okay wow you guys made it so hard for me to choose a winner. sadly there can only be one. i spent a lot of time looking over all of the forms over and over again and wow you all had wonderful ideas that were unique and great personalities for him! everyone had such lovely forms i just can't with it <33
Roger The Alien
your form was very unique which i really liked. i liked how most of the art you did was all by yourself which made me happy that someone would actually be able to draw him. the only thing that was really throwing me off was the coding, and the lines. some of your lines were rather long and then short and not centered. but that was a tiny flaw. other than that your form was very nicely made!
lefoxicornius
i loved your wix form so much wow! it was very nicely coded and neat which really made a good impression on me. i really liked the connections you put in for the family ties. i also enjoyed the fact that there was some french in there! i take french and that was pretty cool to see that in your form <3
viixen
--wow. your form was really well put together. i liked how the case of PTSD tied in with the plane crash; which was an awesome original idea may i say; but maybe provide more information about how his PTSD affects his life and his family? that would have been another interesting detail to add.
Shatterhowl
i liked how you had two different jobs for your character. but, since he did have two jobs, maybe go more in depth about them? like possibly talk about what he does, if he is well known ect. nwn i loved all of the art you had put together! but maybe keep it more organized? in my eyes it seemed a bit over the place. i enjoyed the relationships you had made with the other plumerians as well!
aviate
your form was very well coded, neat, and well put together. i loved the amount of art you had and it seemed to portray his personality, which i am an art person so that is the kind of art i enjoy seeing. his family ties seemed like a reality along with his friends. his hobbies were very unique. i loved how you explained what the hobbies were and how he puts them in his life!
Lord Raegami
your form had a whole heck of a lot of writing wow aha. i really loved the idea of his exotic peacock friend! that was an interesting story you made. your form was written very nicely and had a WHOLE bunch of personality in it. the only few things i didn't enjoy was how he was slightly "abusive" to his kids. i understand that it is work, and it ties in with his work though. sometimes i'm confused about shyams purpose in his life, sometimes thinking that he isn't just a pet but another character that can communicate with him.
now, the part you have all been waiting for. the winner! i was really suck on two forms, going back and forth between them. i finally chose one and i am happy with it. a very large congratulations to aviate, with lord raegami following closely behind! you guys made it so hard and if you would like ANY tips and pointers, or what else i wasn't fond of in your form, PLEASE let me know and i will be very glad to tell you! thank you all for taking interest in my boy arcus! i would still like to have conversations with the winner and get to know how they are doing with them. i don't want to just leave his life forever. and if you ever want art of him, hit me up because i will gladly draw him! and if you need any of his art, i can link it all to you. thank you all again and good luck in further competitions!
PLEASE NOTE:
i had very little help in judging these forms. nothing was biased at all! if you do NOT have anything nice to say, DON'T SAY IT AT ALL. and if you want or do not want your art to go to the winner, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say it in a nice way! thank you!