Re: JBD #267

Postby bonk » Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:57 am

Name: Stark
Gender: Male
Personality: Sly, adventurous, sarcastic.
But if you bring his parents up, he will act very depressed.

Story: He was born in the Himalayas. His nest was inside a little alcove.
Stark's mother was always very protective of him. She hardly let him venture outside of his home, as the mountains were quite dangerous. If the little dragon was exposed to freezing temperatures, he would surely suffer. And the steep heights didn't help, so Stark was always shy as a young dragon. But eventually the den got too big for his family. Two males and a female in a small cave just didn't add up.
Eventually his parents became frail, and they could not venture out. Stark had to tend to them. He had to overcome his fears of the outside world. There were a few predators, but he didn't come across them. The biggest problem with living in the Himalayas was there was a lack of sweet foods. Jellybean Dragons thrive on sweet foods, but there was hardly any... Apart from Himalayan blackberries.
So Stark had to follow a stream of water to find where the berries grew. Every few days he would have to venture out and get the berries.
After a while, he became comfortable around predators and his shyness went away. As a teen, he became more adventurous. But there was a big change in his life... His parents...
They were killed by a snow leopard.
But Stark knew it was coming. They wouldn't last long in the highlands. The jellybean dragon was still very depressed after their death. He wanted to get away from his den.
Stark ran away with a mouthful of blackberries and ventured towards new land, in hopes of finding a new home.
After many weeks of traveling, he came across a small village. It was a humble place. He walked around, he saw some creatures unlike any he'd ever seen before. They didn't seem to have fur, except for some on their heads.
They noticed that he was hungry, and a child offered him a cookie. He quickly ate it and begged for more.
The humans smiled and offered him various foods. Stark soon forgot all about his old life. Every once in a while he would grieve for his parents, but he accepted the fact that they were gone.
Stark's personality had changed after his loss. Instead of being soft and shy, he had to harden up and live on his own.


I kept the story somewhat short (almost 400 words). Sorry if this isn't enough.
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hey i kinda quit cs hahahaha oops
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Re: JBD #267

Postby chescab » Thu Aug 09, 2012 3:46 pm

Name:


Quarra (named after the TRON character, word comes from Italy and means "Heart")


Gender:

female




Personality:


She is sarcastic and serious yet funny and playful and fun loving. Not many see her fun loving playful side since many take advantage of it (which is why she acts sarcastic and serious.) She is an outcast and plays the part hiding in shadows and sulking about the streets. All she needs/wants is a friend but not many hang around with her out of fear of her rough side. she is very strong and can take out someone twice her size but lacks communication skills and can be quite demanding and pushy, but once you get to know her she is sweet and loving




Story:


I will do her History

Quarra grew up on the streets of the city for years. Holding out on her own was hard but she managed by searching in garbage cans and allys. Once in a blue moon she would find a fruit tree and eat all she could until whoever owned the tree would toss pots and pans at her yelling. she has many scars from this but dosn't regret it since it was either steal or die. She got into to many fights with raccoons and dogs to count. which is how she got so good at fighting since she had packs of stray dogs and wolves gang up on her on a weekly basis. She also learned how to meant wounds mostly because she had so many.

After years of wandering the streets she found a forest and moved into it. The strays weren't a problem anymore but there were still wolves and other types of dragons watching her every move. She didn't mind since there was an abundance of food and she wasn't going hungry anymore, until the forest was cut down and she had to run again. She was deeply saddened and ran into the mountains.

The mountains were tough and she was starving practicly skin and bones. The constant blizzard never faded and she was ready to curl up and die. Looking up at the sky one last time she closed her eyes as everything faded to black. A couple months later she woke up from a coma in a strange place (the vet's office) and looked around to see a girl with food. She happily took the food and ever since she and the girl have been best of friends and she now lives with the girl and her other pets



Best Friend:


Her best friend is the Dox Dragon Lillybloom since they can understand each others pasts


Favourite Music

She loves digital music like the music in tron. However when Justin Bieber comes on the radio she has figured out how to change the volume and blasts it as loud as it can go then starts singing and dancing as everyone else laughs.
Open to trading anything on CS for FR currency. I'm chescab there if anyone wants to trade.
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Re: JBD #267

Postby P1877a & Crazy » Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:38 pm

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Name: Demellia pronounced- da-mel- ee- ya
Gender: Female
Story: When she hatched she woke up in a cave full of dark colored jelly bean dragons and ran to hide back in her egg shell. She peeked her head out and saw that every one of them where staring at her but, when she looked again she saw that they were staring at a beautiful brightly colored dragon "mamma?" she squealed and ran to go hug her she shook her head not believing her eyes! She was hugging a dark dragon, she dashed off to the woods far away from the dark ones. 4 years later..... She was half blind from an accident that the humans did. She dashed off using her new excellent sense of smell and hearing to find her way back to her rightful owner Christina. She was taken away from her and was determined to find a way back to her. Everything was blurry when she opened her eyes so she kept them shut until she found a meadow. She softly fell sound asleep humming a lullaby.
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Re: JBD #267

Postby Verdana » Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:04 am

Judging begins tomorrow. Get your forms done!
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Re: JBD #267

Postby Sneaky » Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:34 am

Name: Astro
Gender: Male
Personality: He is a nice JBD, but can become intimidated easily.
Story: Astro was adopted by me when he was a little egg. I looked after him in my Shelter with all my dragons and animals. They never leave my site unless I have a school day. One day, I guess Astro got scared or something, but I was at school and she wanted me. So, she made the long journey to school. I wondered what was happening when I say some year 9's poking a fluffy thing. I gasped as I realized it was Astro! I pushed my way through the crowd. I shouted Astro and he jumped up at me and I cuddled him. "What the heck is that?!" One of the teens asked me. I ignored him and ran home...
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Re: JBD #267

Postby sweet tea » Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:22 am

    Name: aniette

    Gender: female

    Personality: she is kind and sweet, she loves to cuddle with someone whenever she feels that they are not feeling it. she is reliable, she would never run away or betray anyone. she loves to run, for the exercise and trill. she would wake up early in the morning and run around until someone wakes up. this girl is sensitive, many people think that she is a boy due to her markings. she tries to hide her pain whenever someone refers to her a 'he', but deep inside, she is really hurt.

    Story: aniette's history wasn't very bright and happy. when she was just an egg, her father had been killed by poachers and her mother ran off to try and find him. her mother had aniette safely hidden under a patch of grass and a few twigs. when the egg finally started cracking, anniette was too weak to push through the egg, nevertheless through the thick camouflage of grass, mud and dirt. when she was about a week old, she finally had the strength to break through, but she was still weak due to her lack of protein and vitamins. a forest was where she was, alone but free. she lived there happily for two months until people came to cut the trees down. little by little, the number of trees began to decrease until anniette finally had to leave. she moved out and wandered the streets until she came to the park. it was very green, trees were everywhere, grass as far as the eye can see. she decided to live there. under a park bench she slept for many days and nights until some loving person found her. taking her home, she grew stronger and healthier by the day. soon she was an adult, roaming around on her own, but never leaving her owner all together.

    {ack. sorry it is so short... i have a low muse at the moment... .-. also, thank you for considering! this is my first time ever trying out for a jbd! c:}
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Re: JBD #267

Postby CanisInsanine » Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:52 am

Hey, i just wanted to let you know that I am going on vacation tomorrow, so I might not be able to be on here to see who won, but if, by the off chance that I do win, could you please send me a PM so that I dont have to sort through the pages when I get back? I will be back in about a week, and I might have access to the internet a time or two, but not very often. Thank you so much, and good luck everybody! You guys are some epic competition!
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Re: JBD #267

Postby Verdana » Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:25 pm

Editing has CLOSED! Judging will commence shortly.

Please, no posting from now until the winner is announced. Anyone posting for whatever reason will be disqualified. Unnecessary, non-form posts are already frowned upon and may lessen one's chances.

Best of luck!
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Re: JBD #267: Winner announced!

Postby Verdana » Sat Aug 11, 2012 4:42 am

My judgement is made!

First off, well done to everyone who entered. Your stories were superb, and I was terribly torn, deciding who this dragon would go to. In the end, though, since there could only be one, this JBD goes to...

wolfxdog! Well done! Your story really struck a chord in me. Your personality was thought-out, your reasoning was sound, and I loved your name.

Very well done to everyone who entered! You did an amazing job, and this was a very difficult choice.

You can now all post as much as you want.
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Re: JBD #267: Winner announced!

Postby Pandalove789 » Sat Aug 11, 2012 4:47 am

Yay! Congrats wolfxdog!
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