[Glispa]

Aaaand this is now officially closed for judging... somewhat.
I have pretty much already made my mind on who will get this sima, I just have to write things down and I just don't have the time for that currently. Especially since I have planned on not just stating who wins but also give each one of you who made a complete form for this one some critique and opinions from my side C: Well unless you really don't like that, then just say so and I'll skip you out

Anyway I should be able to get the words out to Wednesday, if not earlier.

[tiiedye.]

EEP! I'm so excited! Good luck to everyone!

[koegami]

ehh, i suck at not finishing this, well good luck guys, the art the winner can have, i have no need for it.

[Glispa]

Okey the time has come for me to reveal the winner of this sima. I had a really fun time reading through all the forms and ideas for this one and I saw a lot of things I really liked but there was one form that just stuck with me. So without further ado, this guy will now be known as Felix. So Congrats to tiiedye for your lovely entry and I know for sure you will take good care of this guy.

I would also like to announce that I might, possible make a RU for checkmate. and when I say possible, that's just what I mean as I have to sort things out in life first. So just saying it might end up not happening if I can't achieve that...


And now onto the words I have put down for each one of you who made a complete form in a way or another.
Please note that these are my opinions, my likes and what I think and nothing else really.



tiiedye.
There is a lot of things in your entry I really liked, you had a great layout, things where placed in a way that made sense and the occasional art made a great divider for the different parts and also gave the whole form some air between things. Really loved the way you explained how Felix is as a person, you did not only show what he's like through written out personality and explaining him in a overview kind of way but you also showed him from the perspective of others. I also absolutely loved the small quotes thrown in here and there from Felix himself, which gave the whole form a more personal touch and that added with the Interview and journal made the character really seem alive for me.

Some other things that made your form really stand up above the others in my opinion was the fact that you explained the relationship between him and his so called powers and why he have the gear he have. This was a big point towards you winning this guy. The occupation of Felix was really creative and well though out, the relationships amongst other simas was a nice bonus adding to who this guy is and basically everything in your form was really interesting to read about in general and I can clearly see the amount of effort you have put into making Felix the one he is.

I don't really see anything that would need changed or looked into, just an amazing entry form your part that was really interesting for me to read through C:

Thecrowmuse11
Really liked what you where going for, the whole idea with how this sima got it's so called powers was something I would have never thought off and it was in general just really interesting and different from what I usually get to see. The blue with the picture s gave this form a theme that was just really pleasant to look at. One thing I would suggest you think of is try to mostly stick to the default font or at least a default looking font, as the one you had going made it kind of hard for me to get through the text. Other than that simple yet really interesting to read

checkmate.
Lots of details and lots of reading, exactly how I like it C: I could clearly see you have put in a lot of effort into this character, making him just the way he is and also whilst doing so doing a great job on explaining it all to me. You really made this character seem real, giving me so much details that it basically felt like I was reading about an actual person instead of a made up character like this. Really interesting ideas you where going for, especially loved the storm chaser thing you had going for him. As I can definitely see this guy as someone who would throw himself into first best storm. There's just too much for me to comment on all my likes but that's the mayor ones. And the little finishing text more about you was a really nice touch, just adding to the fact that I clearly see that you would have taken really good care of this guy, and this amongst others was the reason to why I decided to offer a possible RU for you, and I really hope I will be able to do so

The thing I could see that you should think off for future things like this is keep it organized and easily navigated. I especially see this when people go to other websites when making their forms. So like other form I have seen on sites like this your form was a little hard to navigate and a little unorganized in the way that things seemed a little thrown around. I wouldn't have done any better work by far but it's still a smaller thing I think you should think of C:

★ForeverNova-
Nice and simple, straight on subject and just generally greatly laid out. Quickly got to know the character in a quick and simple way. The thing with the penguins just amused way more than it should have really C: Really liked that though, something interesting making this character unique in it's own way. And well lastly the only thing I could think off to suggest for you to think of is try expanding your writing, I can clearly see that you have a lot of amazing idea and even if I can see some of it coming out I know that there is so much more to know, maybe go a little more into detail like for the items why would he have had a wrench? What does he use it for? what would it look like? Things like that even if it's just a smaller thing would have made me fall for the character more and thus also made me put your form higher on my scale for liking C:

Bloodyshadowwolf
I really, really loved this idea to how this sima became how he became. It fits very well with his thought out personality and likes. Other than that nice and simple, easy to follow through. And generally just quite a good work done on so little space. As the thing I would say you can think of, it's pretty much the same as with ★ForeverNova- You seem to have the ideas, good ideas on that front too. So try to explain it more, go a little more into detail. There where many things you had put up for this guy that made me curious and I would have loved to know more about those C:




And now being done here I bid you all farewell

[olive oil]

Congrats, tiiedye! Your form really was outstanding. Fell free to keep my art if you'd like, though some if it may not go with Felix's personality ^^"

Thank you so much for your feedback, glispa. I'll defiantly use it in my future forms nvn
And honestly, I don't need an RU if it's too much trouble for you. I'm just happy that you noticed my form and that it would've been your second choice nvn

[tiiedye.]

AHH! Thank you so much Glispa! I promise I'll take really good care of Felix <3

To everyone else, I really enjoyed looking through all of the forms! Everyone did a great job!