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Bunnila - I really enjoyed this form, the concept as a whole was executed so well. I love the callback to the word "nothing" at the end, it's such a neat literary trick!
Coraly - something about the way this form was written made me feel so warm and fuzzy. it took me back to being read bedtime stories of an adventurous character, and learning a lesson at the end of it. your writing style is wonderful, and the way you orchestrated this little snippet of whipp's life? exquisite
drambuie - this was an incredible form, from the name to the story, to the faint echo of a memory towards the end - both this concept, and your writing as a whole are absolutely fantastic, and i can't wait to see what you do next ♡
Chaotic_Affection - another incredible form! the concept alone was so strong here, the detail, the description, i could feel ophelia's heartache, and the names you chose were lovely both in origin and in meaning (ophelia is a fav. of mine)
willowbear - short and sweet, it really makes you appreciate parenthood, and the pain of letting a loved one leave the nest
regnfall - this feels so reminiscent of a fable, and i love it! something that made her one of a kind -- that phrase was so.. rewarding. self love is a thing that many people struggle with -- but this form reminds me that even if it is a struggle, it is always possible. ♡
TC Latest Rage - the sort of dedication expressed in your form is something that i really admire! to never lose hope for something so precious to you
rem sleep - this was such a warm form, if that makes sense. the type of warmth from drinking a hot cup of cocoa, or curling up by the fire. the type of warmth from holding another close -- and it's such a powerful feeling here! this form reminds me that even though you may feel alone, you never truly are, and that's such a precious thing to be reminded of <3
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