Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby jzprincess » Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:55 pm

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Equid's Name: Aerosmith (Aero for short)
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 4 years
Gender: Mare
Poem:

The thunder of hooves
Down a mountain slope
Fills the air with a piece of hope.
For she has come back
From her adventures of cold
Her coat like the sun and heart of gold,
Her voice the sound of music.
For she has returned.
To gallop in the mountains,
With the sun on her back
To a time of peace
Without a struggle.


Fail -.- I tried to write poetry but failed. Good luck to everyone.
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby Zax » Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:57 pm

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Equid's Name:My Little Golden Girl
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 1 year
Gender: Mare
Poem:A flit nor a flutter
Could imitate her moves
Neither sound nor the beat
Of her golden hooves
Against the mountain side

A sweet desire nor a love
Could keep this heart from me
Neither rain nor the snow
Of my home among them
Will stop me from meeting her

A platinum tail and mane
Could this be the one I desire?
I hear that that flit and flutter sound
Coming from my heart
As I see her trot up to me
My little golden girl


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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby Asia_Grey » Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:10 pm

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NAME:whisper
AGE:adult
POEM(:(:...

ablaze with the wind,a whisper of sound
of birds in treetops and hooves thundering below
crashing like lightning but soft and sweet as a whisper
a bolt of passion shot from mountaintop
whispering like the wind, she lets out her roar
soft like a mouse yet loud like her passion
head raised high to the heavens
takes a big breath then whispers again

thank you, hope you like my poem
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby Aizui » Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:15 pm

Username:
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Equid's Name:
Buckskin (ironic because she's female XD)
Height:
14.1 hh
Age:
1
Gender:
Mare
Poem:
Crimson caverns depth with shadows of nightmares,
Rays blooming in cream faintly petals,
Liquid light leaks upon layers,

Ground beaten hooves drag against dust,
Shaded figure beneath vanilla sunburst,
Damaged highlands invaded with rust,

Sound of crunching bone rip from sight,
Buckskin pelt layered in oil,
Thickness of feathers upscale the night,

Crumbling mountain rock staggers downward,
Silence flutters with grayscale wind,
Stance of a double edged sword,
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby opti-mism » Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:29 pm

Username: goldenrose7
Equid's Name: Maisha, meaning "Life" in Swahili.
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 2 years
Gender: Mare
Poem:

As the sun beat down on the golden equid's mane,
Little did she know he was with her again,
His big, gentle eyes with thundering hooves that did pound,
Were coupled with his prance and the trumpet he did not sound.

After a moment did she then raise her eyes,
To the stallion she had thought long since died.
Her one true love, killed by a storm,
Was standing before her, quiet and forlorn.

Her breath caught in her throat when she opened her mouth to speak,
The the golden blushed pink, her knees going weak.
The darker sorrel male smiled to warm her heart,
And suddenly, swiftly, they began to depart.

Finding each other had finally set them free,
Away from the husks that had tried so hard to be,
For with their true love that could not be broken,
Started to join the scenery, whispering words long left unspoken.

Without any warning, the light lifted them high,
Spirits ascending into the daybreaking sky,
Their golden coats turned to beams of the 'rise,
Above the mountains, finding the end of their demise.

The mare turned to her partner, the warmth in her smile,
Reassured him that she would not leave, all the while,
Though she melted away to the gentle golden rays,
Taking her place in the beauty, forever to stay.

And then did he take his place in the sky,
Never to be alone, even after they died,
For he became the sun, always beside his love,
While she could dapple the mortals with their light from above.

And so then they gifted the world with another,
A delicate creature, a filly, their daughter.
Her coat shimmered pure as the bright orb above,
Dappled perfectly with the delicate light from their love.
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:44 pm

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Equid's Name: Golden Dreams, goes by "Jayden"
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 3 years
Gender: Mare
Poem: WIP
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby monkeymahem » Fri Nov 16, 2012 3:09 pm

Username: monkeymahem
Equid's Name: Sayonara
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 3
Gender: Mare
Poem:

Beconing winds,
Across the land,
Tiny blossoms,
Fit in your hand.

She dances,
On feather-light hooves,
Making so much commotion,
The groundhog disapproves.

Easily conquering,
The sky-high mountain,
She came upon,
a golden fountain.

Within it's waters,
Held a tiny sound,
It came to represent,
What she had just found.

Plunging back into the valley,
She knew she had gained,
Knowledge of what,
Was giving her so much pain.

Her calling lost to the sea,
It shown like a tiara,
She saw what completed her,
Her name, Sayonara.
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby flyteck » Fri Nov 16, 2012 3:33 pm

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Equid's Name: Blood Red Sunset
Height: 14,1 hh
Age: 6 Years
Gender: Mare
Poem:
Her hooves barley touched the ground,
She ran like she was flying,
And she did not make a sound,
No noise, no single bird was crying.
She glided across the mountains,
Her heart was strong and set,
With joy that gushed like a fountain,
Silhouetted against the sunset.

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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby Kitsyn » Fri Nov 16, 2012 3:55 pm

Oh dear lord, I love dapples as well. She is truly beautiful.
Good luck to those who know how to write poems xP
I own a grey dapple mare IRL, so they always catch my eye.
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Re: WME: Dapple Blonde Sorrel

Postby Carbon » Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:41 pm

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Equid's Name: After Glow (Glow)

Height: 14,1 hh

Age: 4

Gender: Mare

Poem:

As she galloped through the wood,
the wind whipped through her mane.
She pushed herself as fast as she could,
She was free at last from her suffering and pain.


The mountain loomed closer with its jagged peak,
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