So sorry for the wait guys, this one was hard to judge!
The winner is Supergirl202! Congrats!
Fluffy. and I both agreed that the character you created for this parra fit well with her looks. I can tell that you put a lot of work into your form, which also helps a whole lot [I love to see effort!]. The nice coding is also a nice touch. c:
A runner up will be awarded to Lioncourt!
Please pm fluffy about the details! [she said she'd pm you but she said that she'd do it thursday or friday of this week but I took a while coming up with feedback for everybody else, so it'd probably be best for you to pm her.]
I thought that your form was really nice, and I could tell you put a lot of work into it. We just liked Supergirl's personality a tiny bit more for this parra.
Feedback for everybody else;;
~Maddy~ I like the length of the 'about this parra' section, and the personality is nice, but nothing really stood out to me, unfortunately. You also called her a Plumie, so I'm not really sure what that's about...
Serge Like ~Maddy~'s form, nothing really stood out to me. The 'about this parra' section is really nice, and honestly I can't find anything wrong with your form. It just doesn't stand out enough.
Angelshy I love your form. Honestly, I had a hard time with yours because it was really nice. But in the end it just didn't quite fit this parra for me as much as lioncourt and supergirl's forms did.
-Garnet I liked the beginning of your story, but as it got into teen and adult, I was really looking for something more. I've tried to type out an explanation so many times but it just doesn't work. I'm not exactly sure what it is that the story needs in the end other than 'something more' and I'm really sorry that I cant help here. It just seemed like the beginning was setting it up for something better than what actually happened.
Ryūko Matoi I'd really like more information than that...
cojinxleafbelle I liked your form, but like many others it just didn't quite stick out enough.
Again, sorry for the delay! This parra was really difficult to judge because there were so many good forms!