance and whining. I just rolled my eyes and rolled over onto my back. I pawed at a butterfly that flittered by. I rolled back over and stalked it after it landed on the blue grass. I leapt onto it and closed my mouth around it. Bleh. I spit it out. It fluttered it's slobbery wings, shaking drops everywhere. I laughed and turned my head away to avoid getting it in my eyes. When it was... mostly dry, it darted away. I attempted to chase it, but Dad gave me 'the look' and I stopped. My uncle, who always was amazing at medical things, padded our of the caves and smiled. "She will live" He nodded. My fathers face lit up like the butterfly.
"Really?" He gasped, darting into the cave. I got up and followed. I looked around the cavernous tunnels until I heard the soft voice of my mother. I padded into the 'room' and walked over to my mother, who was lying on a bed of foliage with my father sitting next to her. She kindly looked at me. I smiled back and licked my face.
"You're going to live!" I yipped ecstatically. She nodded her head with grace. My dad smiled and nuzzled her affectionately. She licked him back. I pushed under my mom's paws. We played for a bit until my father nosed me out of the exit and told me to run home. I nodded and did just that. I had no siblings. Just my father and mother. Later that night, when all the warriors would be asleep, I waited for my father. He hadn't come home yet. It was getting way too late. I walked back to the cave where they were. All I heard was crying. I burst into the room, worried at what I might see. My mother wasn't moving and my father was laying next to her, tears streaming down his face. He looked up at me and shook his head.
"She's... Gone" He sniffed.
"What? No!" I yelped. I ran over to her and grabbed at her ear, pulling at it. "NO, NO, NO!" I cried. "Wake up! Wake... Up..." The pain ripped at my heart. Tears flowed down my face, splashing onto the ground. "Momma. Momma, no." I whimpered, burying my face in her fur. The stupid disease had taken her from me. I lay there, with my parents, never wanting to leave her. But I knew I would have to sometime.

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Senshi - 5 months

I caught her eyes and gave her a glare

The black pup gave me a skirk and laughed. "HA! I beat you, silly baby pup."
I growled, and said "It'th not my fault, you cheated!"
"I DIDN'T CHEAT"
"YETH YOU DID"
"NO YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"YOU CHEATED"
"GIRLS" A warrior yelled "BE QUIET"
We quietly growled at each other and went back to wrestling. "Give up Mink" I growled
"Never" She hissed. "BACK FLIP" She yelled and used her head to flip my over her back. I landed on my back with a thud.
"Owww" I whined, and stood up to shake the dirt out of my fur. Then I tackled her, and pinned her on her back. She kicked me with her back legs and we went tumbling down the grassy hill. We both landed apart from each other, Mink doing a face plant into the dirt and me on my back with my hind legs in the air. We both gave a moan and stood up. I shook the dirt from my fur, and Mink used her paw to rub the earth from her face. I gave a side look to her, then leapt around and tackled her, pinning her to the ground. "I win thith time" I giggled, stepping off her.
"But... uh... uhhhhh... YOU CHEATED!"

Her death story. SHE DOES NOT DIE FOR A LONG TIME, SHE IS NOT GOING TO DIE WHILE I OWN HER, IT IS JUST AN INTERESTING STORY. WARNING: VERY VERY BLOODY

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A Poem:

Theriously?
Thtop it!
Thuth, I don’t have a lithp!
I can pronounthe
My etheth jutht fine
You’re being thilly
And ridiculouth
Thee?
The thellth thea thhellth by the thea thore
Okay…
Maybe I have
A thlight lithp
But don’t bring it up
Itth not that notithable
Ith it?

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Senshi wrote:Theriouthly, thut up.


Senshi wrote:I know what it'th like to lothe a loved one. I don't want anyone to mith me longer than they need to.


Senshi wrote:I see black and white in this world of
colour.


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Who I'd be
Shrek the musical

On my Own
Hedley

Boy like that
West Side Story

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♥Art♥

Me
Me
Me+TWG90 (armour concept)

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LA by twg90

Materials

Base -- Titanium
Jewels -- Sapphire
Straps -- Leather
Fur -- ... Fur

Appearance

• Greek based armour
• Fur running down the back
• Trible-esque markings on back leg protecters
• Jewels on the straps

Practicality

It is made of titanium because:
Titanium has the highest strength to weight ratio of any metal and melts at 1649 degrees Celsius (Aluminium melts at 933 degrees Celsius). It is 60% heavier than Aluminium, but over twice as strong. It is highly corrosion resistant.
The leather is used because it is bendable and light.
The armour is layered in plates for practicality.

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What is the name of the woi's enemy? Chimeraa AKA Kronador
Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines? Yes, so you can have an official "ref" sheet for the WOI. And, said by TWG90:
TheWolfsgirl90 wrote:the references are important to me I like to know what the details and Markings on them are + it´s the best reference for future armors^^

what is this contest judged by? Art+Story

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;;Sato The Warrior of Isket;;

Postby Ember Sky » Sat May 26, 2012 8:11 am

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;;Name;;

Sato

;;Gender;;

Male | Brute

;;Personality;;

Sato isn't what he was made out to be. He is actually very sweet and thoughtful, and would never judge a creature until he has met if face to face. He is very shy, and tends to be a large dreamer. He believes there is always hope for something, and give it all of your effort before you simply thrust it into the dirt. Even though others may hurt him, he'd never hate anyone, no matter how much they pester, smack, or kill, he will always leave his heart open, and though he's had a rough past, he hopes that everything could be turned around one day, just a friend to help him.
This little dreamer has hidden strength, and he keeps it inside, but just because he is shy, and at most kind does not mean he is a pushover. He stands up for others and what's right. He would never out of anger, or pure amusement to go and kill something, and he hopes he'd never have to use his strength to ever harm another creature. He digs deep, he never just takes first answer, he tends to get his own proof before snatching the first reply he gets.
Sato is very independent, and cares for himself if he has to, though he'd prefer to be alone, or do something on his own, he doesn't mind having another help him, or join his company. Sato is very loyal, and would never out willingly ditch another creature, he would stay by anyone's side until every last bone in his body is shattered. He isn't shy when he's excited, or you have earned it outmost trust. Though he may scamper away from you, if someone could just understand this gentle brute, he could maybe tell himself he can trust again, love again.


;;Story;;



This story has Eowyn in it. (c) KaiKenNatsuki. I did get permission from her.


"Isn't it beautiful, Sato?"


I closed my eyes, relaxing to the sound of Eowyn's voice. The crisp night air combed threw my fur, chills easing up my spine. I snuggled closer to her, her warmth pressing against my skin. I nodding my head softly, unable to release the words clogged inside my mouth. I never wanted this night to end, It was so peaceful, something I had longed for, for a long time. With the never-ending attacks repeating by the Kronadors, it was the most peace I had endured for a long time. I softly opened my eyes, engulfing air that filtered threw my nose, I couldn't smell anything else but Eowyn's warmth.

"Sato! "
"Eowyn!"


"Sato, did you hear that?"
I blinked open my eyes, thrusting my eyes onto Eowyn. The Brown she-wolf nudged my head uneasily, urging me onto my feet, "Sato, Someones calling for us." she insisted, her eyes frantically motioning towards home. I sluggishly ascended onto my paws, yawning gently, I wasn't in the mood to go scuttling around Isket, not to leave this behind.
I ambled beside Eowyn, gradually, smoke creeped inside my nostrils, smog scoured my eyes, "Eowyn, I can't take this smoke anymore." I scoffed, air wheezing from my lungs. I could hear Eowyn's deep breaths, the air thudding inside of her chest, "Sato, Something wrong." she sputtered, nevously looking into my eyes. Hot embers blew threw the air, and just above the horizon fire crawled threw the valley, it's lingering blue blades now scorched to a crusted black. I felt my breath quicken as screams flooded my ears, my heart pounding raucously. I paused, gazing with alamed eyes at her, my blood suddenly rushing to my head.

Kronadors, they were attacking!

I couldn't budge! I was desperate to take a step, but it ended as my backing up.
Eowyn wasn't going to let that pass.
Eowyn grabbed my neck fur, rasping my body into a sprint. I urgently tried to match my pace with hers, but Eowyn was hastily moving faster than me, "Eowyn... Slow down!" I hissed, struggling wildly, my paws swinging madly threw the air. She didn't respond, no, she didn't even look back. I sighed, resuming my frantic hassle to keep up.

"Sato, I got to go!" she yelled back, letting go of my neck. I yelped, my face smothering into the dirt, my teeth sinking into the ground. I assumed it as to go check on her family, so I scurried off towards my family.

"Pappi!" I called, pushing myself further. My lungs burned with a searing pain, the pain splinting as I edged to run farther. I desperately looked around for them, my eyes moist with warm tears, "Pappi!" I screamed again, my throat throbbing after, like sharp splinters scatheing my skin. I couldn't believe I hadn't have seen them yet, no, They can't be dead! Now I ran harder, sprinting past agile warriors rushing towards the rival Kronadors that were raging towards us.
I closed my eyes, flinging myself past the colliding teeth. My paws slapped on the ground as I ran, slithering threw the battle as to avoid it. Surprisingly I hadn't hit anything yet, or had I spoke to soon?
THWACK!
I smacked my head against something firmly in my path. I whimpered softly, rubbing my head on top of my shattered skull. What possibley could I have run into that hard?

I forced my eyes open impulsfully, gazing up at what was towering over me. Instantly, I felt my paws numb. A Kronador smirked viciously down at me, it's tail curling around pleasantly, "Where are you going, Warrior?" it hissed, smashing a hand, nearly on me, "I-I, Um, was just leaving.." I whispered, offering the beast a phony smile. I saw it's face blend with hatred and annoyance now. I blinked oddly, feeling a large lump swell in my throat, clearing my smile quickly, I knew it's patience was growing thin. It reached a hand down, hoisting me up from the ground, "Why do that?" it cackled, flickering a tongue out patienly. I narrowed my eyes, I like to speak threw more actions, than words,
SNAP!
I cletched my jaws onto the Chimera's finger forcefully, tearing threw it's leathery flesh, reaching blood. Scarlet red liquid pouring from the gash, it's warm, rich flavor spreading effortlessly as it rolled onto my taste-buds. The beast scream aloud, flinging my body towards the ground. It didn't feel good with your rump numb with pain, but I wasn't going to let that Kronador get a hold on me again, I knew I might not make it next time.

I scampered away hurriedly, my paws smacking against the ground as I continued ahead. I stopped, an wrecking feeling nipping at my stomach. Everything around me seemed to grow silent, like a woolen blanket wrapping around to give warmth. It wasn't comfort I felt.

A few lengths away a body laid sprawled on the grass, it's fur breaking from the skin, blowing like embers threw the wind. Wounds splotched across it's body, rivers off blood pouring onto the ocean-blue grass. It was my father. My legs wobbled, my heart sinking to the bottom of my chest, he was dead. His voice echoed inside my ears, his laughter stabbing my heart even harder. Warm tears started to build in my eyes, trickling down my cheeks like pouring rain. I trampled towards his limp body, grass up-rooting into the air. My soft weeping was the only thing keeping the silence from returning. I placed a paw gently on his head, tears dropping onto his dark fur. I closed my eyes, resting my head on his cold shoulders,
"Sato."
I raised my head, it was the sound of my fathers raspy voice. I saw his eyes flicker open, coming to a rest upon me, "Pappa?" I asked, my heart starting to thump inside my chest. He smiled weakly, bringing a scrawny paw to my cheek, "Sato, Live on for Isket, Son, I love you." he croaked, giving my one last glance, before settling again. I grew scared, he was leaving me!
"Pappi! Pappa!" I screamed, grasping onto him. I hugged him closer, tears now springing from my eyes. I wouldn't let him go, not ever again. I would hold him forever.

"Sato!"

I spun my head around, only to seeing Eowyn rushing towards me. My eyes widened in surprise, making my paws slowly ease their grip on my father's body, Eowyn.... She approached me, dipping her head carefully, watching my eyes plead for help. I watched as her eyes grew large, an instant wave of shock hitting her, "Oh No, Sato.."
I knew I didn't need to speak a word to her. She peered around me, seeing my father's lifeless body under me. She sat next to me, looking sorrowfully down at his body, "I'm so sorry." she whispered, wrapping her tail around me. I felt my cheeks start to burn, felting her warmth coil around me. I looked over at her, her eyes meeting mine, I didn't know what to tell her.
I nodded my head, acknowledging I heard her, but it didn't help. I looked around, we were no where near camp anymore, we were pretty far.
Me and her, alone.

I blinked the tears from my eyes, looking over at Eowyn. I felt my mind start to swirl with thoughts, what could I say to her? I need to be strong, leave the past behind, and create your path towards the future. I thought, watching her quietly, before speaking, "Eowyn, can I asked you something?" I asked, removing my paw from my father's head, but onto Eowyn's paw. She jumped, looking down at my paw placed on hers, "Oh, Sato. It's you." she whispered, blowing out a sigh of relief, "Yeah." she answered, looking quite puzzled at me.

"I wanted to tell you..."

"Wait! Did you hear that?"
I disappointingly looked towards where she was motioning to. I tilted my head, making out a sudden hiss, It couldn't be a snake. No, Oh, No. "Eowyn.." I whispered, feeling a light disturbance, "I don't think we are alone." I whimpered, folding my ears closely to the back of my skull.
I eased closer, leaving Eowyn shivering with fear, "Don't scare me Sato." she demanded, her lips quavering in the cold. I glared back at her, flicking my tail in annoyance, "I'm not!" I insisted, narrowing my eyes sharply, careful not too sound to ignorant.
An emerald green glow radiated from the brush, the light green glimmering softly. I tilted my head curiously, instantly interested in it's appearance. I raised a paw, whacking the green light with a harsh smack, a whopping thud echoing threw the trees. A gargling snarl bellowed from the greensward. My heart paced, a pounding sending me scrambling away from the angered growls. A massive hand reached out for my petrified body, blowing my sharply on the muzzle. I shrieked with fear, my legs giving out their strength, sending me plummeting into the grass. Bright blood leaked from my skin, staining the surrounding grass red. I ambled onto my paws, steering myself away from the loud bellowing screams of the beast. Eowyn yowled in sudden fear, desperately flinging herself from the beast's grasp. It wrung it's hand around my twisting body, plucking me from the ground, I could feel the creature's pleasure from my screams of pain.
Kronador.

I raised my thick lip, showing my white canines, the fur draped across my neck was now bristling with anger, "Let, Me go!" I raged, swinging madly at it's deep emerald eyes. It smirked viciously, thrashing my frail body threw the air, "And Why do that?" It replied, it's vigorous voice chuckled, "I sense your a very powerful warrior, and I am the one who can stop you." the Chimera snapped, lashing me forwards to eye level. It's hot breath blew into my eyes, like steam from a scolding spring, "Time for you to end." it murmured, raising me higher into the air. I closed my eyes, waiting for what was to come and end me. The noise around me became silent, the warm breath's now pausing. What?

The clutch of the Kroandor ceased, letting the fur it held go, my body jerking from it's height towards the ground below. I landed harshly on my rump, the aftershock staggering up my spine. I whined softly, yowling in pain. I held my eyes closed, I didn't want to see anymore. I didn't want to see my life held in the hands of a beast.
"Stop, now!"

A spine-splitting scream sliced threw the air, shattering the coaxing silence. I forced open my eyes, gazing up at a beautiful, white creature, It's horn was draped with thick, velvet blood. I backed away in horror, my voice now sharpening into a growl, this creature I sensed had just slayed the Kronador, and I had no chance to escape it if it was to attack me. No! Eowyn walked beside this creature, wagging her tail thoughtfully, "Sato!" she barked, rushing towards me. She licked my forehead, grabbing my closer, "I didn't know these even existed!" she whispered into my ear. I peered past Eowyn at the creature, it's slim figure reflecting much light. It was shaped as a horse, long slender legs towering from the ground, it was pure white, though it's face remained expressionless.
Unicorns, They didn't exist!

The animal reached down it's frail neck, it's breath slipping down my neck, Sato, Your bravery is strong. You must live on, and do what is needed to protect this land, Isket. the creature lectured. It's voice was like a supple, silvery wind, blowing across the grasses of Isket. It was like a voice in my head, streaming into my ears like a song, "Yes." I replied, nodding my head respectfully. The Unicorn looked down at me, satisfaction dripping from it's face, I trust you, Young warrior. she answered pleasantly, before turning away from where I stood, bleeding. I looked down at my paws, a moon-shaped stone glittered beneath my paws, my name carved on it's surface, 'Sato'. It's glow crawled from it's surface, moving up my legs. I blinked, feeling my blood rush, but I relaxed, letting the light devour me whole. Eowyn's grip released from me, she moved away, her eyes glimmering with the moon-lit light, "Sato.." she whispered in awe. The luminous light ignited, jumping from my body into the oen air, before splitting into sparks. The pain that I once had felt, had disappeared. The gashes than run threw my neck in long strokes, were now just a mere scab.
I grabbed my attention up from my paws, gazing at where the Unicorn had left, a thick fog danced in it's footsteps, "Thank you." I whispered, collapsing to the ground. "Sato!" Eowyn cried, crawling next to me. I looked at her threw misty eyes, hugging her gently, "I'm alright, and so are you." I whispered heavily, my breath staggering in my lungs.

"Eowyn."
"Yes?"
"Let's go home."




"For Isket, we shall live on to keep peace in balance."




;;Art;;

Art By. Me

Digital:

By. Me. Sato

By. Me Head Ref.

Traditional Art:

-Armor Concept


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Uncolored Picture: Silver Wind

Art By others.
By, Wolf Blood Song<33 ;-; TY


;;What is the name of the WoI's enemy?;;

Kronador, a massive reptile-like foe, which is also known as a Chimera.

;;Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines?;;

Yes, so you can have an offical ref for your W.O.I. to be added to the list.

;;What is this contest judged by?;;

50% Art + 50% Story.
Neara wrote:^^ course i had to do a dog inspired woi :} i hope ya'll like him/her if you dont i can revoke this design :} this and all contests are judged mainly on story and art 50/50 but other sections are taken into consideration as well nothing is left out.



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Re: New WoI Teenie {Open}

Postby wajas » Sat May 26, 2012 9:28 am

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Name:
Walanian


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Gender:
female


Personality:
Sweet, shy, adventurous, and daring, she is a girl worth to see. she is sweet to the elder wolves, as well as the small pups, which like to hang around. She tends to tell stories, tales, and some exerpts from the history of the pack, displaying a profound intrest in them. She will usually be remarked as a sweet girl, being kind to the other wolves. She does have an adventurous side, though, as she will wander on her own to discover new things. She will usually hang around the shadows, instead of with the others, prefering her privacy. She is an independant worker, being on hr own makes her mind clear. She is a very intelligent W.O.I. that will solve problems that are at hand, and use it to the best of her ability. She likes to be a leader, having it like a second nature. But, will also be a follower, listening and obeying without a word of protest. When things would get rough or out of hand, she would make small protests, but they would grow bigger. She fights for what she believes is right

Story: wip
Art: wip
What is the name of the woi's enemy? Kronador
Is it important to color your WoI in the official ref lines? yes, so you have an official reference to use for future events
what is this contest judged by? half art and half story.
Please excuse this MAJOR wip, I will add onto it by tonight.
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