Re: Rise | #1135

Postby Schainukan » Tue Nov 13, 2018 12:33 pm

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Cat Name: Jademoon
Clan: Slateclan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Female
Age: 17 Moons
Prompt:
A better question is, who isn't Jademoon's rival? This gal is generally an easily jealous cat, very ambitious and stubborn with an even greater attitude. She possesses a sharp tongue and is known for her sassy remarks and snarky bite. Simply rubbing the pelt of most cats she encounters the wrong way.
It all started with Jademoon being the only kit of a pair of cats that direly wanted little furballs and tried a few times without luck. Obviously, as it finally worked, the lil girl was spoiled rotten. Having no siblings and her parents heading her every call, made her incredibly cocky. It became common to her and she started to want to be the very best of all the other kitten and apprentices.
The more she grew, the more did the rivalry and jealousness, although you'd think she had it all, she kept feeling like something missed, something she couldn't pinpoint, which annoyed her greatly.
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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby .forever. » Tue Nov 13, 2018 5:06 pm

Username: .forever.
Cat Name: Leopardflower
Clan: Tribe of Rushing Waves
Rank: Star Catcher

Gender: Molly
Age: unknown, assumed late 50’s
Prompt:
    Leopardflower has always been her own biggest rival, her own heart and mind tugging away from what she knew she was destined to do. She hadn’t asked for her Ancestors to visit her in her dreams and no matter how many times she tried to block them out, they would always come back...

      “I don’t understand..I’m cursed?” Starry pelts blurred the spotted Molly’s vision as she whipped around trying to find a cat that would give her a decent answer. Nothing but emotionless eyes stared back at her, not one of them daring to meet her gaze.

      “No, not cursed. Gifted.” A starry brown tabby answer her. “This is your destiny Leopardflower, it cannot change.”

      “How is this a gift? Im supposed to be a
      Warrior and now I can’t even be that? You’re saying I can’t even take a mate! Never have kits! How am I supposed to explain this Littlenose? He and I were going to be mates!”

      Uncomfortable paws shifted, the lightness of the world turning to a solemn grey. The Ancestors knew that the warrior in front of them had wanted to pave her own path, but it was time she knew her destiny. Unfortunately there would be no going back from this. This was beyond the powers of the starry cats.
    At first she couldn’t accept what was happening. She felt isolated from her fellow tribe mates and no matter what she did she didn’t feel like she belonged anymore. She was staring to see the Ancestors while she was awake. Though she wasn’t sure if she was hallucinating or if they were actually there guiding her. Eventually she gave in, feeling as if she had lost a battle she was never meant to win.

      “Leopardflower, do you promise to uphold the highest code and preform at the will of The Ancestors?”

      “I do.”

      “Then by the powers of us we formally grant you as Star Catcher. You will now officially be able to speak to us as well translate our will to the living cats.”
    Leopardflower dipped her head, her heart splitting into two at her forever agreement. Had she actually gone insane?
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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby clouds-move-on » Tue Nov 13, 2018 5:49 pm

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Cat Name: Brokenshadow
Clan: NocturneClan
Rank: Warrior, Scout

Gender: tomcat
Age: 15 moons
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A new commandment I give to you, that you love one another; as I have loved you, that you also love one another.
By this all will know that you are My disciples, if you have love for one another.

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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby **Snowwhisper** » Tue Nov 13, 2018 9:18 pm

Username: **Snowwhisper**
Cat Name: Leopardheart
Clan: Frostclan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Female
Age: 33 Moons
Prompt:
Leopardheart's rival is Maplenose, another clan warrior. Leopardheart and Maplenose grew up together and though their mothers were friends, they were not. Everything seemed to come easy to Maplenose, while Leopardheart had to work hard for everything she has. When Maplenose would be praised for her hunting and fighting skills, Leopardheart was always told to try harder. Leopardheart became jealous and it started to fester in her heart as she trained to become a warrior. Leopardheart thought that once they both became warriors the jealousy and need to be better would lessen but it hasn't and to be perfectly honest, Leopardheart doesn't know what to do but to keep going.
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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby NightWolf950 » Wed Nov 14, 2018 5:29 am

Didn't have time to finish. Good luck everyone. <3
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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby Shadowflight13 » Thu Nov 15, 2018 5:31 pm

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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby Shadowflight13 » Sat Nov 17, 2018 7:25 am

orbiting wrote:
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Cat Name: Shinewing
Clan: orbitclan
Rank: warrior

Gender: Female
Age: 27 moons
Prompt:
Shinewing's rival is her mother.
There will never be a time when Shinewing doesn't remember the story of her birth, and the tragedy of two sisters.
When the shadows were long, the trees had lost their leaves and the branches had turned bare and sickly, chills were in the air cascaded by the frigid wind below a sea of completely white clouds, the winter proved itself to be ungiving and cruel.
But inside the hole in the dirt wall, warmth emitted. The warmth of a new mother, lying with her two newborn children
Shinekit and Bristlekit. Completely opposite kits of the same crop. Two siblings that would grow up to band together and love one another with a fiery bond that could only be smothered by -
Mistspots.
She had just given birth to two daughters. Phased by weariness and sloughted by the raw pain of birth, she still remained alert as her two kits suckled at her stomach. Head held up, she paid no attention to the new life suckling from her. Instead her pine green eyes watched the entrance.
And when 4 days passed and the one cat she was desperate to see never showed, Mistspot's heart would turn just as icy as the frozen lake.
The winter left and Shinekit had grown into her mother's coat. Her silver fur, slick and short with her mother's eyes completely contrasted her darling sister's. Bristlekit was a fluffy dark brown tabby with yellow eyes, and had she not been born on Mistspot's kitting day you'd have never known she was her mother's child.
Shinekit looked like her mother.
Bristlekit looked like her father.
Her father, who had never come to see his kits.
Her father, who completely denied they existed.
Her father, who when he had the rotten luck of accidentally laying glaring yellow eyes on his children, shied away in disgust.
Her father, who never loved his mate.
Her father, who had taken a new one; and the name Mistspots, the queen who'd bore his kits, faded away into nothingness in his mind.
Bristlekit was a happy kitten. She never complained and had a wild thirst for adventure. She had a curiosity unlike any other but could restrain herself and obey whenever necessary.
All the warriors fought over who would get to be her mentor.
She was a lively kit who could never stand still.
Why would she get sick in the middle of newleaf?
"Shinekit, go fetch me some more lavender for your sister. Ask the medicine cat for it." Mistspots demanded of her daughter.
Bristlekit lay shivering. Meat had practically fallen off her bones and she was a sack of sickness, the curious light gone from her eyes.
Shinekit didn't want to leave her sister. A bad, bad feeling swelled in her chest. But she obeyed.
Halfway, she listened to her bad feeling. And she ran back.
But when she heard her mother murmuring to her sister, she stopped, and she listened in to the den.
"Forgive me. Or don't. It won't matter anyways..." Her mother said softly.
Shinekit's curiosity overtook her. Without being seen, she peered into the den.
Her mother had prepared a piece of mouse for her sister to eat. Mouse had been recommended from the elders as having healed bones and keeping kittens strong.
Maybe it was nothing. I should go back.
But - 'forgive me?'

Shinekit kept watching.
She watched as her mother peeled back a piece of mudded stick that kept up the nursery. She peeled it back and with a paw, she pulled out two ripe red berries, swelling with something vicious.
Deathberries.
Shinekit could only watch in horror as her mother squeezed the berry's juice on the mouse flesh; and she woke her daughter with a paw, motioning to it.
"Eat it. Go ahead - you need to get stronger."
Shinekit was paralyzed in fear. She could do nothing but watch and pray her sister wouldn't dare touch the mouse's meat.
But her forgiving, loving, caring and innocent sister had no reason not to trust her mother.
So she ate it in quick bites, and looked up at her mother. "Thank you," she murmured.
"You're welcome, darling...
You know, you look so much like your father."
Shinekit became Shinepaw and then Shinewing. Bristlekit would never get to know her warrior name, or the joys of being an apprentice.
Shook to the core by her incompetence and not being able to save her sister - a guilt she would weep about everyday and feel guilt in her heart about forever - Shinewing looks in the river at her reflection and sees two things.
A coward.
And her mother. After all, they are practically identical.
She has no idea which one she hates more.


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Re: Rise | #1135

Postby orbiting » Sat Nov 17, 2018 7:35 am

Thank you so much! She will be my first clan cat I’ve ever won! <333
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