[monochrome.]

As SchnaDin mentioned it, I actually didn't count in the art so much, Anna was actually a really close second but I would've liked to see some more detail to that story, it was really wellwritten and the form looked really pretty!

I liked the story that SchnaDin had but the grammar brought it down a bit in my opinion:>
I hope I didn't offend anyoneXD I just wanted to share my thoughts as of how it was judged

Apologies for bumping again, just thought this deserved a reply ^^"
Thanks for the mention, it means I'm on the right track! I hope my form removal didn't come off as rude if that was the concern, I habitually remove losing forms to avoid content theft and such by future thread viewers.

Thank you very much for the feedback on the pros and cons of my form, it's appreciated ♥

[SchnaDin]

As SchnaDin mentioned it, I actually didn't count in the art so much, Anna was actually a really close second but I would've liked to see some more detail to that story, it was really wellwritten and the form looked really pretty!

I liked the story that SchnaDin had but the grammar brought it down a bit in my opinion:>
I hope I didn't offend anyoneXD I just wanted to share my thoughts as of how it was judged

Next time i will write it in my mother language so my grammar will be no problem anymore xP
But thanks for your opinion c: