[Cloverstream]

Owner: Blueruby
Equid Name: rara forma (rara for short. It means rare beauty)
Equid Age: 3
Story:
Once there was a mare who insisted she was the rarest and most beautiful in all of the land. Others foolishly agreed. saying her markings meant she was the best. One mare did not agree with all this. Back then her name was Simplus. She saw the mares beauty but decided she lacked heart since she had never shown a act of kindness to any of the other equids.

One day a jealous mare insisted they have a competition to see who was truly the Rarest and most beautiful.Dova the claimed most beautiful mare agrees to this. Simplus decided to join. She whent over to the valley covering her self in mud turning her self ugly. When she entered others laughed saying she was the ugliest there and turned around. Even though she was kind to the fillys and colts and gave equids apples they ignored her.

She decided to wash off the mud and re- enter. This time she was incredibly rude to the other horses but they looked at her and said of corse she's the best! What a rare coat! They whould mutter. Of corse simplex won. But she snorted. And said "you foolish equids! When I was a kind ugly equid you dident look twice at me. But when I was beautful and horrible to you, you worshiped me! "
The equids bowed there heads in shame saying that was silly of them and she wins for having inner and outer beauty to Dovas dismay. From that day on she was Rara forma. Meaning rare beauty. For her rare beauty on the inside and out.
Moral: inner beauty rules over outer.
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(Art if it dosent count to the entry just for fun! It was time well spent since i want this so much! not to beg though)

[Pasa Fino]

When does this contest end? cuz I soooooooo wanna enter!

[blackhoeses]

When does this contest end? cuz I soooooooo wanna enter!

general, and I'm still deciding on when to end it

Birch answered this question on the first page, and has not made a post saying anything else yet.

[Pasa Fino]

Thx:) I am still writing the story and don't wanna be half done and the contest end:)

[Cloverstream]

Sorry if this is spamming, but is art allowed?

[glorified oblivion]

Owner: LinGreed
Equid Name: Amarath
Equid Age: 4
Story: Amarath woke up to sunlight filtering in through the branches of the little copse of trees she called her home. She pricked her ears as she heard thuds a few yards away, somewhere outside the copse. Her brow furrowed as she trotted towards the sound, poking her head through some bushes to see a young Equid standing stock-still. "Don't move." the young Equid whispered to Amarath. The black and white pinto Equid froze, thinking there was a predator somewhere. "Why?" Amarath asked cautiously, quietly. "There is a wild butterfly here. If you're not careful, it will eat you." The young Equid said, his voice shaky. "Really? A butterfly?" Amarath asked, relaxing as she saw the tiny blue-and-black insect. She walked up to the little butterfly, putting her muzzle quite close to it. Startled, the butterfly flew upwards and flew towards the young Equid, who abruptly shrieked and ran away. Amarath swiveled her ears as she heard fits of laughter in a nearby huddle of bushes and as she walked towards the bushes, her eyes ablaze, the laughter abruptly stopped and the whole area fell silent, save for Amarath's snorts of rage. "Uh-oh." a small voice whispered from the bushes. "Just slowly back away." a second voice said, oddly high-pitched and frightened. "What do you think you're doing?" Amarath demanded, sticking her head inside the bush, much to the two young Equids' fright. "W-w-we were just playing around!" the first stammered. "Y-y-yeah just playing around!" the second said, her voice reaching an even higher pitch. "Playing around is not something that is supposed to disturb my sleep!" Amarath snorted, putting her face closer to the Equids', who squeaked. "Sorry!" the first Equid said, suddenly jumping up and spinning around, he ran away at top-speed, shrieking. "RUN AWAY! THE EQUID THAT LIVES THERE IS A TOTAL NUTCASE!" Amarath watched after him, dismay clouding her face. She abruptly was pulled awake, exclaiming, "That was a weird dream!" Suddenly, she heard thuds from outside her copse of trees and she flattened her ears, groaning, "Not this again."


I don't know if it was very good, but at least I tried, eh?

[~*Waffletastic!*~]

Sorry guys ^^'
Im withdrawing--

Good luck everyone!!!

[NightxPine]

Owner: NightxPine
Equid Name: Ganvri
Equid Age: 4
Story: Ganvri was always proud to be different from the other equids with their brindled coats and she would prance around with her head high. The other females, however, were jealous and despised Ganvri for her rare beauty. "Unnatural", they would call her. Ganvri did her best not to be affected by the other mares, but whenever they weren't watching, she would let out a tear or two. Her mother knew what was happening, but instead of standing up for her daughter, she would make Ganvri stop showing off and told her to 'stop embarrasing herself". And Ganvri hated her mother for it.

One clear day, Ganvri was grazing near a stream. She looked up and, as always, gloried at her reflection. "Why should I be ashamed of my coat? They're wrong. They all are." she snorted. With that she determinedly galloped off to the giant oak tree where the jealous mares stood gossiping about others with a few of the proud males. Tossing her head, she ignored their jibes and slowed to a trot up to the mare, Ruby, who holds the most jealousy towards Ganvri. "You enjoy ruining the lives of everyone who's better than you, don't you" Ganvri snorted. "Maybe, but I'm not the only one who thinks your life should be ruined." Ruby said back, "You run around stuck up in your own little world, thinking that your better than everyone else because of your markings". "No, Ruby. Your wrong." Ruby stamped her hoof and turned to see who the equid that spoke was. It was one of the males, Zanskar.

A year had passed since Ganvri had confronted Ruby and her gang and she and Zanskar had become best friends. All of the other equids were still jealous of her and a few called her rude names, but at least she had someone who encouraged and supported her, unlike her mother.

[Birchwood Hollow]

Alright, I've decided to end this tomorrow at 9ish PM USA central time. (May 6th) I'll post heads up for when you have an hour left.

[Pasa Fino]

PLEASE POSTPONE THE END UNTILL ATLEAST 2 DAYS SO I CAN FINNISH MY STORY!!! I want her soooooopoooooooo bad! I have even done art of her!
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