Re: Rise | #845

Postby CertainNorth » Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:00 am

Congrats! This was beautifully described and I like that it's a bit of a different take haha.

Placebo wrote:
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Cat Name: Jaggedcreek
Clan: Floodclan
Rank: Senior Warrior (Sub Rank: Scout)

Gender: Male
Age: 65 moons

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The loam of the earth squelches underneath his every step in the Wetlands. Jaggedcreek adores it. He can’t imagine how he survived in the past without the wet landscape around him.

In wetleaf, Floodclan migrates west to escape the flood waters, but Jaggedcreek? Well... on the cusp of mornings, when most of his clanmates are commonly settling in to escape the oncoming heat of day, he admits to sneaking back into the heart of the fen. When he reaches the marshes, dawn rays illuminate the ground and grasses in some of the prettiest ways he’s ever seen... though ground might be a misnomer, especially when that soft, pliable ground gives way under his paws and makes his wet fur wetter. Good of a time as any to take a swim, in his opinion! Thank Starclan no one’s usually around to see his blunders...

Well, no matter-- Jaggedcreek simply shakes off the ‘miscalculation’ and treads along. Swish... Swish. He pauses in the shallow flood waters and takes in his surroundings again. The sunbeams reflect off the watery floor amid the aquatic plants like a million tiny crystals. Amongst the reeds, Jaggedcreek can’t help but stand in awe of the sight.

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Re: Rise | #845

Postby Placebo » Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:08 am

;w; Thank you so, so much Ten!
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