Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Sora- » Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:50 am

Finally finished!
By the way the title is describing the egg itself.

Macabre
Disturbing and horrifying because of involvement with or depiction of death and injury.

As I struggled against the pelting rain and wind I can' help but grimace when I thought back to the day's events. To describe it best, all I can say it that it was horrible. From the start things went wrong. I forgot to set my alarm the previous night and my coffee maker broke, leaving me to face the day without any caffeine at all. Then, at school I couldn't find that 5000 word essay I had stayed up till 2 to type. Worst of all my car broke down on my way home, which leaves me in my current situation: Attempting to walk home through the freezing rain. Just as I thought things couldn't get any worse, it did. I tripped. I went flying into the mud made by the rain and all my books scattered around me. "Wonderful, this was my new pair of jeans too!", I muttered as I picked myself up from the ground. Grumbling about my horrid luck, I went about collecting my fallen books. Just then something stuck halfway in the mud caught my eye. It was about the size of a small shoe and repetitively round in shape. This must be what tripped me. I walk over to the round object and loosened it from the ground then held it up for an closed examination. It seemed to be an egg, it was muddy brown in color (which probably explains why I didn't see it earlier) and there were some green root-like things curling around it. On the back there was a note, the message was smudged because of the rain but it was still legible, it read: "Subject 0523 of the Nuclear Radiation Research/Experiment Lab" and in a messy scrawl underneath: "Extremely dangerous- terminate immediately" Just how dangerous can an egg be? I wondered, and to leave it out here in the rain? It just doesn't seem right. Looking at the egg, I thought about it some more and sigh. "Well then, I guess you're coming with me" I muttered to the egg. Then, after putting the egg into my bag were it would be protected from the rain, I picked up my books from the ground where left them. Feeling just a bit better about my day I continued on my way home, completely unaware of the small movements of the egg as the creature inside struggled to break the shell that holds it in.
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Firazon » Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:55 am

My story.

I was running, my breath coming fast. My village had been attacked by mutant zombies who tore the flesh from the villagers. But I had remained, the only one alive in the whole village. I had hidden in my attic for a few days with a pistol. For awhile they had been stupid mindless creatures that just milled about, moaning. But then the bomb thats sent radiation across the nation had given them the ability to adapt. Then they had climbed apon each other in an ravage attepmt to consume me. I knowing my only chance to survive was to jump out the window in the attic. I did so but they were faster that I anticapated. Plus with a sprained ankle I could only go so far. Finally in exaushtion I dropped knowing I would die right there and then. But what was that glow. The zombies stared at the egg showing something I would never believed they could show, fear. They turned groaning and moaning and vanished into the night. I turned and saw an egg. It was odd, and dead looking. I picked it up feeling, Scared. What was this creature? Should I find out, by hatching it? I wanted to set it down but instead I found my hand going to my backpack. I put it inside. Now only time will tell.
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Shark-salad » Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:30 am

GAAH i want to enter but mines still growing good luck to every one else
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:34 am

Haunted Forest
There's a little cabin in the woods, in the farthest stretch of them. No one really knew that anyone lived there. Who would want to? It was said the forest was haunted. Very, very, haunted indeed.
And the kids that lived there were abused and treated badly by their parents. The boy was named Thomas, and the girl was named Sally. Commonly used names. "Come here," commanded the father, swinging a club. The kids smiled, unaware what was about to happen. They eagerly came forward, expecting a hug, or a present. "What is it, Papa?" asked Sally, her eyes big and blue. She yelped as he bashed her with the club, and spanked her with a belt. There was a large bruise on Sally's head from the club. "But what did we do...?" she whispered, a tear rolling down her face. "Be quiet!" snarled the father, knocking Thomas over nastily and kicking him in the ribs.
One day their parents told them to run out to town. It was heard a lightening storm would happen on the full moon, and that full moon was tonight. Of course the kids didn't know, and, seeing a chance to please their parents maybe, ran off. Sally grinned, "maybe Papa won't beat us anymore!" Thomas sucked a broken finger. "I guess..." he said, not wanting to down his younger sister's hope. He turned around and muttered, "fat chance."
The parents rubbed their hands together evilly and triumphantly. They had managed to get their kids away forever.
But none of them really knew what happened on the full moon.
Sure, a lightening storm. Sure, the kid's death. But there was something else.
No one knew, but legend said, that on the 1000th century of the full moon, all the dead monsters would be reborn. Long ago, humans killed all the monsters because of their horrid looks. Also because the monsters would kill their cattle and rip into their crop. These monsters were also destroyed on the full moon during a lightening storm.
So, the two children wandered out in the Haunted Monster Woods, looking for the trail that led to town. But the kids could not find it, no matter what. It was nearly midnight now, and the full moon was almost all the way up. The storm had already started. Rain poured down and lightening crackled a few miles, maybe 7, away. It was inching closer to the kids... Thunder boomed. Lightening closed in. It flashed right before them. "I'm scared," whispered Sally, her voice full of fear. Her wide blue eyes were frightened. "I guess we're lost..." said Thomas quietly. "There goes the chance to please father," he muttered under his breath sarcastically. Sally heard him. "You never thought father sent us out here to please him...did you?" she said, her voice becoming more fearful every moment. "It's obvious why he did!" roared Thomas, losing his temper. "He wants to kill us," he shouted for the woods to hear. "He sent us in the wrong direction so we'd day in the lightening storm!" Sally cowered under her brother's stronger, bigger voice, and fell. Lightening struck a few inches away of her landing. She screamed, and her screech echoed eerily in the forest. Thomas's eyes widened, and he leaped to her rescue heroically, only to trip on a twig and fall on top of her. Suddenly the ground began to tremble. It shivered and cracked. "What was that!?" whispered the girl, holding onto her brother shirt, trembling. "I'm not sure..." said Thomas. "But I'm sure everything will be okay," he cooed. The two children sat up and looked around aghast; the world had never looked so horrid. Most everything was to dark to see what was happening, and the things that weren't too dark you'd wish they were hidden. Sillouhetted was a fallen tree; large cracks in the earth; everything you wouldn't want to happen when you're stuck in the woods. Thomas slowly stood up, casting a weary glance around the forest. He helped his sister up, who stood shaking, unmoving. There was more than fear in her eyes. She was petrified. And at that moment lightening shot down, splitting open the earth for her to fall into. Thomas gasped and lunged after her, but something pulled him back.
It was a claw.
Choking, Thomas managed to crane his neck to see a...somelike cat head outlined against the sky. It's claws curved around his body, and Thomas choked, starting to cough for breath. "The humans must be asking for our forgivness!" squeaked a small, mouse-like monster. "They have given us a peace offering...their children! They're giving us food!" he continued. The cat smacked the mouse-like creature with it's paw, quickly killing it. Thomas, inside, was nearly scared to death. Were they going to eat him? And what about his sister? If she were dead...they could have her. But he hoped it wouldn't come to that.
The catlike creature sniffed him, examining him with observing eyes. "Hmm..." it thought, and Thomas realized it was a girl. Her sly voice seemed like a snake, coiling up and wrapping him in a trance. Suddenly he seemed soothed, very soothed, under that snake-like voice. It was...like a lullaby. She slowly rocked him back and forth to sleep. "I don't think they mean a threat to us," she purred to the monsters. "This human is abused just like we were. They must had ran away, or been sent away." she paused, thinking. "I think we should keep them...as friends," she said, setting the boy down. She cast her senses out. "I sense another prescense..." she whispered, following her nose, she came to one of the holes, and peeked into it. A girl lay, dead. "can you heal him?" whispered a voice. she glanced at the mouse-like monster's son. he looked like his father, and was just as disobedient and mischievous. "I doubt it, though we can heal dead people, just as we do dead monsters...and I think it's a girl," she replied, slightly annoyed at his blindness. It was obvious she was a girl. "I meant my father," squeaked the mouse. The cat roared, and smacked the son across the woods into a crack with his father. She soon forgot him and looked back into the crack. If the boy is good to us, we may heal her... decided the cat, getting on her haunches she picked up the boy and trotted off to care to his wounds, that were obviously caused by human weapons. She swung her tail as she went.
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby BadDogAlliance » Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:01 am

my story

The rain poured down as we drove up the old drit road.Shanon slowed down as the mud got thicker "This is going to be awsome"Hanna seid "All alone in an old mansone"She had been exsided the whole eight hours.I turn to her"We are doing this for school this is not a fun trip"Hanna turned to me "What got into you Elsa why are you such a spoiled sport"I trun and star out the window.Shanon pulled the car to a stop"I heared that an old mad man lived here once"Hanna seid "Mybe he is hunting this place"I turned to look out over the old grave yard"Well he was rely creepy"I muterd"Look at all those graves"Hanna looked"Maaube they where pets"She seid hopfully.She walked over to one grave"Hey look it says experment xp-5"I joined her"An mad man that makes experments"I turned and walked to another grave"Xp-6"I walked and counted up to xp-35 before I turned around and went in side with the others"Wow your soked"Shanon seid"Well you could have got me sooner"I snaped.Hanna step fowared"Hey we thoutgh you liked dead thing being emo and all"I turned away"I am going to look around"
I walked down stares and found an old lad.I walked over broken glass and old papers with wrighting on them.I picked one up and read
Aug 23 1920
Dr.John McCulon
I am working on the cure for death.So far my experment have faled.I have found only one of the things need to reanamate corpes Wolfbane.I have falied with most gases and I am in dering the disapontments with may liqueds.

The next part was a drawing of a man.Serching around I found the next page.
Aug 31
I have fanly done it I made a reamaned corps.A small cat has returned from the dead.
Wolfbane
Liquied Natergen
Segment of the cellabrem
and hagergon


Oct 31
The cat has burst in to flames this after noon when was exsosed to open flame.
note-Die in sun light a reamates at night.

Many more notes coved to floor.I truned and saw an old movie projecter.I pushed play and saw an old man move the camra on a huge monstasaty.The the movie projeter died.I truned and saw an egg resting on desk I came over and saw the man laying on the floor I grabed the egg and ran up stares.The monster was now mine and I will be the master of it.I thougt
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Nerdy Dinosaur » Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:28 am

O_O Zomby Kitteh! Must have! Must have! I will use my whole day and begin working on the story. :D Be warned, I am a fail writer and I am pretty much doing this for fun.
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“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your . You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”

“I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But I've bought a big bat. I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me!”
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Nerdy Dinosaur » Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:46 am

((Fail. I couldn't come up with a better title! I am relying only on originality (I don't read other entries before I post) and grammar :D Oh, well. I had fun researching zombies, and writing the story. Can't wait 'till someone wins it and I get to see what it looks like fully grown! BTW, Arrow and Sora...pure awesomeness.))

The Hidden Cavern

By: Mia & Kae (Kae)

The dark clouds rolled in, and rain pounded my back. Occasional white rods of lighting lit the distant sky, and was reflected in the puddles and on the tombstones. The lights surrounding the cemetery shut off, and I was enveloped by darkness. Grrrrroooooaaaahhhhhhuh. I stopped dead in my tracks, and every muscle in my body tensed.

This is how you would expect that I would find an undead pet, but that story is not correct. This is how it actually happened:

That fateful day, my history class and I were going on a field trip to a retired military base. There were no omens of Undead-Location, like in the movies. The bus ride through the dessert was long and boring, my friends and I tried to pass the time.

“Keira! Look at this M.A.S.H. I made for Zahra: She lives in a shack, has a pet Thestral, and drives a tractor! Ha!” My friend Hana shouted, laughing. Hana was the loud, funny one in the group. She was short, like me, too.

“That’s hilarious, Hana! Who is she married to, and where does she live? Alabama, and her brother?” I responded, laughing.

“You guys suck.” Zahra said, laughing at the prediction of her future. She was the tall, quiet, shy one. She laughed more than she spoke.

We chatted for a while acting like any friends: laughing at stupid things. Squished together on the bus seat, poor Hana was smashed against the window. Looking outside, I absorbed my surroundings. We were in the middle of no where, nothing but desert. The sky was lit, and there were absolutely no clouds. The entire land seemed brown, dead.

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Hana, Zahra, and I all scrambled to be first out of the bus, and landed in the drive way of the ancient military base. The sound of gravel crunching under our feet met our ears, and the entire place reeked of dust and old. The buildings that hadn’t been restored were old and faded, just like everything else in the God forsaken place.

“This place is terrible! Why can’t we just ditch this dang trip and find somewhere else to go? Hey, I bet there’s a field we can play Flag Football in instead!” Hana blurted loudly, like always.

Zahra and I laughed, and simultaneous yeahs echoed through the herd of kids. I zoned out a little, studying the area while my history teacher, Mr. Pearson, told us about the history of the site. During the tour, my small group of friends wandered around to give ourselves a separate tour. We laughed over how scary the insides of the oldest buildings where, being dorks. When we got to the oldest structure, we stopped and studied the house.

“Guys, this is creepy.” Zahra whispered, as if she didn’t want to wake any one inside from their slumber.

“Nah. But it does look like an old pilgrim house or something.” I said. None of us laughed, or giggled, or smiled. We were immersing ourselves in the area. It was covered in cobwebs, and was filled with dining tables and beds. Everything looked centuries old. In the biggest room of the house, I looked at a large desk, scattered with papers. One big book looked like a journal.

“Keira…the kitchen is filled with food…perishable…and it’s all new…how weird!” Hana said quietly. Suddenly, I crashed through the wooden floor boards. My friends rushed to help me, and in the end, we where all below the building. It appeared like a cavern someone had dug, and was filled with weird machines, all charred black, like the after-effect of a fire.

“Let’s get out of here!” I shouted. We scrambled around, looking for a way out.

“Guys! A ladder, and a window!” Zahra said. While we were rushing toward it, trying to be the first out of that place, when I tripped on a rock.

The rock was dark and the dirt flaked from it with the slightest touch. The rock was over grown with dead roots and caked with mud. The weirdest things was, it was shaped like an egg, and glowed green. It felt cold in my fingers; not ice cold, but dead cold. I sensed an odd...yearning, a hunger coming from the rock.

I stuffed it in my pocket hastily, and ran after my friends. I can’t wait to get this thing under a microscope in Mrs. Rodriguez’s class. I bet its radioactive! I didn’t tell any of my friends about the rock. Hana and Zahra would want to see it themselves, then we would fight over who got to keep it. My group found our way back to the class, and followed through with the rest of that boring field trip. But, I had yet to discover…that my discovery I was so intrigued with…was no rock.
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“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your . You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”

“I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But I've bought a big bat. I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me!”
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Hawkfire. » Thu Aug 18, 2011 3:44 pm

I think it's great! :D
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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Saikiyo » Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:17 pm

Mia & Kae is/are the winner(s)


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Re: dead monZter egg

Postby Prince of Awesome » Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:19 pm

Aww...I wasnt done..
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Maturity is SO overrated.

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