by fromage » Fri Jun 15, 2018 10:55 pm
name: Stellan Foxun(Fox) || gender: Male
What's the most mischievous thing this dude has done, and are they normally a trouble maker?
Fox is more than a "normally a troublemaker", he was when he was younger; but it turned into adding more crimes to his history. He grew up with loving parents, but it was his problem when he accidentally broke into a gang hideout thinking the building were abandoned. Not only the gang leader beat the kid up; he turned Fox into gem mule. It turned into a secretive lifestyle for a long while; just smuggling rarest gems and trading them for currency all over the world. It required him to be away from home a lot, from his increasingly worried parents.
One day, right after successfully trading a perfect cut red diamond, he came to realization that nothing was holding him back. He didn't sign a contract with the gang, he just stayed because his teenage mind was scared of everything the leader could do. Being away from home a lot, he didn't have time to grieve over his parents' death. He had nothing to lose at this point except for his life.
If he thought being a gem mule was the most law breaking thing he ever done; nothing compared to when he went back home and went straight for leader's secretive home life. He sat down on a chair, feeding lies to the wife about how he's a good friend, he needed a place to stay for a night, complimented her cooking(it was burned, it wasn't good). He made good friends with the lady, but he couldn't expect what would happen later.
Fox turned his head with sly smile as the leader barged in his own home, both of them knowing full well that Fox was supposed to report about his successful gem delivery hours ago. He kept the smile up, if not a little wider when he faced a gun. He had truly expected for the man to shoot him, but he didn't expect the wife to jump in front of the bullet. Her beautiful white shawl stained with blood, uttering words to the visitor, telling him to run.
"Foolish lady, thanks to you, you made this plan better." The viscet thought to himself as he jumped through window and left, not without looking back to witness the leader breaking over his sweetheart's death. He headed for at the moment empty hideout, stealing their entire gem stash and currency before going on the run. He had always considered going on permanent vacation, anyway, so it's a wonderful timing to do so. He heard about this one vacation spot; sounds crowded but perfect to lay low for a while.
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extras: (notes to myself; only 2- 300 words or 1 art each)
Extras: fast forward five years later.
THE AEORIA AERIAL wrote:"YATELL PILLAGER APPREHENDED"
Stellan Foxun, or better known as his famous alias; Fox, has been found and arrested today as of July 06, XX45. Us in Aeoria have been terrified by a mysterious criminal for three years, whom not only rob buildings of wealthy, but also uses violence to get what he desires. It is rumored that this act is influenced by a former gang, Deathbone where Stellan served as a gem mule. "The kid.. I never meant to make him so violent; I don't know what caused him to act like this," the ex-leader, [REDACTED] has this to say about his crimes. The former gang members had different comments although, remembering him to be aggressive and drawn towards guns. At end of the day, it's important for us to feel freed and secured. Stellan Foxun will serve a lifetime sentence at Silvmor to ensure that his crimes won't resume anywhere else including Aeoria.
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by corrosive_limes » Mon Jun 18, 2018 4:02 pm
name ;; Lorvan Alfarmando Faus'astjhof Abracchus
gender ;; what's the most mischievous thing this dude has done, and are they normally a trouble maker? ;;
-----The soft warm light of dawn could be seen illuminating the tops of the trees over the horizon. The town was just starting to wake up, and some of the shopkeepers began to quietly go about their business, setting things up for the day. Lorvan was standing in the shadows near one of the venders with his gang, looking for their victim of the day. Among the quiet murmuring from the shopkeepers, he heard the soft sound of approaching paws. He glanced over his shoulder to see who it was, and let out a gleeful laugh.
-----"Hey guys! Look who decided to show up early today!"
-----Tokala just flattened his ears and kept walking, but Lorvan wasn't interested in letting him get away that easily.
-----"Aww, not even a hello? What, do you think you're better than me, street-rat?" he called out as Tokala walked past. No response, but Lorvan thought he heard him growl.
-----"Hey! I asked you a question! You deaf now too? You don't ignore the top percent!" Lorvan grabbed Tokala by the shoulder and spun him around to face him. Tokala snapped.
-----"Top percent of what? Being a huge piece of wolf dung? Your parents must be sooo proud of you."
-----Lorvan's fur spiked up in anger and he snarled. "Oh, you asked for it you snide brat!"
-----Lorvan lunged for Tokala's ear but Tokala snapped at his face and backed up several paces. Lorvan's gang hooted and cheered, circling the two sparring Viscets.
-----Tokala charged Lorvan and managed to sink his teeth into his arm, and Lorvan yelped in surprise. He snapped at Tokala's muzzle and kicked him away, causing him to stumble backwards. Lorvan saw one of his gang step up behind Tokala and was about to grab him by the arms to prevent him from fighting back when the fight was interrupted by a loud, "HEY!"
-----Simultaneously, they all turned to look for the source of the voice. One of the town guards was approaching with a stern look in his eye.
-----"What in the name of the gods is going on here?" he demanded, and Lorvan's demeanor instantly changed. He pressed his ears back against his head and adopted a pleading, almost distressed expression.
-----"I was just waiting by the stalls, minding my own business, when he came out of nowhere and attacked me!" Lorvan cried before Tokala had even the slightest chance to tell his side of the story.
-----The guard turned to Tokala. "Is that true?"
-----Tokala stammered, but before he could say anything, the rest of Lorvan's gang chimed in confirming what Lorvan had said, as per routine. The guard narrowed his eyes.
-----"Young man, this was your last chance and you blew it. I'll have to alert the mayor. I expect your bags to be packed by sundown."
-----With his words still hanging in the early morning air, he turned and left.
-----Lorvan smirked at Tokala, who was absolutely thunderstruck.
-----"So long, street-rat."
-----Tokala just glared right back.
extras ;;
about him ;;
word count ;; 10 + 290 /300
sly ;; cunning ;; harsh ;; cruel ;; unempathetic ;; dominant ;; aggressive ;; leader ;; smug ;; selfish
-----Lorvan is a little bit more than just a troublemaker. He's much less the "harmless prankster" type and much more the "town bully" type of troublemaker. He does do pranks, but they're less "fill your room with cups of water" and more "lock you in the closet for hours", and he gets away with it because he's the son of a very wealthy noble. Lorvan's father is good friends with the mayor and also provides most of the funding for town projects and businesses. Because of this, he grew up sheltered and almost spoiled by the villagers, which led to him developing quite a sense of entitlement.
-----Lorvan grew used to getting his way and getting away with it and ultimately became cruel and selfish, not seeing the consequences of his actions. Over time, he became the leader of a gang of bullies. The "bad kids", if you will. They started picking on younger and poorer Viscets, all the while with Lorvan bragging about how rich his dad was.
-----One of Lorvan's favorite victims was Tokala. Tokala's family was very poor, even with Tokala and his father working tirelessly around the clock to earn money. Tokala also just so happened to have a very short temper, and Lorvan would always delight in teasing him and harassing him until he took the bait and snapped. Lorvan quickly learned how to press Tokala's buttons, and it wasn't uncommon for the two to come to blows. Every time, Lorvan would always go to an adult - usually his mother or the mayor's wife - telling them how Tokala had attacked him, and they would believe him.
-----Eventually this happened enough times that Tokala was given an ultimatum.
----------Stop picking fights or be forced to leave.
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by corrosive_limes » Fri Jun 22, 2018 12:36 pm
good luck! <3
everyone's forms look so good!
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by magpiemochi. » Sat Jun 30, 2018 5:23 am
corrosive_limes wrote:name ;; Lorvan Alfarmando Faus'astjhof Abracchus
gender ;; what's the most mischievous thing this dude has done, and are they normally a trouble maker? ;;
-----The soft warm light of dawn could be seen illuminating the tops of the trees over the horizon. The town was just starting to wake up, and some of the shopkeepers began to quietly go about their business, setting things up for the day. Lorvan was standing in the shadows near one of the venders with his gang, looking for their victim of the day. Among the quiet murmuring from the shopkeepers, he heard the soft sound of approaching paws. He glanced over his shoulder to see who it was, and let out a gleeful laugh.
-----"Hey guys! Look who decided to show up early today!"
-----Tokala just flattened his ears and kept walking, but Lorvan wasn't interested in letting him get away that easily.
-----"Aww, not even a hello? What, do you think you're better than me, street-rat?" he called out as Tokala walked past. No response, but Lorvan thought he heard him growl.
-----"Hey! I asked you a question! You deaf now too? You don't ignore the top percent!" Lorvan grabbed Tokala by the shoulder and spun him around to face him. Tokala snapped.
-----"Top percent of what? Being a huge piece of wolf dung? Your parents must be sooo proud of you."
-----Lorvan's fur spiked up in anger and he snarled. "Oh, you asked for it you snide brat!"
-----Lorvan lunged for Tokala's ear but Tokala snapped at his face and backed up several paces. Lorvan's gang hooted and cheered, circling the two sparring Viscets.
-----Tokala charged Lorvan and managed to sink his teeth into his arm, and Lorvan yelped in surprise. He snapped at Tokala's muzzle and kicked him away, causing him to stumble backwards. Lorvan saw one of his gang step up behind Tokala and was about to grab him by the arms to prevent him from fighting back when the fight was interrupted by a loud, "HEY!"
-----Simultaneously, they all turned to look for the source of the voice. One of the town guards was approaching with a stern look in his eye.
-----"What in the name of the gods is going on here?" he demanded, and Lorvan's demeanor instantly changed. He pressed his ears back against his head and adopted a pleading, almost distressed expression.
-----"I was just waiting by the stalls, minding my own business, when he came out of nowhere and attacked me!" Lorvan cried before Tokala had even the slightest chance to tell his side of the story.
-----The guard turned to Tokala. "Is that true?"
-----Tokala stammered, but before he could say anything, the rest of Lorvan's gang chimed in confirming what Lorvan had said, as per routine. The guard narrowed his eyes.
-----"Young man, this was your last chance and you blew it. I'll have to alert the mayor. I expect your bags to be packed by sundown."
-----With his words still hanging in the early morning air, he turned and left.
-----Lorvan smirked at Tokala, who was absolutely thunderstruck.
-----"So long, street-rat."
-----Tokala just glared right back.
extras ;;
about him ;;
word count ;; 10 + 290 /300
sly ;; cunning ;; harsh ;; cruel ;; unempathetic ;; dominant ;; aggressive ;; leader ;; smug ;; selfish
-----Lorvan is a little bit more than just a troublemaker. He's much less the "harmless prankster" type and much more the "town bully" type of troublemaker. He does do pranks, but they're less "fill your room with cups of water" and more "lock you in the closet for hours", and he gets away with it because he's the son of a very wealthy noble. Lorvan's father is good friends with the mayor and also provides most of the funding for town projects and businesses. Because of this, he grew up sheltered and almost spoiled by the villagers, which led to him developing quite a sense of entitlement.
-----Lorvan grew used to getting his way and getting away with it and ultimately became cruel and selfish, not seeing the consequences of his actions. Over time, he became the leader of a gang of bullies. The "bad kids", if you will. They started picking on younger and poorer Viscets, all the while with Lorvan bragging about how rich his dad was.
-----One of Lorvan's favorite victims was Tokala. Tokala's family was very poor, even with Tokala and his father working tirelessly around the clock to earn money. Tokala also just so happened to have a very short temper, and Lorvan would always delight in teasing him and harassing him until he took the bait and snapped. Lorvan quickly learned how to press Tokala's buttons, and it wasn't uncommon for the two to come to blows. Every time, Lorvan would always go to an adult - usually his mother or the mayor's wife - telling them how Tokala had attacked him, and they would believe him.
-----Eventually this happened enough times that Tokala was given an ultimatum.
----------Stop picking fights or be forced to leave.
congratulations!! I felt as though the form flowed really well, and the art that went with it was great too!
I'd also like to reward mareep and Golden-Boy with 2 stubs!! I had a tough time picking between the three of you; all of your forms were honestly so great!
Thank you so much for entering, guys! Everyone did awesome ;u;
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by corrosive_limes » Sat Jun 30, 2018 5:44 am
ahh thank you so much! <33 this troublemaker will be well taken care of <3
@mareep - I really liked the story you wrote for Fox :0 i felt it left on quite a cliffhanger and i would've been interested to see where it went next!
@Gleon - i very much enjoyed the story of Zombie riding a dolphin! XD such a creative challenge. i also like the origin of his name!
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