Re: Stars #100

Postby Alckatraz » Sat Aug 31, 2019 10:35 am

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Cat Name: Burningash
Gender: Male
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Eternal Forest
Age: 3
Prompt: Worst day of his life? That's easy, Burningash will always remember it like it happened yesterday.
He grew up in a forest clan, different from the one he's part of now. Back then, he was just an apprentice preparing to become warrior, called Sandpaw. He saw the prey hole pretty empty, to he decided to go hunting for his clan a bit. He wasn't allowed to exit the clan's camp without a warrior to take care of him, but Sandpaw, in his great excitement to help his clan mates forgot about that, and entered deeper in the forest. He managed to catch a mouse, but the smell of prey tickling his nose prevented Sandpaw from smelling the storm approaching. Right after, it started to rain heavily, so the apprentice couldn't find the way back to his clan. Sandpaw managed to find a refugee under a huge tree, then, he heard a deafening sound: the tree he sat under was struck by lightning. The mighty tree lit up like a torch. At the sight of the flames and the smell of the fire, Sandpaw's heart froze in terror. He ran away from the fire as fast as he could, but he wasn't fast enough. A burning branch fell over him, almost killing him. Sandpaw felt the flames overwhelming his fur; the air becoming unbreathable. The hot ash entered his eyes, making them tearing and almost blinding him. He felt his death close, then he closed his eyes.
He heard voices from far away, like he was deep in the water. "The spirits of warriors? Did I got into the Star Clan?" He thought for himself. Then, his mind fell into a deep darkness
The next thing Sandpaw could remember was that he woke up in the medicine cat's cave. A strong smell of herbs and burned fur hit him. Then, what he thought to be an awful nightmare turned out to be real. The fire really happened. He could have been dead if they didn't come to save him.
"Oh, you woke up! Thanks to the Star Clan, I thought you'll be sleeping forever." The medicine cat said. You will be alright soon, she promised him. When Sandpaw opened his eyes, he saw blurry. Alarmed, he asked the medicine cat that's happening. "Well, she said, the fire have changed your eyes colour. Your eyes must be dry after all that hot air, but don't worry, you must have your eyesight back in some hours."
Some hours?!?! He won't be able to do anything for the pack until then. He wanted to become a warrior!
A few days passed and Sandpaw was able to see again. But... that wasn't his clan! And that weren't the cats he grew up with! Confused, he wanted to run far away from these strangers. A beautiful lynx looking tom approached to him and smiled.
"I heard you wanted to be a warrior, he said, I think I can help you with this". And he jumped on a rock, and gathered all the cats around him.
Sandpaw couldn't believe his ears! A warrior naming ceremony just for him, organised by some strange cats he just met?
"...I call this apprentice in front of you. He has been training hard to learn your Code. Since now, he will become Burningash. May he serve his clan well, and the spirits be pleased of him!"
All the cats started saying "Burningash, Burningash!"
After the ceremony ended, he went to the leader to ask him what happened.
"... And you were sitting there, almost died. The fire spread very fast, and we barely could reach you on time. There was another cat laying there, I assumed she died trying to save you..."
That must have been his mother. Burningash felt a terrible sadness breaking his heart. His poor mother was the only family he had left. Now she was gone. He requested some help to get to the nearest source of water. The leader offered himself to come with him.
Burningash was sitting on the edge of the lake, looking at the horizon. Somewhere, up there, his mother's spirit was watching him.
He felt extremely tired and thirsty.
Without his mother, that clan was no longer his home, so he decided to stay in this new clan, just to avoid the pain and sadness his mother's death and his disappearing provoked.
When he stepped to the lake and approached to drink some water, he was horrified of what he saw. Not only his eyes changed, but also his fur! He lost a good amount of his beautiful brown fur, and the rest became dark, just like the smoke.
Since then, Burningash's fur is like a ghost from the past he can't get rid of. Its reminding him over and over again of that fatal day. Anything he would do, he couldn't let his past behind...

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Re: Stars #100

Postby I Like Bees » Tue Sep 03, 2019 3:18 am

Reminder that this ends in three days.
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Re: Stars #100

Postby I Like Bees » Sat Sep 07, 2019 12:23 pm

Forgot to post earlier, but this is now closed! I'll try to judge asap.
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Re: Stars #100

Postby Joke's On You » Sat Sep 07, 2019 12:30 pm

Good luck to everyone who entered! c:


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Re: Stars #100

Postby I Like Bees » Mon Sep 16, 2019 1:50 pm

Joke's On You wrote:Username: Joke's On You
Cat Name: Ambergaze
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Clan: Bones of Prey
Age: 24 Moons
Prompt:

Sometimes having a unique coat isn't the best thing that can happen to a cat...

For Ambergaze in particular during a singular humid day in GreenLeaf, this was especially true. And it all started when the rain came down suddenly while Ambergaze was off patrolling her clan's territory. Usually, Ambergaze would refuse to go out in the rain on hot and humid days during GreenLeaf because she had yet to find out how her fur would respond to the mixture of both. But sadly enough, he had no idea what the weather was going to be like for that day, so the rain took her completely by surprise. It was a light rain at first, nothing that worried her at first. But within a few minutes, the rain was coming down hard, soaking all of the cats in the patrol. It rained for the entirety of the patrol before finally letting up as soon as Ambergaze and the patrol returned back to camp. The she-cat huffed with frustration as she immediately went over to the shelter of the warriors den where she began to lick her wet fur thoroughly.

When Ambergaze finished cleaning her coat, she exited the warriors den and was immediately met with the humidity once again. It took her breath away for a moment since she wasn't expecting it considering that the shade of the den helped shade the humidity. It didn't occur to Ambergaze at the time that her fur was still soaked from the rainfall that came down earlier that day. So she sat in direct sunlight basking away.

It didn't take very long for Ambergaze's fur to start to... "poofen up" after that. The cats of the clan all began to notice and were giving worried glances to Ambergaze as if they were trying to ask her if she was alright. Ambergaze noticed these looks from her clanmates and stood up, walking over to look into a puddle that hat formed within the camp. As soon as she looked in, she yowled. Her precious fur! It was ruined! The mixture of rain and humidity had made her look like a giant cotton ball, which was her one true horror. And the worst part about it was that the immense amount of "poof" wasn't going down no matter how hard she tried to work with it. It was truly her worst nightmare. She had to live with her overly-poofy fur all day after she realized after an hour of grooming herself that her fur just wasn't going to cooperate with her. The looks she got from her clanmates all day long were... awful. All she wanted to do was hide away, but she couldn't.

The day that Ambergaze's wet fur mixed with humidity was a terrible, horrible, no good, very bad day.

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Congrats! I loved the creativity and comedy of your idea; it certainly made me laugh!
Enjoy Ambergaze! ^^

I'd also love to award an HM to Alledowaya!
I really loved your story, and your art is beautiful (and very accurate too)!

I'll also be awarding an HM to Alckatraz!
I loved your unique interpretation of this cat's special pelt!
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Re: Stars #100

Postby ARKYQ » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:00 pm

:D You are so lucky!!! Congrats jokes on you! This cat has stolen all of our hearts! :D
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Re: Stars #100

Postby Joke's On You » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:07 pm

Oh my goodness- thank you sooo much!! She is such a beautiful cat. I can't wait to develop her further! I'll take amazing care of her!


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Re: Stars #100

Postby Alledowaya » Tue Sep 17, 2019 3:10 am

Congratulations!!!! Super pretty live you have there! You can use the art as well btw :D.

And thank you bees!
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