by Ralonica » Thu Nov 15, 2012 8:35 am
Your Name: Ralonica
Horse's Name: Sethyr (Seth - eer), called Yalazi (Yall - ah - zee) by men.
Height: 15 hh
Gender: Mare
Story/Legend/Myth:
The children huddled by the campfire, sitting in a squashed group to keep warm, as the embers flickered up into the sky, lighting up the cold, dark night. A cold chill had settled on the small village, but the Shaman's words and stories were worth a little discomfort to hear. The Shaman raised his head, and the low whispering around him died away, as everyone instantly wanted to hear his words. The Shaman smiled, a small, shrivelled smile, and began to speak in a croaky voice, and all ears leant towards him to hear his crackling words.
"Of all the Mustangs." The Shaman began. "Of all the Mustangs and the long-haired rain-bringers, there is one who you should fear. While the others bring rain and good fortune, there is one, who gives greatly, but takes away even greater. And that is Yalazi, the Deciever. A mare, strange, and beautiful, but terrible as well. Short in stature, but do not let that mislead you. For when she comes... she gives great gifts, great fortune. But that only last a time and a half of a time - that will be followed by horrible, horrible misfortune, taking away the gifts she sneeringly gave you, and replacing them with sour things to rot in your hands. For you may find that the great rains Yalazi gives to you will dissapear quickly, leaving the sprouting crops to wither and die just after they have reached their prime. But those rains may also have grown the jackals, growing animals like the crops, so that the many jackals will come, taking child from it's mother, killing man while he sleeps."
A hush went over the campfire. A small child began to weep. But the Shaman held up his hand, and began to speak once more. "Many do not know from which accursed sire or dam that Yalazi was born from. But I have listened, I have heard. The Deciever came, many moons, many seasons ago. A shrivelled, crippled mare, doomed from the day she was born, and a stallion, white, purer than light itself, came together, on the night the moon was at it's fullest. The stallion rose to kill the stunted mare, but she quailed and begged him to spare her. So she made a vow, that if she could bear the stallion a foal, as beautiful - or more beautiful - than himself, she would be allowed to live. So the stallion agreed, and held her to her vow. So it came to be, that many nights later, when the moon was absent from the sky, the foal was born. With a coat blacker than night, but with white on her body - a shining light, purer than light itself. But she was small like her mother, however, she held in herself such magnificence as her father bore. Her father saw her, and despared, for she was beautiful, but terrible. So, on the day that he saw her, her sire rose up, and destroyed her dam. Yalanazi saw her die, and her mother's blood sprayed onto her coat, dark red, and it stained her coat forever. And if it be by some miracle or some dark magic, she survived without a mother, only to torment the deserts with her deceptions." The Shaman looked up, and all was silent. The camp fire flickered, and scared children looked at eachother through the darkness. And far away, a horse neighed. It could only be the terrible winny of Yalazi...
Note: I hope that it's alright that she has 'two names' in a sense. One is her real name, the other is the name men give her. I thought it suited the legend... if you don't like it, I can change it. <3 And I'm sorry that the paragraphs are so long... XD
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Ralonica on Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:54 am, edited 1 time in total.