I didn't judge the art. All of it was so beautiful, but as it was optional I won't penalize those who didn't add it. If you changed is gender to female I expected the story to win me over. I'd rather him stay a male though C: Sorry.
@Ember the Wolf- The format is very nice, and I love when you fill the form out in the perspective. The song is very fitting C: and set a nice mood while I read. Your story fit well, It was very enjoyable to read :3 I liked how you used existing parra's in your story C:
@_Audino- Ring around the rosie is so creeepy :O very cute, I would of liked to of read more D: The music video is perfect XD..
@Calix- woah woah woah so many creepy children songs, almost cried. It made depth for the character and was very descriptive. so sad ;;
@coradrawa- omg the song was perfect, very very very perfect. I wish you would of added more to your story it seemed to lack an ending ;; <3
@Ryuuhou- Your story was very interesting. and the golden parrapup is very inspiring <3 maybe might see one later x3
@Banana.-Wish you would of finished :O
@Jinxed- :O :O you really capture the feeling of being watched *shivers*
@Sheer- Eerie story :O I wish you would of added more :3 William is a Great name for him too C:
@Blaze;- D: no song ;; :O I wish you would of elaborate more on whats happening O: <3
@○~Discover~○-O: you people are really good at finding amazing songs <3 and the name + the song. I wish you would of added more C:
@Rondell- Love the Puca name C: x3 I really liked the story :O and the spirits were an amazing idea
SO hard to pick <3 It took me so long to decide <3 thank you all for participating. One thing I would like to mention. I noticed a lot of stories didn't have much of an ending, or picked up pace >3< :O but I think the forms I read developed nicely C:
