View topic - Viscet #550 MYO Raffle - ENDS 3/6

My gallery · by **canis-corax** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:40 pm

I'd like to enter!
1 extra for marking the thread
1 for the Fan Club v.1
1 for helping funderful;; with some slight coding for her adoption forms. ;v;

My gallery · by **LOCW_Bluestarwarrior** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:44 pm

I want to enter!
+1 regular ticket
+1 for lines Here! (hope this counts, not sure if it does!)
+1 for marking (obvious since I've posted on the thread. XD)
+1 for losing 2 Viscets (Halloween gas mask and the German shepherd 406 among many others)
+1 for posting on fan club (think that's pretty obvious, you've talked to me on there, XD)

I think that's it.

My gallery · by **sweet tooth** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:59 pm

aye i own a custom tho
+1 ticket :^)

My gallery · by ***Shiveren*** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 2:08 pm

may I enter? I think you know that I marked the main thread and did the fan club posts, as well as the adoption extra tickets. I will get links if required though

My gallery · by **oakfire** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 2:10 pm

I'd like to enter!

I have the main thread bookmarked, if that counts
I have posted on the fanclub
Two adoptions I entered and lost - 1 2
I have helped someone with coding

My gallery · by **Fyrvi** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 3:49 pm

May I enter? I am currently a non-owner and I have the main thread bookmarked. c:

My gallery · by **Riverwolf10** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 4:03 pm

May I be entered?

Marked the home page here

First post on FC

Loss 1 and 2

My gallery · by **quitted;** » Mon Feb 29, 2016 5:06 pm

I'd like to enter, please?

I have posted on the FC v1. (So many times, but here's one. Click).
I have entered for at least two adoptions in the past and lost (several, but here's two. Click and Click).
I have helped in the community (given free critique on forms, snippet of advice below).

thefartheststar wrote:Well, I'm going to be honest and a little critical... I think you have a decent plot started here. Really. Depending on how long you're planning on making it, I have some minor 'editorial' tips; (without changing your writing dramatically). Number One; punctuation and slight re-wording. There were some minor changes that I would make, because the way some things are written it's difficult to understand what you're getting at. That's as simple as changing a comma to a semi-colon, or switching out a few small words. Those small words may seem insignificant, but they make a difference. Finally, there were just a couple typos I noticed. Other than that, one tip for characters: don't reveal too much about them too quickly, y'know? Even in a small piece of work, give them some development your reader can recognize and appreciate. Once again, I think you have something good going here! I'm sorry if this is a little overwhelming... I'm really not that much of a grammer geek, trust me.