Rise | #0511 -- WINNER

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Sun Apr 22, 2018 12:08 pm

howlingtothestars wrote:Username: howlingtothestars
Clan Link: Cinderclan
Name: Lightpool
Gender: She-cat
Rank: medicine cat
Age: 20 moons
Theme + Why: [min 20 words]
    For Better or Worse - Uncharted OST

    In this song, there are no powerful words to deliver a clear message. There are no vocal tones to drive a mood or change the energy. There is only peaceful, gentle, thought-provoking music. Lightpool is much the same. Words are not used often, and she is not skilled with language or flattering talk. However, it is through her actions and expressions that she most often communicates. Words are scarce and limited, but eyes tell the stories of worlds and universes.

    Lightpool is a failed medicine cat - at least in her own eyes. In her at clan, seven kits and four warriors passed in two moons to an illness she could not identify. During this time, everyone - even StarClan - seemed to turn their backs on her. Lightpool left by her own choice, out of shame and failure. She made her way to Two-Leg place, lived feral in the streets and treated wounded animals - including a few dogs - before Duskfall (Cinderclan’s Deputy) found her and took her in. After a long talk with Cedarstar, the young she-cat accepted her past roll once more, this time striving to be better.

    The song “For Better or Worse” is a relaxing instrumental. When listened to in a quiet setting, it brings emotions of remorse, peace, sorrow, and stirs the mind into thought. Lightpool cannot break free of her past. It haunts her and it drags her paws to hesitance. When she sees her reflection, she sees her failures sooner than her successes. She lacks confidence and is scared and sorrowful because of it. However, life has not left her unchanged. Though the past hangs heavy on her shoulders, she is given constant reminders of the good she has done and is doing when she looks upon her clan mates. Lightpool finds relief and peace through her clan and her new work, and she has committed herself to staying strong this time, for better or worse.


Ah man this kid was tough. The forms were great and many of you had very fitting themes for the characters. However I and the second judge felt this one stuck out the most and fit the most with the song chosen.
Some hms i felt were needed were to wolf ;; and dear starboy. Both of your stories made me cry along with the music ;v;

Thank you all for participating and good luck with other comps in the community!
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Re: Rise | #0511

Postby dear starboy » Sun Apr 22, 2018 12:10 pm

congrats, howlingtothestars!!! your concept was so great omg :0
and thank you for the HM!!! <3333
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Re: Rise | #0511

Postby Hail. » Sun Apr 22, 2018 12:42 pm

Ahhhh!!!! Oh my heck thank you so much!!! I freaked out when I saw this!!! The forms were all so great I didn’t think I was going to win! I absolutely adore this gal ;;;U;;; Huge congratulations to the HM’s!!! Everyone had such amazing forms!!!!
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Re: Rise | #0511

Postby weegeestar5 » Sun Apr 22, 2018 10:24 pm

Congrats to everyone ^^


























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wanna touch things i don't feel
want to hold on and feel i belong
and how can the world want me to change?
they're the ones that stay the same
they don't know me
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