Re: Parapup #274

Postby ~vintagerose~ » Thu Aug 27, 2015 10:41 am

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Re: Parapup #274

Postby azemyc » Thu Aug 27, 2015 10:59 pm

good luck ;v;
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby the batter » Thu Aug 27, 2015 11:17 pm

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Re: Parapup #274

Postby moonlit. » Fri Aug 28, 2015 1:36 am

    Good luck! There are soooo many great forms out there, ♥
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby Ill » Fri Aug 28, 2015 1:40 am

Good luck!
omg my coding is horrid
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby SilverSamurai » Fri Aug 28, 2015 1:49 am

good luck guys!
So many great forms!
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby unluckythursday » Fri Aug 28, 2015 6:36 am

I didn't enter,but good luck!
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby poqqi » Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:43 am

Okay guys, this one was a tough one for sure. So many awesome forms, and I was caught between two!

However there can only be one winner, so, without further ado...
Congratulations Wyrd! Hopton is going to a nice home, I'm sure!
I loved your form and the thought put into it, I'd definitely buy a grass necklace from him!

Also, a shout out to Sunbear, because Sal was just too awesome! His almost "preppy" and "popular" attitude really struck me, and his little insecurities are just so adorable. This decision was honestly really hard for me, so when it came down to you and Wyrd, both of you had outstanding forms and personalities and such, and it was really jut as simple as me adoring the grass necklaces quirk that Wyrd's Hopton had. If you enter like this in all your contests, you'll be sure to win in no time!

@Moonlit - Your form was really great, and I liked the little sections you put in there, but I would have really loved to see the art at the bottom scattered throughout your form as a way to kind of break up the big walls of text. Also, next time, don't forget that adding in a Parra's song is always a huge plus!

@LightningLoon12 - I loved the name, but I would have really liked to see more, maybe some art, and more writing. Also, adding in a Parra's song is always a plus in my book!

@❤ Cat s ❤ - You had a good thing going for you, but sadly it wasn't finished! You have good ideas, though!

@KarKat Vantas ♋ - I loved the song, name, and personality all very well! While your form was very good, maybe to improve, you could pretty it up a bit more? Maybe a smaller size font, with less quote boxes, and more positioned text? Very good altogether though!

@.Hibiscus. - I liked the personality and the occupation, but I would've really liked to see the art you had placed somewhere in your form. Also, a song or description about maybe the sexuality would've also been a major plus! Don't forget to add a space after the comas and period for future reference! Besides this, awesome job!

@Xhat - Oh gosh, Xhat! Yours was another form that was close to winning! I loved the art, the poem, and the personality! I personally would've loved to see more about his "questioning" sexuality, but other than that, amazing form!

@cardigan - Your form was real nice and neat, and I loved all the sections you gave! Although, it felt like the text was never-ending, even though it was interesting to read. My tip would be to maybe add some art to break it up a bit, and a slightly bigger font since it was a bit hard for me to read.

@SilverSamurai - Your art and form was amazing, I really loved the history and such! The video made me laugh because I wasn't really expecting that! XD Anyway, I would've loved for you to go into detail about his sexuality, likes, dislikes, etc. As it seemed that I was mainly reading about Shiki and Soren rather than just who Shiki is as a Parra. It felt as if I didn't completely know all I could about him, ya know?

@Cojinxleafbelle - I loved all the little bits you put in there, and I loved the detail you laid into this form, but it seemed as if it was just one quote after the other. Maybe try to pretty it up more, so it seems I'm not just reading forever, ya know? Loved the relationships, and your little doodles were just too cute!

gator vocals - Yet another top form, I loved the personality, the art was amazing, and your coding was very neat and tidy! I would've loved to see a song, though. That was really the only thing that I could find to critique your form on!

Anyway, congratulations! You guys keep it up, your forms were amazing!
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby Ill » Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:44 am

Congrats!
And I would've prettied it up if I actually knew how...
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Re: Parapup #274

Postby KarKat Vantas ♋ » Fri Aug 28, 2015 11:02 am

congrats wyrd

Thanks, sorry it didn't look so pretty. I had school from 8:20 to 4:00, (HW lated me a good time, too) But thanks anyways for the critique.

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